FF:Why is It Hard to Love.Part 17 updated 6-9-2009 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
it a bit short but hope u like it

It shot Shonali

Adiytai: Shonali……

Mirtika: Mitul call the hospital

Mitul called the hospital and everyone in the family came

Mirtika: I'll be right back

When Mirtika went in a long walk she saw Sindoora...

Mirtika: I think I've seen her somewhere... I'll go and ask her

~AT the Hospital~

Mitul phone was kept on ringing.

Mitul: I'll be right back

He went to meet his gf Radhika

Mitul: Radhika

Radhika: I was waiting so long for you

Mitul: Sorry Shonali got shot

Radhika: What

Mitul: Sorry

Radhika: How is she know

Mitul: Don't know

Radhika: I think Gauri diddi did it

Mitul: Me to

Radhika: What do we dooo

~Back To Mirtika~

Mirtika: Excuse do I know you

Sindoora stared and her and smirked


srry


persii thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
ill make it longer next time srry guyss
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

oooh, interesting.............oh no...............sin!!!! hey, thanks for includin me, me feels special😆 luv ya, bye!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
i luv u to and wat does ATB mean
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: persii

i luv u to and wat does ATB mean

😃
all time (beautiful- added by charri di) buggers. we bug for updates. itz me, shobby di(our leader) vidya di, gg di, pooja di, charri di, gina di, koshi di, radika, priya, titly di, kiran........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56


<p class="MsoNormal">Radhika: Mitul how did this all
happen</p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mitul: I don't know</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Radhika: Is someone trying to get
revenge against your family</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mitul: My parents have no enemies</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Radhika: You never know</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Shonali is out of the hospital so
she comes</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Shonali: Hi luvy dubby</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Adiytai: Shonali</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Shonali: Sorry </p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mitul: Where's Mirtika</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Shonali and Adiytai: Wasn't she with
you</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mitul: No</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Shonali: Damn</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Radhika: Mitul I think we should
look for her</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">~Mirtika Part~</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mirtika: Excuse me</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Sindoora: yes beta</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mirtika: What your name</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Sindoora: My names Vidya</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mirtika: Vidya</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mirtika: Oh ok never mind</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Sindoora: OK</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mirtika was running until she ran
into someone</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">?????: Sorry</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mirtika: It's ok</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Shonali and the rest of the crew
were watching</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mitul: Aww</p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mirtika than look over</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mitul than says whose that</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mirtika: I don't know</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Radhika: Who was it?</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Shonali: IS he from our college</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mirtika: I don't know him</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Adiytai: That why he was holding
your hand</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Mirtika: I knocked into him</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">Shonali: Sure</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"></p>

<p class="MsoNormal">????? his name is Yug</p><br><p class="MsoNormal">Yug pic:</p>http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Z52ncXEQGNA/SRKZuzLTm8I/AAAAAAAAIH4/VPzEhMZEIWk/s400/tujh-sang-002.jpg<br><br>ADityati: http://www.masala.com/images/tmp/full/harshadchopra1_full.jpg<br><br>shonali:Mirtika: http://www.india-forums.com/tellybuzz/images/uploads/9A8_ghar.jpg<br><br>oh and mitul is up front<br>i hope u guys like it<br>thank u<br><br><br>
Edited by persii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
Nice update!! Continue Soon!
Edited by *xoxo* - 16 years ago
persii thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
i havent upadtes in the longest soo osrry
here a partttt

Mirtika: What's wrong with you guys I don't even know him

Shonali: Sure you don't

Mitul: yeah suree suree

Yug Part

He goes home

Yug: Dad when is mom coming

Yug's Dad: Yug I don't know she's work at a place remember

Yug's mom comes in'.

Guess who is it

GAURIIII

Gauri: sorry beta im late

Yug: Ma

Gauri: Yug im sorry

Yug: It fine but your never home

And than Yug goes to his room

While laying on his bed he think of when he ran into Mirtika

Yug: Why am I think of her

The same thing was happening to Mirtika

The next morning..

At college

Mirtika was walking threw the hall and say Yug

Mirtika: Oh noooo

Yug thinking: I have a bad feeling

All of a sudden Yug faints

Mirtika runs to him and say excuse sir are you okkkk and shes crying


i know it short im just getting lost of tests and hw and midterm is coming soo im srryyyyy

i hope u all like it htough


Edited by persii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
sounds good......oh, so they like each other!! good luck for midterms and tests!! ya, stuff is a drag, but concentrate on that..........i had my midterms t2 months ago...................it stunk
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
Hey hun! So sorry I didn't reply before. God, you write so good. Please give me some tips......it's so hard to write well. And the updates......they were awesome. I just hate this Gauri. Wow.....so Yug's mother is Gauri.....but why does she want to kill Mritika? So much suspense and so little time.....please update soon hun! Anxiously waiting for your next update! Bye! Luv ya!

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