Phirse Hua Pyaar: SV FF Updated on Pg. 24 - Page 15

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow, gr8 part wafah ji! 👏 i luv how u describe all the intimate scenes between SV so well 😳 ur an awesum writer!!! 👏 do continue soon 😛




-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
Haila Wafah ji....... uff!! the awkwardness is so real, but i loved the last scene... what a dream 😳 😳 if only that would really happen... too good, as usual!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh my! Wafahji that was the best! You really have a wonderful talent in writing! I loooved it!!! 😊 I really can't wait for the next part.😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks once again all of you...for all your lovely reviews...I'll post the update soon...
Edited by Wafah - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Cool! Can't wait for the update. 😊 😳 I wonder what Sagar's reaction will be. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow waafa ji
thanks for updating n plz countinue soon
luv the description its really gud n i can picture it

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Posted: 18 years ago

Saagar reached for what he thought was his pillow to tug it close, but instead of fabric his arm came in contact with warm skin. Saagar opened his eyes, and found himself staring at Vidya, snuggled close to him, her head resting against his other arm.

He didn't know what to make of it, and he wondered how she'd ended up on his bed. He tried to pull his arm away from underneath her, but then decided to wait till she got up.

As he lay there waiting, he took the time to study Vidya. Sleeping there, with her lashes fanning her her upper cheeks, her hair loosely framing her features, she looked beautiful. On instinct, he reached out with his fingers to tuck an idle strand behind her ear.

His touch brought a smile to her face, and she moved in closer. Her hands curled into soft fists against his bare chest, and she nestled her head beneath his chin, against his neck.

Saagar inhaled sharply, as he felt his heart squeeze a little. His sudden intake woke Vidya.

Vidya opened her eyes and for a second felt lost. She blushed as she realized how close she was to Saagar. She slowly inched backwards so as not to wake Saagar.

Moving back she realized that Saagar was already awake, and staring at her. She held his gaze for a minute then turned away, blushing crimson.

Saagar smiled, surprising himself. He'd never met anyone so formal, and who blushed at the slightest discretion.

Vidya rose, and attempted to straighten her hair that had come loose. She tied a quick bun, and then tried to get up from the bed only to be pulled back by her pallo. She turned around and looked at Saagar, but he'd apparently turned away and gone back to sleep.

She noticed the the end of her pallo was stuck beneath him with the tangle of sheets around him. She tugged it towards her but it refused to budge under Saagar's weight.

Saagar turned around, and looked at Vidya. "What are you doing?"

Vidya, "Ji mera, woh..." She motioned to her pallo.

"Oh" Saagar rose from the bed. "Sorry." He walked towards his closet to get his towel.

"Main Jaaon"

Saagar looked at Vidya, "Yeah...Jaoon...Maine rok ke nahin rakha hai."

"Nahin...aapke bathroom.."

"In this big house....doosra bathroom nahi hai kya?"

"Woh meri cheeze undar..." She pointed towards the bathroom.

"Fine. Go. Jao." Saagar took the towel and dumped it on the bed taking a seat on the bed.

"Humein bas paach minute chahiye." She smiles slightly.

Five minutes later as promised Vidya came out, towel in her hand, and nearly bumped into Saagar, who grabbed her to stop her from clashing into him.

"..and yet again..." Saagar smiled "I've got to stop running into you like this."

Surili walked into the door at that moment, and scowled at the scene in front of her. Saagar's arms were placed agianst Vidya's elbows, whereas Vidya's palms was placed against Saagar's chest.

She puposefully walked towards Saagar, and between him and Vidya before adressing him.

"Saagar, tumhe pataa hai ki kal kya hai?"

Vidya moved away quietly and headed out. Saagar was about to stop her but Surili distracted him.

"Saagar where is your attention? Kal bahut khaas din hai. You remember right?"

Saagar looked at Surili confused.

"It's my birthday sweetheart. Don't tell me you forgot. Ofcourse not. I'm sure you'll plan something special and extravagant for me."

"Sure. Now can I go for my shower, kuch kapde pahen loo?"

"Sure. I'll wait here." She smiled at him. She thought to herself as Saagar left, that she would break Saagar's and Vidya's marriage at all costs.

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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part wafah ji....glad u updated.... 😛
ooo....so sagar's beginning to like vidya 😳 grrrrr surili, she always makes my blood boil....she shud get the award for most annoying negative character 😡


-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
i'm reli glad u updated, it waz reli gud ,hpe u update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely part wafah ji!!that's making me blush!!
😳 😳 😳
-Tiya

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