FF:Why is It Hard to Love.Part 17 updated 6-9-2009 - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

96

Views

11.9k

Users

11

Frequent Posters

persii thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#81
here the parttt i hope you all like ittt

Divya went up to Mirtika and said what are you doing

Mirtika: What are you talking about

Divya: You know what I'm talking about

Amar: Mirtika

Mirtika: Ma and Papa I dunno know

Yug was standing there all confused

Amar was like Mirtika why are you doing this

Mirtika: What are you talking about

Mitul came and said well tell at home pa and mamma she just wouldn't understand

Amar than turned to Yug and said don't you dare ever come near my daughter

Divya: Exactly

Yug: But I didn't before he could say anything Divya said SHUT UP your prob gonna ruin my daughter life like your mom is trying to

Yug: whattttttt

Mirtika: MAMMA

Divya: Mirtika that it I better not see you with him

Mirtika: MAAAAa

Divya: Mirtika

Amar than slapped Mirtika and lets go right NOW

They took her home

And when they got there Bharat came to him and asked Amar bhaiya why are you soo worryied

Amar: Mirtika Gauri ki beta ki saat thee

Bharat was soo shocked what are you talking about Amar Bhaiya

Amar: She was and I have a feeling if she falls in love with him he'll hurt her causz her mom is like that and she threathen to kill Mirtika

Bharat: Oh god

Amar: Bharat what do I do

Divya: Amar come on

Bharat: ill talk to you later about this

Amar: ok

Amar and Divya went to the room and Amar was very stressed so Divya went up close to him and they both kissed each other and Amar said Divya I love you and they started hugging and Divya broke free and said no hug until you give me a kiss and Amar ran around the room trying to catch Divya and when he caught her they both fell on the bed with Divya on the bottom and Amar came closer and kissed Divya.

-Mirtika Part-

Mirtika tried calling Yug but he wouldn't answer because he was trying to call her

Than Mirtika closed her phone and he called

Mirtika: Yug

Yug: Mirtika

Mirtika: Im soo sorry

Yug: Its fine how are you

Mirtika: Im fine and she started crying

Yug: Stop crying I love you

Part 16

Mirtika: Why is our parent like this?

Yug: I don't know were going to have to find out bye for now

Mirtika: Bye

Yug started thinking: this probably ahs to do something with my mom because she's never home and rejected me in front of Mirtika and her family.. I'm going to have to find out and Mirtika was thinking the same

Shonali comes into Mirtika's room and says Mirtika I know your upset but Yug is not a right guy

Mirtika: Don't you dare say a word against Yug

Shonali: He's not right

Mirtika: Don't worry about it

Than Amar came in and said'Mirtika I found a guy for you so don't worry he's not like Yug that will hurt you soo don't worry http://ranbir-kapoor.org/RanbirKapoor9m_jpg.jpe: nihaal pic

Divya: His name is Nihaal Verma this is the pic: its on topp srry for all ranbir fann i put that there causz i couldnt think of nayone and the other one look way older that mirtika soo srry

Mirtika: Ma papa you cant do this'

Divya: Beta listen to us'

Mirtika: NO and than amar said stop it youll marry him no matter what

Mirtika replyied No and Amar slapped Mirtika and said your going to get marryied and left the room

-to garui and them-

Sindoora: Nice going Gauri

Gauri: no problem

Amar than comes

Gauri: Arehhha Amar aghe hai

Amar: I did what you said know please don't hurt my daughter

Sindoora: Were goingt o have to think about that

Amar: BARI MA

Gauri: don't screammmm

Don't owrry we wouldn't kill Mirtika just hurry up and get them married' Gauri said that

- to the part with Mirtika-

- she crying hwr heart out and call Yug and tells him everything-

yug: Whattttttttt

Mirtika: yug please help

Than Nihaal's family have come

Nihaal is 2 years older than Mirtika and is really nice blaahhhh blaahh the good type

Mirtika: Nihaal's family is here I gotta go and started crying

Divya cam in and said'..Yug doesn't love you Mirtika hes lying because his mom did the same and brain washed Mirtika because she thinks he's bad too and sooo IT NOT DIVZ FAULT Eighter

Everyone made Mirtika come down stairs' and Nihaal's family were like we deffoo want her as t here bahu

Divya: Nihaal why don't you say anything

Oh and at this point since everyone told how Yug was just using her and how bad Gauri was she's like doesn't like him does but you know what I mean'.

Nihaal didn't really say anything

Aditi: Your shy like a girl and everyone started smiling including Nihaal

Nihaal's mom is Preeta

Preeta: Why don't we get them married this Friday

Then they agreed and Preeta put the kangan on Mirtika

Than Mirtika phone rang'..

Aditiya picked it up and it was Yug

Aditiya: Whose this

Yug: It Yug can I speak to Mirtika

Aditiya: No don't you dare say anything about my cousin and don't ruin her wedding because she doesn't love you shes getting married to Nihaal and that's final and shut the phone..

Than they put Nihaal and Mirtika in a different room'

Mirtika: Um

Nihaal: I have nothing to say

While they were silent. Since Yug heard it he went to there house and say Mirtika and than wen to the room and Mirtika

Mirtika turned to him

Nihaal: Whose this

Yug: Don't worry about it and he hit Nihaal and he feel to the ground

Nihaal got up and hit him back and than Amar and Bharat came in and stopped Yug from hitting Nihaal


i hope you liekd it srry to bring in Nihaal but i have tooooo

lolll jk i just want supsense and you like drama typeee

lol i hope you liked it


Edited by persii - 16 years ago
Manusha_Divz thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#82
I like the suspense yaar...great update.....it was like ur longest update
persii thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Manusha_LuvSD

I like the suspense yaar...great update.....it was like ur longest update


i knoww righhtt
bmtdluver thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#84
awesome update!! really long! itz so sad!! stupid gauri always ruins everything!😡 hope they could get married!!
svforever thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#85
Cute updates! Aww....poor Yug and Mritika...I hope everything gets better....
-Kookie- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#86
Great update Mariam!! Loved it, please update asap, Okay??
Speaking of that better go back to writing my part for my ff.
bmtdluver thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#87
u're welcome di!
persii thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#88
Part 16
omg this is short but all i oculd think off hope youl like this part

Amar: What the hell are you doing here

Yug: Apna pyar pani ki leha

Amar: Stay away from my daughter

Yug: Mirtika tell your father we love each other

Mirtika: I don't love you

Yug: What he was soo confused

Shonali: Get out

Aditiya: You heard my sister get out

Yug: This cant be happeing

Mitul: It is and now YOU HEAD THEM GET OUT
Yug left crying and the song jag soona lage

Yug was outside and screaming MIRTIKAAAAAAA

And feel to his knees

Mirtika was also crying an thinking: I lied to Yug I do love him but ma aur papa

Nihaal: Your ok

Mirtika: yeah

Amar: Nihaal sorry about this hatsa

Nihaal: Its ok

They go back to the room and told Nihaal's parent abut what had just happened

Nihaal mum: Teek hai Amar leekion yeh shaddi hm ne jalde karene hai verna kuch ho suck tha

Mirtika: Babu ji

Amar turned around and said ki how hai

Mirtika: Kuch nahi

Amar: oh and they all waved them good bye

Everyone went back to what they were doing and than

Mitul, Aditiya, Shonali, and Mirtika went out to get her clothes for the wedding

While they were at the market Mirtika didn't feel like getting anything she kept on think about Yug

While they were still there Mirtika say Gauri shadow with someone else..

Mirtika as usually followed it and she heard

And say Sindoora with Gauri

Here's what those witches said…

Sindoora: Thank god we black mailed Amar at the right time or else Yug and Mirtika would have already done something that might causz our plans for failure.

Gauri: I know Yug was just crazy for him thank god I gave that threat to Amar if he doesn't get Mirtika married ill kill her

Sindoora: Did you think about what you'll do with Yug

Gauri: Ab nahi

Mirtika was hearing all this and shocked and so she moved back and something fell it was a pot and than Sindoora and Gauri turned around but didn't see Mirtika and ran away

And Sin and Gauri got suspicious

Mirtika thinking: Hum ne Yug ko itna bar doke de hai and she started running trying to look for him

She kept on running until she passed her brother and cousin and they screamed Mirtika but she didn't turn back

She ran until she fell and screamed YUG

next part coming soon

here precap: amar telling divz he hates her

and divz saying this is all your fault



Manusha_Divz thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#89
Aree AD fighting..hm..interesting precap..great update yaar..but so short..sniff..please continue soon
KiranSD1 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#90
great update!
not sure if i missed dats
could you write he date and page you updated on in the ubject
i wold elope if i was mirtika
and amar saying that to divyanka
not good
plz continue

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".