Hum Dil de chuke sanam(ff)part36 april 28, page 28 - Page 17

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sv_4eva

OMG, Priyanka Di!!!! Your FF is totally awesome!!! I love it sooo much! Grrr, that Muskaan! I love the characters of the kids though....Marvelous wrk! Keep up the great work.....plz continue soon and plz don't end it! =)

I;m not that mean...I have tons of work and MIGHT finish it off in a while but if I do end this one it will be a happy ending for sure. Even if I do which is rare because you guys are so sweet and so supportive I may start a new one but that all depends on how the story is going.So all that means I;m going to make it a bit more longer and if I like where its going then I'll continue😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

I made a decision that I will not be ending HDDCS IF I like where it's going.

Part 28

Divya POV

I closed my eyes taking in all Amar said. I felt hot tears go down me tears and then it started to rain. I stayed on my knees re-running what amar said to me over and over again causing my heart to hurt more and more. Being without the one person you love someone for 10years is a lot and not to mention when that person broke your heart and betrayed your trust and blamed you for whatever happened. It started to rain harder and I was soaked. So I decided to go to my cabin. I ran over to my cabin to see someone was there. I wiped my tears and stepped in. Whoever was in here was in the bathroom as I heard the shower water running. I looked at the beds there was only one. It was pretty big-a queen I think. The best part of this rundown cabin was the bed it was okay. I looked around and took my shoes off and got in. I took my favourite book out to read Pride and Prejudice. I was reading for a couple of minutes when I;m guessing my roommate stepped outside. I put my book to down to greet whoever it was"TUM?!" we both said in sync. I cannot believe it! Amar was my roommate. Why does fate keep bumping ud together? Why."The bed is mine" Amar said. I disagreed. "No I was here first besides my bag is over here and yours is all the way on the other side of the room, so this bed is mine" He rolled his eyes at me. Although I did feel bad that he had to sleep on the hard wood floor which ants crawling here and there. I looked down to see him laying on the ground. Then I noticed that the roof was leaking and it was landing where he was sleeping. So I got out of bed. "what are you doing" amar asked. I didn;t reply back. I took his covers where he was sleeping and told him to get up. I got a bucket and put it there. I went back into bed to see him understand that the roof was leaking. I motioned him to get in as I knew it would be uncomfortable getting wet, then thee was a chance of him getting sick. It waas pretty cold in the bed as well but it was comfortable. "get in Amar" I said sternly. He looked at me confused. he shrugged and got in. I was all the way on the other side of the bed shivering. I was really cold especially since I was soaked from before in the rain. "whats wrong" amar asked. "nothing" I said rudely with and edge. "youre shivering" Amar said to me. Now he cares. "so?" I asked. He quietly took wrapped his arms around me and hugged me towards him. Making me warm but it send shivers down my spine when he touched me. "are you warmer now" he asked. "yes" I said. The slowly I felt my eyes close

Thats all folks, I know its short but its all I got today. Please do comment and criticize!!!Might not post as soon as I usually do because I;m sick.So bear with me😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely update, Priyaka Di!!!!! Oooo Amar and Divya sleeping in one bed...Hmmm I wonder what's gonna happen next....hopefully that Muskaan misunderstanding will get cleared....Great work! i loved it! keep it up and plz continue soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
I like where its goin to...fab update..they are getting closer now...please update soon yaar.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great update
but please don't ask for 8-9 comments
not much people are on anyway
please update
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Posted: 16 years ago

awesomee update.... pleaseee cont very sooon... cant waitt..

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Posted: 16 years ago
I can't believe sharad is leaving-wow a big shocker.!!! Anyways I haven't updated in a while so I though of doing it today! YIPEE,,,,,AND I;M NOT SICK anymore!
Part 29
Divya POV
I woke up too see Amar gone, where did he go? I looked around to see someone in a towel...AMAR! "AHHHHHHHHHHH" I screamed. "AHHHHH" Amar screamed realizing I was awake. Wait a second why am I screaming? I've seen it all before!LOL I;m so funny in my mind-wait people who talk to themselves are weirdos, not funny. Amar looked at me and smirked. "Its not like you havent seen anything before" Amar said. WOW is he a mind-reader. "no I'm not a mind reader" Amar said. I looked up at him in shock. "oh your face expresiions give everything away Divya,you're really predictable, I mean I would know!" Amar said. "what do you mean?" I asked. who did he think he was. "Nothing" amar said. "but you know what happened" Amar said. I rolled my eyes. "I don't care about what happened that night" I said. It was true I didn;t it just hurt but he was the one saying DIVORCEE, if he only knew that I still love him today. "i do too" I heard Amar whisper. I looked at him in shock. He avoided any eye contace with me. 'the kids, they know" I said. " we can't keep them a part what do we do?" I asked. "stay the way we were before, seperated." I looked at him in denial. "did you not see how much they have bonded, and I;m not dumb, Saniv and Aditi don;'t get in trouble and I can see Sanvi and Aditya don't, they probably wanted us to get back" I said to him. I swear I heard him whisper why not. "you know what Divya?" Amar asked...well more like stated. "You think you know everything so please stop jumping to conclusions and we both know that itsn';t going to happen-but the kids they deserve to know" I looked at him. "no" I said. He looked at me and got closer his face kept leaning towards mine. "you want me" amar said and took 3 steps back, torturing me, I see. I looked to see him still in his towel. I laughed in my head. I weent to him. I touched his nose rather seductively as I saw him shiver" no you want me" I stayed close and I pulled his towel down and ran away from the room. "Divya!!!!!!! Seriously how old are you?" I heard Amar scream.I decided to let that go. I saw Saniv and Aditi. "hey kids" I said. "hey mom" they both said in a boring tone. "thats our dad" they said. I nodded my head. " mom I want a dad, seriously youre a mom I've I have a moms love and Mom I know you try to be like a dad but your not, and you know what its not fair that my dad is alive, that I can see him but I can't even be with him" Saniv said yelling at me and stormed away. I looked at Aditi who had the same look in her eyes "he's right mom" she said taking my hands and kissing them. She walked away leaving me by myself .....yet again
Thats really short sorry but all I have today!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg great
amar and divya will slowly fall in love again right

anyway cont. soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wonderful update, Priyanka Di! Hehehe....Divya pulled his towel🤣....I loved the update! Hopefully AD are gonna get together again! Keep up the wonderful work and plz continue soon....=)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awww..i want both of them,mauhhh..that was really really cute man...yet short...gald u didnt demand comments...........

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