**ll{BA}FF-An Unknown Bondll**Pt.6 Pg12 *Updated* - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

cont it soon.😊

Edited by act12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys, I'm back with another part of ff I hope u guys like it. I was busy that is why I couldn't cont. it earlier...so here it is.
*PART-4*
.....He finally remembered who she was but he was even more surprised to find her as the same lady who bought the necklace.He could see her wearing it...he was sure it would make her look even prettier...he was in a storm of his own thoughts....It seemed everything around him stop he just kept staring at her...his feet were like as they were glued to the ground that he couldn't move....what seemed to move was a figure which was coming closer to him and his eyes followed it....She was busy looking through her shopping bag...and she didn't realised the stud figure infront of her and she bumped into him....she lost her balance and grab his coat to save herself from hitting the ground...he unknowingly place his hand on waste to save her from falling...he felt something which as far as he could remember he didn't before....he felt a tingling sensation ran through his body as he felt her touch......she balanced her self and found her in some "stranger's" arms...she pulled herself back...but something seemed to hold them together she noticed some bangles got stuck to his collar...she felt so nervous by his gaze and pulled her hand back......excused herself and left....he didn't seem to understand anything...what just happened....he felt something but what it was....
...He was lost in his thoughts when he heard some familiar voice calling him. It was Anju who was screaming her lungs out..."Bhaiya...what are u thinking...can u please carry these bags...they are so many..I need some help."..He chuckled at the funny situation and helped Anju. It seemed as she bought entire shop still he couldn't say anything as he knew himself has no idea when he is going to be in mall again due to his busy life. Saahil asked for his help as he was confused and didn't mind taking his advice. Shopping wasn't enough for them they insisted to go to ice parlour and Bharat couldn't help it. When they were done eating, Saahil-Anju spotted a Game-Parlour. Bharat was so tired but couldn't say no to them so took them to Game-Parlour......time flew by and kids enjoyed it a lot....their entire day passed by ...and it started to get dark...Bharat saw their tired faces and drove to home.....
.....It was a tired day and Bharat didn't even had a chance to go through his files which were related to upcoming week's project...He tried his best to do his work but his inner-self denied....he was not so tired that he could do anything but something about the day was...something different he felt.....he leaned on his easy chair and closed his eyes to relax......the entire day seemed to rewind in his mind and leaving all scene behind ....it developed a scene in his mind and it kept repeating....revealing just two figures....one himself and one...the girl....but he remembered the feeling he had..he didn't have any answer ...if he tried to forget he would feel restless....his entire night passed by just fighting the scene ...which appeared whenever he closed his eyes...he didn't know when he fell asleep...
...It was a morning at his office and he was working on some file...he had drunk many cups of coffee in order to keep working as he had bizarre night sleep...he couldn't tell anyone about it...he didn't know how would people react to it.People can even call him 'crazy' he thought...he was reading some file when he heard a knock on his door. He saw Mr. Sharma standing by the door. He beamed up and welcomed him, he had somekind of envelope in his hand Bharat noticed which anyhow didn't seemed to be a formal envelope as it revealed itself when Mr. Sharma handed it to Bharat. Before Bharat could explore it, Mr Sharma Explained,"Sir, This is an invitation card for you...My daughter is getting married in two weeks." He finished the statement. Bharat was kind of surprised at the haste....He asked unwillingly, "but....u said she was studying....and all of a suddden the marriage"..Bharat asked. "yes, she wanted to complete her studies but a proposal came for her and I was satisfied by it. My daughter said she doesn't mind if I m fine with the proposal. I find the guy perfect for my daughter" explained Mr.Sharma."Oh! good" Bharat smiled. He was happy that Mr. Sharma's dream is coming true and he really looked happy. "I'm so happy sir. She has finished her B.Com this year and was about to go for Masters but this proposal came and I m happy because I think she wouldn't need to work her husband would keep her happy." Mr. Sharma continued.."Sir, I'll be happy to see you there"..he finished. "Please do tell if u need my help" Bharat offered. "Thanks for the offer Sir. Be there!!!"Mr.Sharma left and Bharat went back to read his file again....but invitation card attracted him towards itself. He kept file aside and picked up the envelope to see...he was about to open the card but his mobile interrupted...It read home. He picked it up to hear Jagat Kaka from other side..." where are u?? ....when r u coimg home??"Jagat kaka asked."Don't worry Kaka I'll come soon" Bharat assured. He hang up and he went to finish the file as he couldn't do it at home. It was time for him to leave after finishing file...as Kaka ordered him to come home soon...not late at night...
..He drove to home and didn't feel so good....there was something he was unaware of...something just didn't feel right...he just looked at the file which was kept on the passenger seat....it was not just the file something underneath...it seemed..no...it was an invitation card of Mr. sharma's daughter marriage with the file. The work in office made him tired and he wanted to get home, so he could rest....Jagat kaka brought him a cup of black coffee as he came out of the shower....It made him feel better...it seemed that a cup of black coffee sucked his tiredness of his body. He spread his file papers on his desk to look through documents and started working on his laptop. A while passed by and his worked seemed endless. Some feet approached to his room and he felt a tight grip of two hands on his shoulder and he turned his eyes to see Anju in her Sleep-wear and in an upset mood "What happened Anju??...why are you up this late?? "Bharat asked in concern. "Bhaiya, I'm not sleepy..Can you tell me a story so I could sleep peacefully" She requested . "Okay, Let me clean-up the desk.I'll come to your room." Bharat assured her. "No Bhaiya, I would wait,"Anju cleared her self. He cleaned up the desk and kept all papers in the file and left the room with Anju...leaving the invitation card on the desk....which was out of envelope and....it read...Aditi weds Karan.....
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So here i stop guys. I couldn't cont as I had some other work to finish... read it and tell me how it was....
Edited by Seebz - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
great update! as i was reading it i had the feeling it would be Aditi! uh-oh, Karan😡 Can't wait 2 c what happens next. Awesome job, update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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What!!! Karan!!!!
Gr8 twists comming up!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sari - Loved the update! 👍🏼
Finally BA meet ... well sort of! Really enjoying how you are slowly having BA meet and become conscious of each other. 😊
Bharat is still unsure as to why he feels so drawn to Aditi; can't forget her, but isn't ready (willing?) to acknowledge that he does feel something when he thinks of her. Funny how he can be so focused in other areas, yet these feelings he has when he sees Aditi elude him. It will be very interesting to find out Aditi's reactions to Bharat as the story goes along.
I just knew Aditi was Mr. Sharma's daughter - had a feeling .... hehee! Hmmm... wonder how Bharat is going to react when he realizes it too! 😉
Thank you Sari for taking time to post the update! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi seebz, great update, could really imagine the scenes from your update, you are doing a superb job, thanks alot and looking forward to the update from u soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh!! my GOD!!....as in real show i cannot wait to see next BA eps....same thing...in your update....i just cannot wait to read next update....Dam GOD!!!you do have lots of talent......please update soon..
Great Job!!!
write a book on BMTD new way ...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi seebz,

loved it totally..you are too good in writing👏
BA meeting was awesome..please continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW seebz!!! That was amazing yet again! Aditi weds Karan!!! Argh!!! stupid karan..haha..but im loving the twist..great job! Cant wait till you update the next part..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: act12

sari hun, just read all three parts, you are too good an awesum update

i really like how the things are going in your FF, infact I got inspired to write my one shot FF on BA from you. true, first when I read urs, I didn't exactly know that u were going to go to mount everest but soon I realized that ur wording is great
Oh i Got a great idea, why don't you becum my assisstant. I write the FF and you give me all your fabulous ideas and i say that i worte themJ/k
anywayz too gud, cont. soon plzz.

Hey Jiya good to see u here yaar.....thank u so much dear. I'm glad u liked it....awww..🤗...I inspired u for one shot ff..really?? glad yaar..ur was really good.....yes yes yaar...I'm ready to becum ur assisstant ...I wud love the job dear...anything for u....just keep reading ff😉

Originally posted by: act13

good job, absolutely fab. plzzz do cont. soon😃

hey jazz thanks yaar...I wud i just updated the part hope u like it

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