FF:Why is It Hard to Love.Part 17 updated 6-9-2009 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
Did i ever comment
well your ff rocks
wondering when you will update!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: persii

thank youuuuuuuuuuuu

welcomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
Nice part hun...keep it up yaar.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
it parts pretty short but amazingggg

Mirtika runs to him and say excuse sir are you okkkk and shes crying

The nurse office they called yugs parent in and yug wakes upp

Yug: sorry

Mirtika: NO im sorry

And When Gauri came and saw them she was shockkkkkkk and lefttt

Gauri thinking: WHats she doing with Yug

Mirtika went the her class

Mirtika askes her friend how long has Yug been in our class and Yug asks his friend the same thing

There friend replyies they been here from the beginning

The whole class time they been thinking about each other

Mirtika thinking: How come I cant stop thinking about him

Adiytai: How was you class with Yug

Mirtika: Shut up

Yug POV

He goes home and sees his mom Gauri very upset

Gauri: Yug why were you with that girl

Yug: she just helped me

Gauri: I don't want you to be with her

Yug: I don even know her

Gauri: I DON'T CARE STAY AWAYYYYYYYYy

Yug: Ok

Mirtika POV

Mirtika: Heloo mamma

Divya: Hello Beta

Mirtika smiles where Pappa

Amar: Good afternoon beta hoe was school

Mirtika: Good where Gauri di

Amar and Divya stayed silent

Gauri comes and says come on Mirtika

Gauri give Mirtika water causz she supposable says she tired from school

Before Mirtika was about to drink the water Shonali called her and she was like later di

Gauri was soooooooo angryyyy

Mirtika and the rest of them where at the park and so was Yug

Yug than noticed Mirtika

Yug was gonna call Mirtika but remembered what his mom said and than he say his Mom at the park while she was talking to Mirtika

Yug ran to him mom and was like Ma

Mirtika: that's you ma

Yug: Yeah why

And everyone was shocked


hpope you all like dittttttt


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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
greart update!! hate gauri!! yay, we get to see gauri in trouble
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
ha ha great update
aunt on one side, mom on the other
continue soon
i'm loving it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
wow i loved it update soon please and thank you!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
im gonna upate on monday ok guys srry if its too late but still
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Posted: 16 years ago
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part 13 it a bit short causz i got hw and i promised il coutnine so i worte it it not really tha long but i hope you all like itt

Mirtika: Gauri di this is your son

Yug: Yeah of course

Gauri: I don't know him Mirtika

Yug: Ma

Gauri told everyone to go but Mirtika decided to stay and Gauri was pisted

Yug: how can my mom reject me

Mirtika: is she really your ma

Yug turned around and ignored her and said causz of you my rejected me

MIritka: Im osrry

Yug: sorry wouldn't change it

To Amar and Divya

Divya: Amar I love you

Amar: The sun reached behind a fading sky,
so the moon could take its proper place.
Day to darkness, brightened by the stars,
leaving upon the blue waters
a shimmering portrait of your face.

You, with all your savoring sweetness,
tenderly pierced the walls of my soul
as you wove a new tapestry with
the golden threads of your hope and love.

Yesterday you offered me courage,
today you endowed me with your strength.
Every moment together, a gift.
Every day a celebration of life.

How lovely the music of your heart.
You are the air I breathe, sound I hear
and the spirit that gently moves me.
I don't wish for the moon, I have the stars.

I love you too

Divya nd amar kissed and hugged until Gauri came and said

Listen im telling u if ur daughter doesn't stay away from my son swear ill kill her

Yug and Mirtika

Yug started yelling at Mirtika and was about to hit her until i thik this guy grabbed his hand and said .....


srry it short i hope u liked it an di know it sucked causz im pretty busy today and well srry


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Posted: 16 years ago
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graet update!! wait, im a little confused,when did mirtika reject him?? but sounds awesome, can't wai tto see what happens!

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