A Trapped Bird - Updated Part 17 + 18 - Page 16

Originally posted by: soni595

aaah so you're all prepared😆 if that present is still holding it's magic, then that means I will have to work extra hard on the next one to stand par with the previous one!😳

But it's only holding its magic for sometime😳😆 after today, the magic will only be in my mind... which means we need more !! You dun need to work really hard.... it comes naturally..... haiiiii can't wait for the next episode !!😳

soniji please update ur ff,we r waiting for the update,please dont torture us my patience is running out,please please update it as soon as possible 😭

wheres the update
i am jsut sitting here and waiting

Trapped Bird - Part Twelve

(When sleep is filled with new dreams, apetites no more matter and the heart sings)

She looked in the mirror, and saw him…His smoky black eyes gazed at her with drowning passion that consumed her…The wind blew through his half open white shirt and her heart skipped a beat…. She wanted to switch off the radio as she heard the next song playing "Jab dil mile...mile gul kile.." but couldn't as her body felt so weak...He came towards the bed, and sat next to her…but she shyly glanced away, smiling softly and feeling her cheeks become warm by his closeness…He fingered through a few strands of her hair that lay in front of her eyes, and pushed them behind her ears…Her heart plummeting inside of her, she slowly looked into his eyes…letting herself drown into them…

His eyes were like magnets that automatically drew her towards him…He slipped his arm around her tiny waist, and pulled her close to him…and breathed into her, then rested his forehead against hers...She lifted up one of her shaking arms, and touched his shoulder slightly…He then drew his lips towards hers…and she tightened her grip on his shoulder, and gripped her bed sheet with the other hand, as she drowned into a sea of zealous passion and love…

*tink* *tink* and then a continuous round of tapping...adrenaline pumped in, sweat prickled down, as she was jolted so abruptly from her thoughts...Her eyes widened at what she saw on her window sill...He was there, in front of her window on a ladder, looking impatient, and tired...She hopped off her bed slightly slipping on the floor but caught herself, and opened the window..."What...what are you doing here?" she whispered..He groaned gaily "Help me up first, I've been waiting for you to open the window for like so long." She took his hand, and pulled him up, only to be overpowered by his weight, and with a groan, she lost his grip and they both fell down on the floor...and he fell on top of her...

He then hoisted himself up a bit, so he could get a closer look at her...She was beautiful no doubt, her eyes sparkled whenever she was anxious or excited, and her lips quivered whenever he got closer to her...He looked into her eyes..and moved slightly closer...She looked into his eyes too and drowned inside of them..it was as if his eyes invited her to another world that left this world behind! Her heart plumetted inside of her, yet she tried to control her rapid breathing...He then used the floor as support, and hoisted himself up, and pulled her up...She felt her heart sink, yet cursed herself for feeling that way...

To be continued...

PS:Thank you Ammu, Lajja, Rushvi, Sum, Jigna for all your wonderful comments!

I know it's a really short part compared to the others, and not much happens, but the next part will surely be masaaledaar!

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

Soniji, please take my following comments as PRAISE:

I hate you for not writing your episodes 24/7!!! 😆 😳 God you are just the best dude!!!! Its so amazing, you get drowned in to the narrative. Make the next one longer pleaseeeeeeeee!!!!! Too damn good!!!

Saagar and Vidya rock!!! 😳 😳 😳 And so does our Soniji!!! 👏 👏

Originally posted by: *Reemz*

Soniji, please take my following comments as PRAISE:

I hate you for not writing your episodes 24/7!!! 😆 😳 God you are just the best dude!!!! Its so amazing, you get drowned in to the narrative. Make the next one longer pleaseeeeeeeee!!!!! Too damn good!!!

Saagar and Vidya rock!!! 😳 😳 😳 And so does our Soniji!!! 👏 👏

aww Reemz! Thankooo! You're so sweet! But, I can say the same thing to you, when are you going to update your lovely fan fiction?😳 😛 You too are one of the best writers! now you're making me blush again😳 dekho, it's going tomato red again😆 But haan, SV do rock, they rock indian tellydom!

I'm doing it now! Hehe, you lot inspire me to write mine again. I think you are wonderful with describing emotions and situations where I look at the dialogues more I guess.

Whens your next one??? 😃 😛

Originally posted by: *Reemz*

I'm doing it now! Hehe, you lot inspire me to write mine again. I think you are wonderful with describing emotions and situations where I look at the dialogues more I guess.

Whens your next one??? 😃 😛

yayyyy!! I'm eagerly awaiting your part! You write well too, I'm not so good with dialogues, so I don't write much of them, but you on the other hand, it's good that you concentrate on them, cause you're good at it! Dialogues make people and a scene come alive! My next one is..ummm...tomorrow or Tuesday!😛

Tomorrow is fine thank you very much!!! 😛 Well I hope you can anyway. I'll be waiting!!! Hopefully I'll have mine done in about 1/2 hr. 😉

Aaah, will definitely be around to read yours...I want this 1/2 hour to breeze through quickly! 😛