**ll{BA}FF-An Unknown Bondll**Pt.6 Pg12 *Updated* - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shobbybee

definitely we will..😉

...thanks😊

Originally posted by: fire_woman

👍🏼 Excellent update Seebz! 👍🏼

Really enjoying how you are concentrating on setting up and explaining Bharat and his situation first. And the encounter between Bharat and Aditi, that seemed just right in the context of the story so far. 😊
Thanks for updating so quickly - looking forward to the next one. Soon I hope - we BA fans are eager for more. 😉

....😳thank u dear...😊....I'm happy...u liked it ..I'm working on next one will post as soon as I can...😊

Originally posted by: hetu_p

hello !!!

Please Cont.....waiting for BA to meet!! keep it up!!

........Thanks yaar....I'll...working on next part..........will update as soon as possible😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: lilee98

hey, thank u so much for the BA ff...yaar😊

love it....the way story is going...
Bharat seemed attracted to her....
May b Aditi didn't notice him yet.....
but jayegi kahan ...😉...he forgot everything after seeing her awwwwwwww🤗
please cont. it as soon as possible....can't wait for the next part..😊

...thank u ..yaar for reading it..........I'm so happy dat u guys like it......I'm touched by all the sweet comments......will post the next part soon ...😊

Originally posted by: premukti_69

Still waiting for a juicy update.

I am already missing BA. I hate these stupid strikes.arghhhhhhhh

..I'm working on it....I know ....why even strike had to happen..I hope we get to see more of new BA scenes soon....

Originally posted by: khakshan-aa

Hey Seebz

Fabolous work dear.. u have created the story very well & the BA scenes r awsome i cudnt stop myself from reading twice.... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast...
hope creatives also read ur FF & they give us more & more BA love scenes 😛
regards
Khakshan

...Thank you so much Khakshan....aww...thanks yaar....I'm trying best to make it interesting.....and here ...u guys r supporting equally ....I'll post the next part soon.....just working on it dear...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys,...this update kinda delayed due to my Academics....I hope my wonderful readers will enjoy this update as well...so here it is..
*PART-3*
....time flew by and weeks passed making him busier and busier...Now he spends more time in office than in his office....his fun time with his siblings had disappeaerd due to so much work and late night meetings...he had earned a lot of respect from his senior for his a real go-getter attitude....his boss was happy to hire him which caused their company so much success in short amount of time....his seniors and co-worker appreciated him as well...no one felt jealous because he gave important to everyone's work and thoughts...and represents them in totally satifying manner...Kaka got worried by his hectic schedule which caused Bharat to skip his luch or dinner at times....always made sure He made sure that he had something at work ....Bharat himself misses playing with Anju-Saahil.. he knew he could play anytime but work mustbe done.on time....It was easier to convince them as Their School has started and they needed to focus on their education....
It was one of his working evening when he was looking through his Staff's Bio-data....he was completing some of his extra work given by Boss....he chuckled as he a name passed before his eyes.."Mr. Sharma"..he said...and sighed...but thoughts kept flooding...'Are all father same'....he got up from the chair and walk to the window......it was understood why he had this thought.....he rembered his own father 'Aniket Singh' who had the same concern for Bharat.....It was his Board exam and Bharat didn't have time going to dinning table and eat...if he had studied enough for his exam.....he had no need to eat food...even he felt weak after pulling an all-nighter, he jerked away the thought of eating.........but as usual his father brings some food in....not just brought it..but even fed him many times.....he always asked why his father worry so much if he doesn't eat food......or any kind of his problem make Aniket upset...may be he didn't know.....but he always said its just Aniket who is getting worried...no other father get so worried at their children problem....but Mr. Sharma proved him wrong. He didn't know how much but Mr. Sharma always got excited whenever he talked about his daughter....Bharat never got bored...he would get time to refresh his memories with his dad...Because the concern seemed 'exact same'.....He used to feel happy to listen Mr. Sharma....because he knew his father was around him and still hoping for Bharat's best.....a tear came rolling down on his cheek as he sighed.
He heard some foot-steps approaching his door. He wiped his tear and went back to his desk. He saw Jagat Kaka standing at the door....Jagat kaka came and said,"Beta, Kab tak kaamo mein uljhe raho ge....Kabhi-kabhi kaam se araam kar liya karo..Hafton ho gaye is naukari ko...tumhara kaam kabhi khatam nahi hota.....daftar Sunday ko band rahta hai... Anju-Saahil ko bhi thora samay de diya karo" ( Dear How long r u gonna b busy in your work...take some rest at times...It's been weeks since u got this job....U work never takes a break...U have a day-off on sunday....Spend some time with Anju-Saahill ) Bharat kept listening to him and Kaka continued "...kitne din ho gaye ...sirf kitabon mein ya phir TV aur Video game mein lage rahte hain....kahin bahar lejao unko.....aur khud ki bhi maza karo.....apne BB ko bahut miss karte hain.." ( It is been days...they watch television or play video games...take them to some place...and have some fun they miss their BB alot!!!!!)he finished. Bharat knew kaka was right about them; he himself wanted them to have fun and much more than that. He couldn't clearify himself because he knew kaka was right. Kaka called him for dinner and left the room. He had been thinking about it for a while then he went to eat dinner.
...It seemed they lost something and couldn't find their precious thing. Anju-Saahil didn't want to eat but kaka insisted so they couldn't deny. Bharat saw their faces and felt really bad...he didn't know they could miss him as much as he miss them. They beamed up to see their BB. He alomost cred to see them eating happily. Anju-Saahil started grabbing things from eachother 's plate and started commenting on each other...Bharat smiled at themselves.He was happy to see them in their usual self...that evening sounded so lively with their mischievious tactics. They started argue on something and wanted Bharat to accompany them...he smiled and tell them to stop their arguments. after playing videos games with them he took them for a walk. it was late night Kaka ordered everyone to sleep...Anju-Saahil had no option other than do what was asked to.
...He was winding up his work and was getting ready to sleep when kaka came to his room..."are, kaka aap soye nahi"(kaka! haven't u slept yet) Bharat asked in a concerned tone. Kaka smiled at him and said,"aaj itne dino baad tum log ko saath dekh kar achcha laga...aise laga...jaise muskurahat phir wapas aa gayi hai....ab tum bhi aaram karo...beta...tum bhi thak gaye hoge.....sab kuch achcha dekh kar laga...jaise ke Ishwar ne kisi ki sun li"(it felt good to see u guys together after a long tim!..It seemed that happiness arrived toour house..u too take rest ..u must be tired..after seeing everything alright...It felt as God has heard someone's prayer)....Kaka left the room after finishing the sentence.Bharat smiled at kaka's words and all of a sudden a strange thought came to his mind...."kisi ki sun li ishwar ne..magar kiski??.."( God has heard someone's prayer but..whose??)...some word echoed in his mind ..."aur un sab ki jo yahan dil se ...kuch na kuch maang rahe hain"(..and all of theirs...whoever is asking for any wish heartedly).....someone's sweet words...he knew but he exactly didn't remember....he knew it was no one whom ....he knew...eventhough he couldn't remember at the moment but it sounded so familier...'whoever it was was...Thanks to her'..he smiled and went to his cozy bed...as he closed his eyes...a simple-looking face with beautiful smile flashed through his eyes with the exact same words. He opened his eyes to see his own room....he couldn't understand what just happened.... what was he seeing..something which happened months ago.....in the same manner as he saw her in the temple....there was a strom of questions in his mind...but he couldn't find the answer of any of his questions....he gave up eventually and try to sleep...he closed his eyes with a hope that ..it wouldn't happen again...and it didn't. as he hoped...."kaka..sahi kehte hain kabhi-kabhi aaram karna chaiy..kaam to kabhi bhi ho sakta hai"(Kaka is right...I should rest sometime...work can be done someother time). He thought it was due to tiredness....He may be aware of his mind but he was unaware of his heart which was upto something out of his knowledge...
...As every kid, Anju-Saahil was eager to have fun on their day-off. They were happy because their BB was not in his files, but with them. Bharat was sort of surprised as Anju-Saahil both agreed to go shopping. He didn't have good feeling about it; he was wonering if this is their planning to do some unexpected hungama. He wanted to stay home but couldn't deny so he went with a positive hope.Anju was a liitle girl with a huge demand of clothes....Bharat left them in cloth department and went to see something else as he knew Anju would never agreed to his selection. he had no intention to buy anything for himself but still he didn't mind having a look. A very beautiful delicate set of jewellery caught his eyes...."kuch chahiye sir"( u want something) asked the jeweller then he realised he is in some jewllery place and he refused and moved to someother place. He kind of felt weird about this. As he came back, he saw Anju-Saahil were busy in shopping. He felt like making some call so he went out but he didn't succeed as Network wasn't strong eough to call. He kept trying and eventually gave-up and found himself out of the same jewellry shop...he smiled and went in...but his smile didn't stay for long as he couldn't find the same jewellry set there...he asked some guy there on the shop" Sir wo set kahan gaya"(Where is the jewellery set?). "abhi kisi lady ne kharida hai..sir!!" ( Some lady just bought it.Sir)..."wo..udhar gayi hain"(she went right there) he continued and pointed at other side of the shop. Bharat just went out as he knew he didn't need it..He thought of making call again and his hands reached to the pocket to get it out...unluckily he drop it and went to pick it up.... as he looked up he follwed his gaze to find a girl at some distance who seemd busy talking to other girl....he got up and started playing with his phone again..but it didn't happen so he thought of going back to Anju-Saahil.
He was about to step forward when his eyes caught somebody....The girl....who was talking to other girl but when he really looked at her he was shocked to find...the same face again which he saw last night no....months ago!!..in..in the Mandir who looked so simple but had an strong impact on Bharat....He couldn't believe that the girl in baby blue churidaar....the one who bought the set....was none other than.... the girl from mandir....the same mandir girl...ADITI!!....
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So here I stop guys do tell how was it...😊
Edited by Seebz - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Loved the update Seebz! 👏 Yea! Another chance encounter between Bharat and Aditi. 😊
I really like the way Bharat is being drawn to Aditi by his own subconscious. It is very subtle, nothing overt, so when they do meet, that sense of awareness he already has is really going to impact him in a big way - ummm ... well that is my thought anyway! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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seebs ...... U r toooooooooooooooooo goood in writing..i don't have any other words to say other than y dont u become a writer for BMTD especially for BA scenes...😊

u put the words together in a such away that it seems real..
Fantastic, keepup the good work 👍🏼
Khakshan
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Superb update seebz, your update is just simply superb, u are doing a great job, i m looking forward to part 4, hope to hear from you soon!

GREAT JOB!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yay!!!!!!
Its fun to read second meeting hun,!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
Hello!! you are doing sooooooooooo good!! its like i am reading BMTD written update.....keep it up!!
i Mostly like how you put Bharat and Aditi .....i wish i can watch this video in real....man....its so good!!
i like that the way you write.....
its a good part of you that you can think and write......for me...i only think but cnnot put in words.....
you rock girl!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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best of luck you are writing very good😃👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great update seebz!!!!!!!!!!! that was really good! awww poor b, he has to work sooooooooo much. i1 request though. can u write more english, i find it difficult 2 read. thaks! update soon!

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