A Trapped Bird - Updated Part 17 + 18 - Page 21

Oh please write the next one soon!

Sorry guys, for not continuing this fan fiction for long, I'm contemplating on closing this one, and writing a new one...well..let's see if I can rejuvenate my interest in this fan fiction, I will write up the next part as soon as I get time and when my fan fiction feel envelopes me in its charm! 😛

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

soni..ur a amazing writer..i read sum parts of ur fan-fic..continue..u have got a gud flow of creativity! 😳 😳

Trapped Bird: Part Fifteen
Meri zindagi kora kagaz...

Vidya almost stumbles over a rock, shaking from head to toe...Although tears didn't drip from her eyes, she could feel her heart bleeding, as her mind drived in circles...She forced a smile, as much as it hurt, it would've been more humiliating and hurtful, had she cried right there and then in front of Karthik and "him" with Snigda and some other girl throwing herself at "him" She mentally kicked herself for having allowed herself to think of another man when she's married, and such a man who she dislikes tremendously...but then why..oh why did it hurt to see another woman hugging him and he reciprocating her cheerfulness and hug?

Sagar:"Hey Vid..ya"
She bit her lip almost tasting the fresh blood on her lips, she still managed a fake smile.."Hi...aap log yahan? ek doosre ko jaante hain?"
Karthik looks on confused:..."Tum log kya pehle mil chuke ho?"
Then Karthik daggers at Sagar piercingly, Sagar quickly says::..."woh...haan kuch hi din pehle meele the" and then pushing his hands in his pockets, finding himself to be in a awkward position...
Sagar says"Ah garmi bohoth hain na? toh race shuru kare? ya abhi se haar maan gaye?" and then proceeds towards the stables
Karthik: "Hum aur hum? Sagar mazaak karahe ho na? Agar haar maan na hi hota..toh main tumhe yahan bulaata kyun?" Karthik too joins in the stable..

On the other hand, Vidya shifts her foot from one side to the other, feeling awkward, standing with her husband's girlfriend and her...her what? He is nothing to her, so why...She thought to herself how shameless her husband was but luckily she wasn't in love with Karthik to be agonized by this fact..yet she decided to stay on, to find out how "him" or his name was Sagar right? that's what Karthik had said...She really wanted to know they knew each other...Out of the corner of her eye, she noticed Snigda roll her eyes, and then seat herself on a straw chair...followed suit was the "other" woman...

The two men then came out of the stable, walking two fine golden brown horses...they then seated themselves on their own horses...
Snida yelled "On your marks get se goo" and whistled...

The race began, both horses competing fiercely unable to beat the otherr...slowly Karthik's horse began to take over..infuriating the other horse, which slowly began to catch up, and soon took over the Karthik's horse by far..Vidya allowed excitement and joy build up inside of her watching "him" winning..convincing herself that it was just a game, and one loses and wins, doesn't matter who it is...

Preview: Karthik is suspicious of what Sagar is upto, on the other hand, Vidya is pained and jealous to see Sagar dancing away to glory with another woman!

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

Whooo Hooo! Soni you updated!! 😊 I really liked this episode! 😉

SOni ji!!! *cheers* *hug* You updated..!! Hailaaaa...... you've made me extremely happy.. we've got to have so many treats from you today!! 😳 🤗

And what a great update... eww, Snigda, good you picked her name because it matches her personality 🤢 😛

Wow! And i can literally feel the jealousy Vidya's feeling, and hmm for some reason I blushed when Sagar put his hands in his pockets and said "hum pehle se mil chuke hain".... could imagine it as being really handsome. 😳

It's such a lovely update, can't wait to see more soon!!

EDIT - Ohh, just read it again, Sagar is with another girl too? ahh so that's why there was jealousy.. oohh, very spicy....😳

Yay!!! You updated! I waas starting to wonder you know... 😳 Great episode! 👏 👏 👏 I lubbed it! but too short! I hope a short chapter means you will update soon? 😉

Gaurie

[:D/] u updated!!!!!!!!!! ye ye yeh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was amazed to see Trapped bird again on homepage of BMTD................ thanks dear!!!!!!!!!! it was as usual rocking!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

omg soni...just read this fanfic of urs..in one go..i dunno why i never read this one bfr....silly me..lol...but why did u stop? plssssss continue na...plssss....i luv it... 😛

oh and one more thing i learned frm this ff is...how many gujju's we have on this forum...everyone...im gujju too...100% gujarati... 😊

Shaili