Hum Dil de chuke sanam(ff)part36 april 28, page 28 - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago

The answer for the riddle was 11. The people who had the right answer were Kirancanada1, saniiii and hot chilly. I didn't get the 9 comments but I felt it has been real long since the last update and I've been really running in out of the office all week so I thought I'd do one FINALLY.

Divya POV

Right now me and Amar were at the hospital with Sanvi. Sanvi was getting a check up just incase. It's been a while since they were inside. I was really worried I looked at Amar knowing he'd be more worried because I know more than ever he loves his little girl. Ever since she'd been born she'd been daddy's little girl and whenever I saw him hold Sanvi it always made me happy. I knew Amar would be a great father but I didn't know he could love like this. FINALLY the doctor came out. I ran to the doctor. She looked at me with a stern look. OH BOY WHAT NOW???

BACK AT THE HOUSE WHILE DIV AND AMAR ARE AT THE HOSPITAL.

Bharat POV

I was wondering around in the house holding Saniv, bhaiya and bhabhi left over an hour ago to the hospital I hope they're alright. But I hope Sanvi is alright. not even a day here and I already love the kids. their amazing, once heard about Sanvi my heart broke, it was unexpected but once I heard the whole problem and what had happened before that I didn't question much. oH GOD WHATS THAT SMELL. OH NO I HOPE SANIV DIDN';T. OKKAY I'LL JUST CHECK. WAIT HOW ON EARTH DO YOU CHECK A DIAPER. IDEA!!!" anyone hello ANYONE HELP" right after that she appeared MUSKAAN. "MUSKAAN thank god I found you I need help!" I said really fast. "okay what?"she asked me. I looked at her like she had no nose. "eww whats that smell"she asked. her eyes darted towards Saniv. "Did he.ooOOooo Now I understand. " she said laughingly while covering her nose. "yeah can you help,I don't know how to change diapers"I said. "yeah okay but don't laugh I DON'T KNOW EITHER!!" I looked at her. "well theres a first for everything. lets learn together,." We smiled at each other. Just that one smile made me melt inside.We both scurried to the nursery where I looked for Diapers.After I got it I looked ar Muskaan holding Saniv and admired her. I let out a sigh and she turned around. "Okay how do we do this?" I asked. I held the diaper and held it diagonally. "uhhh" was all Muskaan said before this happened.I looked around it had been one hour since we changed the diaper. FINALLY. I looked around the room it was an utter mess. I looked at Muskaan who put Saniv too sleep. I looked at her and as on signal we high fived each other and started laughing. "let's clean this mess up, partner" muskaan said to me. "okay partner" We started picking up all the mess when we got to a little item on the floor what was it. It was a mouse. "muskaan look a mouse" I said right then she jumped in my arms and the mouse went away. Right when she jumped in my arms I dropped her. I didn't want it to look obvious. "why'd you do that" muskaan said angrily "i didn't mean to." she looked at me "did too" i loooked at her. she seemed so childish. "did not" i said. "did too" she said while pointing a finger at me. "did not" i said back ot her while pointing a finger at her. fromt here we did the original did too and did not for ten minutes. when someone cleared their throat. "MMHH" I looked to see Massi. I skiddadled out the room with Muskaan. Laughing "sorry" i said to her. "its okay" we high fived each other again.

Precapp: Muskaan hugging Amar!!!!!!
For ther next update:
10 comments
what do you call a fish without an eye?
A man had twelve toothpicks in front of him. He took one away. Now he had nine in front of him. How is this possible?
Complete the last two in this sequence: 1=3, 2=3, 3=5, 4=4, 5=4, 6=3, 7=5, 8=5, 9=4, 10=3, 11=?, 12=?
get two out of the three riddles above and 9-10 comments for the next update😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
what do you call a fish without an eye? Fsh
A man had twelve toothpicks in front of him. He took one away. Now he had nine in front of him. How is this possible? Did he spell out the word 9?
Complete the last two in this sequence: 1=3, 2=3, 3=5, 4=4, 5=4, 6=3, 7=5, 8=5, 9=4, 10=3, 11=6, 12=6
I hope I'm right.
Update Soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
They are hugging..wooo..o nooo she didnt.......i was waiting so long man....lub it........
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Posted: 16 years ago
i wass going to solve the riddles but bhumi had to ruin it!!!!
well great update
i loved it!!!
but please make it longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
askfor as many comments
as how many 10 line paragraphs are
because it's not fair
that you make us give 9-10 comments for a short update
stop torturing us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 16 years ago
hi loved your update, aww man i hope muskaan doesnot come close to amar,
what do youcall a fish without an I is FSH.
well i am just guessing the second one okk i think the answer is
12 toothpicks= 12 letters take one away= 9(this might be wrong i am just guessing.)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kirancanada1

i wass going to solve the riddles but bhumi had to ruin it!!!!
well great update
i loved it!!!
but please make it longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
askfor as many comments
as how many 10 line paragraphs are
because it's not fair
that you make us give 9-10 comments for a short update
stop torturing us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Exactly👏👏..it unfair..u make it so short then u want 9-10 comments
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: *xoxo*

what do you call a fish without an eye? Fsh
A man had twelve toothpicks in front of him. He took one away. Now he had nine in front of him. How is this possible? Did he spell out the word 9?
Complete the last two in this sequence: 1=3, 2=3, 3=5, 4=4, 5=4, 6=3, 7=5, 8=5, 9=4, 10=3, 11=6, 12=6
I hope I'm right.
Update Soon!!!!!!!

was the right answer!!!!!!!!Updating today sometime soon😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Finally like after a week I get to update. I couldn't update earlier because it's been hectic at work and then my cousing wedding is soon so busy with that.

Part 19:

Muskaan pov

Everyone including myself were sitting together in the family room in silence, when Divya broke down in tears. I looked at her. Amar got up and hugger her. Me and Bharat were unknown to why she was crying but stayed seated. The only thing bothering me was Amar was really close to Divya. I lookedat her "Divya why are you crying?" I asked worried. Knowing she had been gone to the hospital for a while with Sanvi concerned me a lot. "Sanvi" was all she said. "Sanvi" she looked at me saying it over again. "My Sanvi" she said while pickiing her up. "She can talk, the doctors had a misunderstanding" I smiled. "then why are you crying" bharat asked "oye partner you dumbo, those are probably tears of joy" I said to bharat. "Muskaan I was thinking lets have a party for Sanvi" Divyaa said. Good idea. I went up and hugged Amar.(thats from the precap) "I;m so happy" I said to Amar. I got the two most unsuspected surprises. Meeting someone I loved and loving them all over again-Amar and my niece being okay. I hugged Bharat and then Divya.

Soon after it was the day of the party. I was super excited. I wore this. I tried my dress on. I remember wearing this old thing to my first date with Amar. That was the night he kissed me and broke his RULE.
Flashback
Amar: Hey Muskaan ready to go on our date
Muskaan: Ready as I'll ever be
I said as I got into his car and kissed him on his cheek
Amar: HEY HEY HEY I don't kiss on the first date get that straight, even if the the girl is as beautiful as you got it
aww he is so ADORABLE
Muskaan: whatever.......so where are we going tonight?
I asked curious
Amar: You'll see
Muksaan:why do you have to be so mysterious its not helping
Amar: what do you mean
Muskaan: see there you go again!!!
Amar: you honestly can look out the window and see where we're going
Muskaan: but you can be a getleman
Amar: I am, but your an independant women
Muskaan: aww your so sweet. THE BEACH
Amar: Yeah....
Muskaan: Do I look nice
Amar: more than beautiful
he parked the car and opened the door for her. They made their way untill they got to a spot were there was a little picnic set up.
Muskaan: this is so sweet fo you
the date went on. We got up and started walking around the beach
Amar: so how did you like the food
Muskaan:good.
I said as I looked in his eyes. We got closer and closer untill our lips met. I pulled away
Muskaan:I thought you don't kiss on the first date?
Amar: I don't go by the rules
END OF FLASHBACK
I looked at Divya she was looking beautiful but one thing bothered me where is her husband and why is Amar here? Divya was looking gorgeous. she wore asari. that was the difference between me and her I dressed casual and she dressed really desi. But before marriage I remember she used to dress casual. Thats whats making me eager to getting married.The clothes and the feeling. AND MOST IMPORTANTLY THE LOVE which you can clearly see on Divya's face. She simply glowed holding Sanvi. Soon people started coming it was an amazing party. Soon my song was on. GLASSY!!! woo I needed someone to dance with so I grabbed Bharat. EK GLASSY, DO GLASSY, Ahh amazing soon the song was over and the music played. I went to the bar and asked for a drink. I gulped it down and asked for another one. Soon people were going home and I say Divya dancing with Amar and I got angry. I got up to her and pushed her away. I grabbed Amar's hand and started dancing.I hugged him and left to go to my room when Divya showed up. "Did you drink" she asked me. hiccup hiccup. "no" i said lying. "you did" she said I nodded. she got me some water and some medicine. "Anything you want to say" she asked me.."yes I have a lot to say. I;m sooooooooo happy and and and I;m in love"I said
Bharat POV
I went to her room to see Diyva bhabhi with Muskaan. Right then I heard shes in love. "with who, are you in love with Bharat" Bhabhi asked I smiled. "NO" muskaan. rigth then my heart shattered. I decided to leave after that.I ran into Amar. "She doesn't love me" I said and left.to my room.
Divya POV
poor bharat.......he loves her so much. "who do you love" I asked. "I love my ex. we met in the US. then we broke up and he had to go to India and I just met him. Look at the coincidence. I think it is love god sperated us but put us together." I smiled but faked it. Poor bharat "okay whats his name" I asked. she smiled."you know him, I know him" oh god "is it ramu ji" I asked. "no Its AMAR" That was the last thing I wanted to hear I looked at the door to see Amar. I left the room. I looked at Amar and he gave me a look that he;ll take care of everything and that he loves me not Muskaan. I smiled as if telling him I trust him.
HOPE ITS LONG ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Other than that...sorry I torture you guys so much 😭 but for the next update I WILL NOT ask for much comments I just need some criticisim and ideas. Ohh and I;m introducing a new character sooon!!!!! I will post when I feel like it meaning sometime in the next 4-7 days
Edited by loveisreal222 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwww... love the trust thats betweenAD, it was a lovely update, it was longer than the revious one, but now we understand that u were busy, continuee soon..................................................have fun in the wwedding....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice Update!!! It's so nice how Amar and Divya have trust in their relaitonship! Muskaan should have asked who Amar was. She's not going to be with Bharat, right??? She broke the poor boys heart.
Continue soon! Have fun at the wedding!!

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