Hum Dil de chuke sanam(ff)part36 april 28, page 28 - Page 21

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Posted: 16 years ago
great update
atleast they are together now
you could start your new ff but this seems like an ss
why don't you change to an ss
good luck with your new ff
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kirancanada1

great update
atleast they are together now
you could start your new ff but this seems like an ss
why don't you change to an ss
good luck with your new ff

Good Idea, I should do that, that never came to my mind
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Posted: 16 years ago
I thought about it and I am not continuing the series because I'm too lazy and cannot do 2 at a time and I have no ideas left. My second story I have about 3 parts which I;m going to start sooner or later. I will have a prologue though.So the story is going to end
Part 35 POV
Divya POV
I'm exactly 3 months pregnant, I know 6 more to go. It doesn't pain as much as before-considering the fact I have 2 sets of twins but luckily no twins this time. Amar has been an absolute sweetheart but something has been up with him. He always has extra mint and deoderant with him everywhere he goes and he throws up a lot. He gets more emotional than me and I'm a hormonal pregnant women, for crying out loud. He gets up early and goes to sleep really late, he's working at the office like a maniac, but I think there is more to it. Ofcourse my tummy is getting bigger but it doesn't help when the kids point it out,hello I know I'm pregnant no need to tell me.I know! Kids started school but they don't know how to read and write in Hindi so they are learning really fast and are doing quite well at other subjects. I was helping the boys cook food because they lost a bet to the girls. If the girls beat them at soccer they have to cook and if the boys had won the girls had to do their laundry. Obviously the girls one and are enjoying some food right now made by the boys, I'm supervising just incase to see if they do anything wrong with the food after all they are boys! I heard the doorbell ring. So I left to get it, I opened the door and saw Amar. "hey hun" I said. I tried to kiss him on the cheek but he pushed me away. I got closer to himand he smelled horrible. " Amar take off your jacket it smells" I said. He nodded and took it off. It still smelled. "Why don't you take a bath" I said. I took his jacket to our room as he entered the bathroom. I was putting it in the laundry basket but I checked his pockets if he had his cellphone in it, if he doesn't find it in the morning I have to find it, Like no duh. I went through it and found something unexpected. I held it in my hands and waited untill I saw Amar come. Amar came in the room and looked at me and then at my hand. "It's not what it looks like Divya, you know it's just the whole stress at work and everything" he said. I rose my hand to show the box of cigerettes. "Amar thats not the way to relieve stress, how could you? Do you not know what a bad habit it is, do you not know how many people die from smoking each year, do you know how many types of Cancer you can get, do you not know anything. Amar do we not love you enough?" I asked.He looked angry and frustrated as his eyes met mine. I couldn't read them anymore they were blank. "do you not love us enough, huh?" I asked amar. His eyes shot up at mine. "I do love you" he said. "then what? promise me you're going to stop" I asked. He nodded and kissed my hand. "thank you" I said while leaving the room.
Beep Beep Beep
I woke up and looked frantic, was that a dream. I looked at Amar who was already up looking at me.
"Please amar tell me you don't smoke" I said. He looked at me confused. "why would I Divya? You know how carefull I am about my health, your just having nightmares as a part of your hormones." he said. I sighed thank god. Then I felt the baby kick. I took Amar's arm and put it right there. He smiled"hi baby, I;m your daddy, did you know that?" Amar said. "Amar this is the only pregnancy that you've been with me and hopefully will be with me throughout the whole stage" I said. " I know" Amar said. "you remember Amar that day when you said 5 babies, I think you're dream is coming true" I said. "our dream" Amar said as he kissed my forehead. "our dream" I whispered. Amar looked at me then my eyes. He leaned in and kissed me.
Many years later. no pov
Amar and Divya have become older and each year their love grew stronger and wiser. Saniv, Sanvi, Aditi and Aditya were all married. Although Diya didn't get married yet. She had a best friend named Vidya. Both of them were very close. Diya loves Vidya's brother but is afraid of him because she is simple and he is super cool. Amar and Divya have a nephew who has been living with them for a while his name is Sagar. His parents died when he wa yound so he considers AD as his own parents. At college he is a complete and utter nerd and Divya is very loud! When she says something your ears have a chance of not surviving.
AD, Diya, Vidya, Jay(vidya's bro) and Amar are all playing truth or dare.
Diya: I pick papa, papa truth or dare
Amar: truth
Diya: who do you think is the best couple besides you and mama in this room
Amar: simple sagar and vidya!
Sagar and Vidya look up at each other and look away blushing
Diya: dad they aren't together
Amar: but still, anways I pick Divya
Diyva: truth
Amar: okay how much do you love me
Divya: more than you can ever know
Amar blushes
Divya: I love you
Amar: I love you too
Everyone starts clapping scene fades
Thats it. Now you also have a bit of the new series because the old and new series connect. Don't be mad at me for ending it but there is going to be a new beginning, so please respect my decision.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow, Priyanka DI!!! It was amazing! I loved it! It's ok,I respect your decison(I'll still love this FF!).....Great work!!!!! So is this the last part??? Anywayz, truly amazing!!! Continue soon!
Luv,
Choti
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Posted: 16 years ago

oh so you are going to write the next part in a different thread

continue with your updates

and i hope you do better in your next ff/ss

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Posted: 16 years ago
Yay..i respect ur decision....that was once again wonderful..was that the last part..
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Posted: 16 years ago
wonderful update continue soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Manusha_LuvSD

Yay..i respect ur decision....that was once again wonderful..was that the last part..

yes it was. and thank you for respecting my decision it is very sweet, I' have been super stressed this week so I thought of ending it and starting a new one, which will start soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
You've done a really great job. Throughout i was very much interested in what was going to happen next. Looking forward to your new ff.

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