FF:Why is It Hard to Love.Part 17 updated 6-9-2009

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Introduction

~Why Hate When You Can Love~

I'm using the same characters from BMTD

Divya :24 married to Amar

Amar: 25 married to Divya

Divya loves AmarSagar

Amar loves Divya

(But they have a fight like everyday)

They have two kids thought and there twins

Mirtika and Mitul

Mirtika

Mitul( pretend that's him and not Samart) ty

Chap 1:

Amar: Divya I need my suit for the office?..

Divya: I'm coming Amar

Amar: Divya ka ka karti reati im gonna be late this is just not only today but every day

Divya: Here you go Amar..

Amar: Divya why do you alwas have to take time in everything

Divya: Amar (sadly)

Amar: BYE

i know it short but i wanna well know if ppl like it so faar


ill edit shonali and adityai later kk
hope u like em
heres the pgs for the parts
Amar:



Divya:



Mitul:


Mirtika:
ps# i felt like changing her causz it wouldnt be rigth causz in TSPLS yug wiht someone else i wouldnt change her name but face and plus i dont want pl aganist mee soo heres new mirtika



Yug:


Aditiya:


Aditi:


Bharat:


(srry couldnt find more pics of bharat)
ill update the others later
ty



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persii thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg the pic didnt even show upp
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Is it an FF...nice..do continue..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg that was so cute continue plz
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ty ok me contuine
its gonna be short causz my mamma is like staring and say why arent u doning hw soooo thants srry guys ill make it longer next time
ty

After Amar Left Divya was crying alone in her room

Divya: Amar has changed so much every since we had had Mirtika and Mitul

Mirtika: Mamma your look great today

Divya: Thank you beta

Mirtika: Why are you crying

Divya: Im not

Mirtika: Than what do you call tears?

Divya: Beta were Mitul

Mirtika: With papa at the office

Divya: what he doing there

Mirtika: Papa wants him to work as a business man so teaching him early

Divya: and you

Mirtika: Nothing

Divya: Oh

Than Mirtika walked away crying

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yeps i love it too...continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys me counting

Divya: Mirtika ko ki hoa

- At the Office-

Mitul: Papa

Amar: Yes Beta

Mitul: Mirtika

Amar: Mirtika kai

Mitul: Nothing dad

Amar: Kai hai

Mitul: Oh well tomorrow is Mirtika and mere birthday hai

Amar: Hum pata

Mitul: Can I go home know

Amar: Yeah sure

-Mitul reached home-

Mitul: Mamma hum kal 17 ho jain ga

Divya: Huma pata

Mirtika: Of course bhaiya hum 17 ho jai

Mitul: Were having a party right

Bharat come out of know where

Bharat: Of course and after you birthday you know Adiytai ki birthday be are hai

Mirtika: OF course Bharat Mamu

~Amar than reaches home~

Mirtika: Pappa kal humare birthday aur Mamma kar hai hum party rak re hai

Amar: Why..

Divya: Amar its there birthday you should be happy

Amar: Why happy every where go some where MIrtkia does something she probably would do something again

Mirtika: Pappa

Amar: SHUP

Mirtika: Pappa

Amar: Hum ne abki baqwas ne suni

i know u guys are gonna say im making Amar mean but i need some u know..
but i hope u liek this chap
and ty for reading
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice Update!! Continue Soon!!!
I think that you should write FF in the title so people know that it's an FF.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Persii! Just read your ff! Really nice! Wonder why Amar is acting so mean! Please continue soon! bye!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey..........its gud.........continue dear................
but u r making Amar too mean

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