Hum Dil de chuke sanam(ff)part36 april 28, page 28 - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG really good update
so the children are going to meet but what about the parents?
well i loved the update
i liked how you explained the way sanvi and saniv feel without one of their parents
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kirancanada1

OMG really good update
so the children are going to meet but what about the parents?
well i loved the update
i liked how you explained the way sanvi and saniv feel without one of their parents

I;m a devil but you'll see what happens later on and who knows maybe they will meet.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Woo that was so good....but i wanna it to focus more on AD.......
Posted: 16 years ago
awww.. both of them miss their mom or dad, thats sad but i am so sure they will meet up soon, loved the update and plz continuee when u get time.
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowwww!! u added a really nice twist!! it reminds me of kuch kuch hota hai when srk and kajol meet at the summer camp!! i cant wait for SD to meet again. looks like the "twins" are gonna meet there other pair!! i hope SD meet in the next update! ! that was soooooo goood.!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Looks like people understand what I;m getting on to...😊 I hope you like this update because its from the top of my head- no such creativity in this..
Part 25
Sanvi POV
"Sorry" I said apologizing. I was accepting a sorry or apology in return but whoever it was, was really rude. Well then the little girl looked up "sorry, my name is aditi" I looked at Aditya and he looked mad as well, looks like girls are the only calm ones here. "my name is Sanvi and this is my smaller brother Aditya" I smiled. Then I fooled around in my pocket to see that mom's picture was missing. OH god where is it, I panicked and looked at Aditya he understood the look on my face and placed a hand on my shoulder"It's okay didi we will find it" he smiled at me. The I looked at Aditi and the boy beside him. I think she understood my curiosity and smiled. "his name is Saniv" I laughed. Our names are so familiar. "whats so funny sanvi di, it is alright if I call you that, its just you seem older than me soo......." aditi asked. Oh god she was so sweet. "you can call me di, but its just that our names seem so familiar and we kinda look alike." she stood there thinking and finally caught on and laughed with me. "you're right" she said. "well I better go find my cabin aditi" I smiled and left but one thing kept bugging me was Saniv and my picture of mom. I helped Aditya find his cabin and then left to find my cabin. Cabin 13....wow! I stepped inside to see Aditi and another girl. "wow roommates this is so interesting" I said smiling. Aditi smiled at me and then she kept staring at me like she was amazed. Suddenly her hands went to my necklace. "oh my goodness Saniv has one just like that" I touched my locket and kissed it. "its the only sign of my mom, well one of the only"I said. she frowned. "you mean shes no more?" she asked sadly. "actually I don't know but wherever she is she's probably always thinking of me" I said. She smiled and then I saw a tear fall from her eyes. "whats wrong" I asked. " oh no it's nothing its just that you remind me of my mom.You really look like her, the same eyes and the same smile." I smiled at the last part. "well then shes my mom as well then" I said laughingly.She smiled. Another tear fell from her eyes. "whats wrong" I asked. "oh nothing its just that I don't have a dad, mom never talks about him" I smiled. "well if your mom is my mom then my dad is your dad...what say.. deal?" I asked. she smiled and shook my hands....we both started laughing hard. Then I saw a picture in my pocket, probably one of mom's. As I took it out I was surprised it was one of dad's but I didn't pack one if his pictures at all. Aditi caught me looking at it. She took it out of my hands. She looked at it in disbelief. "who is this" she asked. "WHO IS THIS" she asked again. I studdered. "M-my dad" I said. Right then she froze and took my hand and started running out of the cabin towards a whole other section of cabins
Saniv POV.
I led Aditi to her cabin and went to mine. On the way I put my hands in my pocket for my picture of dad but it wasn't there...Oh god that was his only picture I had with me. Maybe its in my suitcase I'll have to check later on. Thank god my locket is still there-I don't get one thing why haven't I made a copy of the picture and put it inside...LAZY. Oh god this is my Cabin, cabin number 3. Interesting, I step inside and I see Aditya and some guy. "hey" I said. He smiled. "so roommates interesting" Aditya said to me. "yeah" I said. God making a conversation is so hard..I stood there for a minute and may I comment AWKWARDDDD. Then I opened my suticase to look for dads picture, it wasn;t there.GREAT JUST GREAT NOW WHAT AM I GOING TO DO? Aditya looked at me "why are you so tensed" he asked. "ohh uhh" i couldn't find my words. Aditya looked at me and kept staring....FREAK ALERT. suddenly his hands went on my locket. "WOAH Sanvi didi has a locket just like that!" I snapped my head to look at him. "really?" I asked."oh well you see this locket was given to me by my dad it's really important" I sighed and looked away. "whats up" aditya asked. This kid wouldn't leave me and my depressing self be. " Well my dad isn't with me and Aditi, god didn't love us to much to let dad be there for us" I said. He looked sad. "so did he die" he asked. "no actually I don't know" I saw the whole cabin get tensed. "look but wherever dad is he's thiking of me in the smalllest way possible atleast" I said brightening the house. Aditya smiled. "I kow what you mean, My dad well technically not but still he's real cool," I smiled If I had a lil bro please let him be like Aditya. "well your dad is my dad" i said laughingly. Then I looked at Aditya who wasn't smiling. "whats wrong" I asked. "its just I don't have a mom" I smiled and gave him a nuggie. "well since your dad is my dad. my mom is your mom..what say..deal" I asked. He smiled and shook my hand. then I saw something in my pocket. Must be dad's picture. I took it out and saw a picture of mom...I don't remember putting a picture of mom inside. Mom must have put it...oh god! Then I saw Aditya look at it. "can I see that picture" he asked. I nodded and gave it to him. He looked at it and his eyes widened. "it can't be" he whispered. Suddenly there was a knock on our cabin door. I opened it and it was the Sanvi girl and Aditi with a picture in their hands."we need to talk" Aditi said. I looked at Sanvi who seemed just as confused as me. Aditi showed me the picture in her hands. I saw it and took. "you found dads picture" I asked. She nodded. "but thats not the only thing I found, I have a theory bro and this includes mom....a-a-and dad" I looked at her wide eyed. "I may be incorrect but that picture of dad you see its broked half way.....and I think theres a picture of mom and the other half." I looked at her. Then I looked at Sanvi who was catching on. She also seem surprised. "wait one minute" I said I took the picture out of Aditya's hands. "is this the pic?" I asked. Sanvi looked happy. "thats the picture of my mom that I had" suddenly I got it. I took the two piees and put them together. They fit. "we're a family?" I asked. "Yes" Aditi said.Oh god I have a sister and a brother.
short summary of todays update : they found out they were brothers and sisters
Precap: Sanvi: we have to get them back together....but how?
Feel free to comment😊
Edited by loveisreal222 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh wow
now the children will help them
i like where this is going
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awww the kids are so sweet....get Mama and Papa together back ASAP...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Happy Vaisakhi to everyone!!!
Part 26
NO POV
Its only a day away when Amar and Divya come to camp. So far the kids have gotten real close and talk about their parents and how mom is and how dad is. Scene shows 4 kids -aditi, aditya, sanvi and saniv gathered at their hang out by the lake.All their faces glum.
Sanvi: I can't believe it we met 2 weeks ago and now we only have 1 and 1/2 of a week together minus the time when our parents come. I don't want to leave you guys, you're my family!!!! Ughhhh I mean we meet for the first time in forever and now we have to speerate, why is god so unfair to us why..
Aditi: Sanvi di relax lets just enjoy the time we have together
Saniv: IMPOSSIBLE, once mom comes shes not going to let me out of her sight- OVER PROTECTIVE!!!
Aditya: True dad never lets us out his sight ever. Thats why we get home-schooled
Saniv: but hey wouldn't mom and dad see each other at camp or something
Aditi: yeah, if only we could do something.
Sanvi: IDEA!! Brainblast! We could do something.....something like
Saniv: getting them back together
Aditi: yeah I could tell they still love each other
All of the gave each other high 5's and started off with their first plan....Violin meets dance!!!
1 DAY LATER.
Sanvi is biting her nails, Aditi is going over multiplication, Saniv is doing a little jig of a dance and Aditya is just staring ahead. All nervous. VERY NERVOUS.
Sanvi: lets hope all goes well!
Sanvi: stop jinxing it!!!!
Aditi: Look moms car!!!
Suddenly the world stopped for Sanvi, she saw Divya get out the car the wind hitting her face and her smiling. A tear slowly shed down her cheek.She wiped it away. Put on a brave face.
Aditya: READY!! Sanvi lets go! Guys remember the plan we're signing up for dance and you're signing up for Violin....get each teacher mad- don't tell your real names and they'll have to talk to each other about our behaviour and when they meet......lets just say love at first sight.
All of them gave each other high 5's and sanvi and aditya left for Amar.
Divya, aditi, Saniv
Divya: Kids!!! I missed you so much. Did you eat on time, you didn't bug anyone did you, did you make friends?
Saniv: Oh I think we did just more than that.
Saniv said smirking. He took moms blessing and waited for the Kiss strom. 1...2...3 AND SHE STARTS OFF KISSING THEM.
Aditi: mom I think thats enough here lets get you to your .....special......cabin.
They walk Divya to the most messed up and torn Cabin at camp. They smile at each other. Divya frowns.
Divya: this?
Saniv: the only one...heard your bunking with someone as well.... be careful bunk 2 is broken lay down and you go right through the bed.. just a heads up! Bye mom ...better let you unpack.
Saniv smiles a dirty smile and leaves. They follow the trail back to Sanvi and Aditya.
Sanvi: Plan 1 part 1
Aditi: accomplished... Part 2 on its way
Saniv stood smiling until he saw a limo pull up it was almost as if everything was in slow motion. The driver got out and opened the door. Amar stepped out and took the fresh air in.
Saniv: its your turn go..We'll go back to mom's cabin and show her around...they won't meet till later. We'll make sure of that.
Sanvi: Specialised watches.
Aditi: check
Sanvi: walkie-talkies
Aditya: double check
Saniv: hut hut hut and lead out.
Saniv and Aditi walk out to Divyas cabin.
meanwhile
Amar-Sanvi-Aditya
Amar: Kids how are you. YOU DID BEHAVE RIGHT? Did you eat on time...Aditya did you grow....an inch?
Aditya: yeah papa I did
Sanvi: Papa we missed you
Amar: I did too. I can't wait to teach you guys violin!!!
Sanvi: actually dad we're learning dance instead sorry
Amar: its okay.. your choice Aren't you going to show me my cabin
Sanvi: yeah lets go dad.
They head out towards the cabin
Meanwhile
Saniv: Mom???
Divya is behing him
Divya: BOO
Saniv: you scared me!!
Divya: the whole point
Aditi: well mom we thought of showing you around camp..what say? Then you can get to teaching dance
Divya: sure lets go. Wait a minute something tells me your not taking dance
Adite: yeah we wanted to learn the violin besides when you have a choreographer as a mom dancing comes easy to you.
Divya smiles
Diva: okay lets go
They leave the cabin
Meanwhile
Sagar- Sanvi-Aditya
They arrive at the cabin.
Amar stops and smells the air and smiles.
Sanvi: this is your.....special....cabin
the same cabin in which divya is staying
Amar: but its all torn apart
Aditya: only one... just a heads up bunk 2 is broken go for bunk 1...thats the only one there is.
Amar: okay well I'll just put my stuff and go straight to Violin class
Sanvi: okay papa see you later
Sanvi and Adiya hugged.
Sanvi pulled out the walkie talkie.
Sanvi: Saniv you there
Saniv: yeah
Sanvi: Plan 1 part 2 accomplised moving on to Plan 2
Sanvi smiles.
Thats all folks not mcuh but the nest update will be really IMPORTANT AND EXCITING I promise
Edited by loveisreal222 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Amazing update..but we didnt get to read why AD divorced,what did Amar do...please continue soon........

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