Hum Dil de chuke sanam(ff)part36 april 28, page 28 - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago
Huh ? divorced ? what ... yeh kya hua ???

ufff update soon .. great job !
will be looking forward till tomorrow ..
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Posted: 16 years ago

DIVORCED is correct...I was watching the Parent Trap with my nephew and niece yesterday so i wanted it to be a new twist.

Part 23.
10 years later. In New York, Usa
Divya and Saniv-Aditi
Divya POV
I dread that day. That day everything went wrong the day I walked right out of his life, but he didn't come after me not even once, no phone call no nothing. Ever since then me and Saniv moved to New York where I was offered a job to work as a dance cherographer. Yes I know dance-so not me but actually ever since I was a little girl I danced when ever I was sad I just used that grief I got from Amar and put all my force to make it a professional career for me and so far everything has been amazing. But one thing really bugs me is Saniv when will he ask about his father and that day I'd have nothing to say. Saniv looks exactly like Amar and he always tries to make me laugh. Mama came with me since that day because she wanted to support me and papa stayed behing for Sanvi as I told him. And Bharat I don't know what happened to him. Sanvi-when is there a day that goes without me thinking about her. I don't even know how my own daughter looks like and the truth is before I left I was pregnant with Amar's baby I had only found out 3 months later on Saniv's first birthday. Her name is Aditi she is 8 years old. Suprisingly I had twinss AGAIN so then theres Aditya who lives with Amar but Amar doesn't know Aditya is his own child. I told papa I wanted him to live with Amar. Papa told Amar that Aditya was actually his nephew who died in a car accident. I would do anything just to see Aditya and Sanvi again. And now Saniv and Aditi were going to Camp for most of the summer. The most important people of my life and how am I supposed to live-through phone calls as Saniv said to me. So I decided that I'd go on a dance camp to different camps and the last stop is at camp Tringo where Aditi and Saniv are going so I'd spend the rest of the 1 and a half weeks of camp there and then go back home for 3 weeks and then for kids its going to be school again.
Amar-Sanvi-Aditya
Malibu, Cali, USA
Amar POV
I dread that day as nightmare that just made my whole life fall apart. I moved to Malibu Californis in the USA because living in India suffocated me as it reminded me of Divya too much. Over here I live with Papa and I heard Mama lives with Divya. Papa came with me to give love to Sanvi awhile after Aditya my Nephew came into my life-he is amazing and I let him call me dad or father. Is there never a day where I don't think about Divya or Saniv. No. In Malibu I run a hotel buisness- magical inns(made up). So far we've got 3 branches and I'm proud. 2 here in California and then 1 in New York which Papa handles alone. This summer Sanvi and Aditya insisted on going to some camp Tingo or Tringo well whatever its name is. I promised them That'd I'd be there for the last 1 and half week of camp that they'd have left as a game instructor and violin class. Don't ask I play the violin. Whenever I was little me and Divya would play together she would dance when she was sad and to cheer her up I'd play the violin. I'd also play it when I was sad and she'd dance with me and sharing that feeling of letting go to kids this summer is my job. OH Muskaan and Bharat got married as they fell in love. well as Muskaan fell in love infact they have 3 kids. I don't really have much contact or communication with them and I could care less about Muskaan but I still phone my brother. But if there would be one thing I could do that would be to see Saniv just once and my heart would be at rest. But one thing is at the back of my mind is Sanvi, she looks like Divya so much but when she asks about her mother I would have nothing to say. Nothing just like the day it all happened.
wow a lot to type! I hope you all like the new twist and understand where I;m heading
Posted: 16 years ago

what the hel, divya and amar got divorced, but happy to see two new addition to the family, thanks for udpating, was a good update, and hope u continuee soon,

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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice Update!! OMG They got divorceddd.... Can't wait till Amar, Aditi, Aditya, Divya, Saniv, and Sanvi all reunite!!!!! Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wooooo...whats goin on here man..am confused......please update soon dude.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
ooo hehe i'm confused now .. hmm .. Anyways good job =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow wonderful update continue soon, luved it😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
that is a nice twist u brought! but im kinda confused how they got divorced all of a sudden :S anyways update soon!! luv ya!
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg a really big twist!
but how exactly did muskaan break their marriage
and before divya was all set to fight, and now she just gives up!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 24
Saniv POV
Today is the day where I and Aditi get to go to camp Tringo!!!! WOO HOO. I've been literally jumping up and down the walls since mom agreed. Mom was hesitant at first but then she said yes, as worried as ever she made arrangements to teach camp Tringo for a week or so. Mom was an excellent dancer and an even better choreographer. She was damn good, so good that she had the chance to do choreography for Broadway twice and once for a whole movie. I love mom but she never lets me go out to trips and whenever I say India she leaves the room so you must get it by now. MOM IS OVER PROTECTIVE. I don't mind that I don't go out of the country but we haven't even gotten the chance to go to any other state in the US which scares me because all my friends have been somewhere. Talk about being Over Protective she only lets me go to my friends house after I'm done my homework and picks me up before dinner I mean that is injustice to me and my rights. So this camp thing is really important to me and Aditi or also called Adu . She hates it when I call her that. I should pack a bucket for the trip to camp because all I know is she's going to be crying a puddle. And daddi ji keeps praying to god for our safety. I packed everything wait not everything. I looked for my locket. If I don't find it I'm going to do mad. Mom told me Dad gave it to me when I was born. Dad the one thing missing in this family, mom never talks about him. So I never ask knowing it must be really painful for her and all. There it is wait where is that picture? I found a torn picture of my dad so I only know how he looks but he must have changed a lot. I found it when I was little and playing Hide and seek with Aditi in Daddi ji's room. She kept it underneath her pillow. No one but me and Aditi knows I have it. Aditi the smarty pants who convinced mom gotta give her props for that. Honestly just because she's aced every test mom says yes to her and just because I don't get A's she won't believe me. But still B's are okay for a 10 year old like me besides what else could a 10 year old want- wait a minute my dad. But that's a wish that might never come true. Me and Adu always pray to god that we want to meet dad and we want him to be there for us. Because like other boys I haven't played catch with my dad even though Mom tries, a dad is what every boy needs a person who can understand them. Mom has tried football with me but it hasn't worked out at good as she thought and then she tried to talk to me about puberty but I crammed my way through saying some other time mom. "SASU COME ON ITS TIME TO GO" Adu called. She knows it's not sasu its Saniv. Oh well I grabbed my duffel bag and fled my room before mom could make her puddle into a lake. I first went to Daddi ji and took her blessings and hugger her, adu did the same then came mom we hugged her. We knew what was coming next the kiss storm. I'M REPORTER SANIV WITH BREAKING NEWS THE KISS STORM HAS ENTERED TERRITORY DUCK AND COVER. Mom grabbed her keys, we decided it was best if we go by car besides its only a state away. FEW HOURS LATER. We're finally here Yipeeeee! I jumped out the Van with my duffel Bag. The whole camp ground was amazing the cabins, the lake and everything was amazing. There was a forest and a Horse ranch. AMAZING! I looked at Adu who was evenly excited as me, and then I looked at mom. I went to the side of the van and bought a bucket. "Here mom" I said as she started crying/laughing. She pinched our cheeks hugged us and bid us farewell until later.

Sanvi POV

Today is the day when me and Aditya or ADI are going to ....wait for it....CAMP!!!!!! Daddy finally agreed after special help from Dadda ji. Dad was hesitant and scared because his little baby doll has never been allowed to go out the country so out the state is a big thing for me and Adi. Of course It was more of me than Adi as I impressed Daddy with my awesome marks and Adi with his okay marks. Me and over achiever as Daddy would say. Of course I was scared of letting go of Daddy so I told him to come teach violin he agreed to the last week and half of camp. Daddy is really protective of me and Adi. Adi is our far away cousin who lives with us because his parents died in an accident so Dadda ji bought him to live with us. He's really close with all of us and seriously he's like my own brother. Anyway back to Dad. He hardly lets me go to my friend's house and I only have 1 friend. I'm a loner oh well. Dad says you don't need friends you have me-apparently he's afraid of his little doll growing up. I mean I have some rights to live and enjoy after all I'm just a kid. WRONG dad doesn't understand that. Dadda ji however is more open and lively. He really lets me go out for ice cream and all he's one of my biggest support systems. So this camp thing is really important to me and Adi. I packed almost everything. I picked up my locket from the dresser and kissed it. Daddy told me he gave it to me when I was born. He told me mom wanted me to keep it with me forever and inside of it I placed a picture of myself and my mom. Truth was dad didn't know of the picture of my mom I put in it. The real picture I have is framed the one inside was a copy. I found the picture when I fooling around one day in Daddy's room in his wallet so I took it as a chance and kept it with me since. Whenever I go to sleep I put the picture under my bed so that my dreams are open for her and her picture in that locket so that she'd remain in my heart forever. Daddy told me I'm a smart girl and I have everything but I don't have everything-not a mom. I need a mom every girl does. A mom that I can share secrets with go shopping, paint our nails and sing to me at night not that dad doesn't do it, it's just that he doesn't know a mother's love nor do I. So every night before going to bed I pray to god that I can just meet her and let her be there for me in my heart. Dad has tried shopping with me but it's no good and he complains about the money I spend. Then the puberty talk- not at all fun! Well actually dad tried but he didn't know what he was doing so I told him to wait. "SASI COME ON TIME TO GO" Adi called. He knows I hate it when he calls me sasi! Seriously where did he get that from? Anyway I made my way downstairs to see dada ji and daddy standing. One of the maids bought down my suitcase. Here comes the awkward moments. Adi and me took Dadda ji's blessings and hugged him. Then it was daddy-discipline time as Adi called it the night before. We took blessing and hugged dad. Whenever he was nervous he would usually talk about discipline and manners. "Okay kids listen up, no sulking back straight, don't talk when instructors or counsellors are talking, no sneaking out at night, say please and thank you and lastly don't forget daddy" I smiled at the last part. Daddy got us in the car and the car driver drove us to the Airport. AFTER HOURS ON THE PLANE WE WERE HERE. I screeched. "yay" I smiled. Then finally we drove to camp tringo and saw all the kids and it was beautiful I kissed my necklace and hugged dad. When dad is sad you have to give him a slumpy ball as his grip on things gets tough, so I went to the side of the limo and got him one. "Bye Daddy see you in 2 weeks okay" Me and adi said and hugged him. "okay" he said as his grip on the slumpy ball got tighter and then it broke. "Dad Relaz just 2 weeks and look at all the adults here,now go!" I said pushing him towards the car. We said goodbye. I took my suitcase and Adi took his and as we were walking we bumped into some kids. "sorry" I looked to see a boy my age and a girl Adi's age.

Hope it was good enough!Real long update. Oh and you'll find out how they got divorced and what happened. Oh and I need comments!!!!
Edited by loveisreal222 - 16 years ago

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