'She’s mine'- FF- Updated (Pg102) - Page 10

omg! the wink!!! 😉 aahhhhhhhhhaaahhhHHHHH!!!!! the wink! imagine it!!!! it wud be sooooooooooo cute if tht happend in real life!!....i feel like going to sharad and divyanka and tell them to act out all these cute fan-fics..and cute scene game scenes!! my god! tht wud just bee tooo perfect 😳

wow reemz you are really good
i must say you are an awsome writer
i really liked watever you have write so far
thankyou so much
i hope BMTD ends this way
thx agian 👏

wow!
awesome!
just read the whole thing in one go!
i wish you would write a FF for Kasam Se
man didnt realize i was missing out this much!
continue soon!

Gr8 work yaar! Im in luv wid this ff!

Episode 9

Vidya storms past the smirking Saagar, Kaushalya walks up to him.

Kaushalya: (Worriedly) Chote Thakhur yeh sab

Saagar: (holds his hands together) Agar aapki ijazat ho toh mein apni dulhan ko ghar le jaa sakta hu?

Kaushalya: (smiles with tears flowing then stops thinking about Vidya's behaviour) Lekin Chote Thakhur…

Saagar: (frowns) Yeh Chote Thakur kaun hai? (looks around jokingly) Mein aapka beta hu. (Kaushalya smiles gleefully) ….Haa ab bataye?

Kaushalya: (looks down) Woh beta….(looks up again) Vidya to iss waqt-

Saagar takes her inside, by the shoulder and explains…

Saagar: Vidya iss waqt naraaz hai aur uska haq bhi banta hai. (turns to face her) Lekin aap fikar mat kijiye…main aa gaya hu na. Sab teekh ho jayega….woh Vidya kya kehti hai? (smiles so beautifully) Haa! Shambhunath sab teekh kar dege!

Kaushalya pleasingly blesses her son-in-law.

Saagar: Acha ab yeh bataye ke Vidya ka kamra kaha hai?

Kaushalya: Waha (points to the far left of the house). Lekin beta woh tumhe waha pe nahin-

Saagar: (calmly) Pata hai. Lekin sone se pehle aur subhe jaagne ke baad mein uska chehra pehle dekhna chahta hu.

Kaushalya: (is touched by Saagar's words) Aao… Mein tumhara kamra dikhati hu.

Saagar: (all happy) Chaliye!

Kaushalya takes him to the room right next to Vidya's which makes Saagar happier.

Saagar: You rock Sasuma!! (kaushalya doesn't get a word of that) Mera matlab aap ka bahut bahut (forgets his hindi) dhanyevaad.

Kaushalya: (laughs a little, turns away then remembers) Aur haa beta….Agar tumhe Vidya ko subhe dekhna hai toh tumhe paanch baje uthna parega. (Saagar's face drops) Woh savere Gangaji mein snahn karne jaati hai.

Saagar: (frightful tone) Kya???

Kaushalya: (Smiles more) Agar aapko kisi cheez ke zaroorat ho toh humein khedena.

Saagar nods his head still wondering how on earth he will get up so early. Kaushalya leaves the room. Saagar sits on the bed and conspires…

Saagar: (puts his chin on his hands) Saagar beta agar tujhe Vidya ko impress karna hai toh uske tor tareeke jaane hoge. Jaldi soja!!! (He's about to just drop down on to the bed from extreme exhaustion of the trip but then he gets up) Uh-huh! Pehle Vidya ko dekhu ga phir mein araam se soh paooga.

He quickly gets up, first peeps round to see if Vidya is around or not and then slowly walks out of the room. Saagar tip-toes to her room and observes that the door is slightly open, he peeps in but doesn't see anything. He's confused and disappointed…. when he hears a harsh voice.

Vidya: Aap yaha kya karahe hai?

Saagar still has his head in the doorway and he realises that Vidya is behind him. He slowly turns round to see Vidya standing there, Saagar gives an uncomfortable laugh.

Saagar: (smiles fakely) Hello (vidya frowns)

Vidya: (concerned) Aap yeh sab kyon karahe hai?

Saagar: (crosses his arms) Kyon ki tum mujhse pyar karti ho and I love you too.

Vidya sighs and closes her eyes for a second, then walks past him, closing the door on him. She leans back on the door and begins to shed tears, Saagar stops smiling as he turns round and kisses the door at where Vidya's head would be, as if he knew Vidya's condition. Vidya feels some familiar touch, she looks back cautiously and involuntarily calms down.

Saagar is back in his room and prepares to sleep. He lies down trying hard to close his eyes as he remembers that tomorrow he has to be up very early….even before Vidya.

Princi The higher authorities are in my hands as well *evil laugh* Including you!!!! 😛

brightk Thank you for the compliments. Though I don't wish Dulhann ends this way...it still has to continue! 😉 For a looooooong time. 😃

Jigna_07 Heya hun. LOL, I think my FF would get lost somewhere in the KS section, don't you think? 😆 Glad you enjoyed it though. 😊

Thanks once again Maham and Zoe for appreciating my work! 😃 😃 😃

great fan fic reemz...you write really well..
me waiting for the next part

great fan fic reemz...you write really well..
me waiting for the next part

wow! i am waiting impatiently for next episode of 'she's mine'. 😊