A Trapped Bird - Updated Part 17 + 18 - Page 18

Originally posted by: sania_12

wow, omg, great chapter!! 😃

Thankoo Sania!😳

keep smiling...

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Soni

OMG SONI!!!! YOU ROCK AT WRITING!!! 👏 👏 👏 That was an amazing update 😃

yourmom: Thankoo! 😳

rushvi: aww thankoo! 😳

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

Hailaaaa Soni ji, first of all, it's long and i am SO happy that you made it that way..!!! 😳

Hailaa.... this episode... full of emotions, cuteness, everything... the SV scene was so adorable, Sagar's feeble excuses 😳 😆 and their hands "finding each other".... uff!

The party... would love to see anger in Sagar's eyes, for some reason i think that would look so handsome on him... and tried to drink away the thoughts of Vidya.... uff, you just wrote it so well, i could see everything happening and could literally feel the emotions !!

And one thing... I was listening to "kyun aaj khal neend..." while i was reading ur FF!!! And you had it there!! 😆 baap re, i literally jumped, almost as if you were reading my mind or something 😆 and btw what a perfect song for it !!

The last part, ooohhh, you left us in complete suspence... it was Karthik!! Hmm... wonder with Sagar will do now 😳 a drastic change, oohh, so many things to think about!

Sorry if im rambling!!

And omgggg, Vidya winking at Sagar 😆 😆 😆 that was hilarious, i can soo imagine that happening..!!! Made me laugh, too funny!! 😆 😆

soniji tumare likneki adda per hum tumper kurban hogaye.
honey so many suprises in ur ff,sagar wants to take revenge on kartick and kartick is so friendly and concered about sagr aakir mazzra kya hai sweety i hope u will clarify my doughts in next ff.intezar bahut karwathiho tumare updates keliye aisa mathkara honey 😳
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ya seriously!!!!!!!!!!! u have so many surprised in ur FF. i m really addicted to ur FF. but to tell u frankly, after u told me that u have stopped many FF's in between, everytime i read ur new episode, some hidden fear tells me may be this is the last!!!!!!!! 😭 even though hamane aapko dhamaki to di thi that i am going to throw chappals at u, i m still so afraid!!!!!!!!!!! 😭

btw, u left me in total confusion!!!!!!!!! if i m not wrong, karthik was supposed to be a bad guy!!!!!!!!! or did u make him sth like angad???? bad with girls, but a real good chap at heart????? i m clueless, but i m sure there wud b a good explanation in ur next episode (or later if u wanna keep it as a surprise element).......

Ammu: you're so sweet yaar! 😳 you always make me go tomato red with your words! 😳 aah dekha great minds think alike, no wonder we both thought of kya mujhe pyaar hai... 😛 about the wink scene, I was thinking of SRK0Kajol in KKHH 😆 😳 😛

Sum: awww thankooo for your lovely comments! 😳 sorry yaar...soni ke nakhre bohoth hothe hai isiliye ithni der karti hai likne mein!

Lajja: aww thankoo for your lovely words! 😳 you can tell I love mysteries 😉 aww...am trying hard not to abandon this one until it reaches a conclusion! so no fikars okay 😛 arre yaar to tell you the truth I never really thought what I will do with Karthik, in fact am confused with his character too... 😆 I just added him to add some spice on impulse... 😆 😛

Haila! You updated your FF aur mujhe pata hi nahin. 😭 😭 I'll read it soon!! Hehe...can't wait. 😃

Another piece of fascinating writing!!!! 👏 👏 👏 Vidya winking...haha!!! Now that would be a revelation. So karthik isn't Vidya's hubby right???

Can't wait for the next one!!!