**ll{BA}FF-An Unknown Bondll**Pt.6 Pg12 *Updated*

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Heys Guys, I like the kind of chemistry BA have so I felt like writing ff on them. I'm not sure if u'll like it or not ....just felt like sharing this with you guys...so here you go..
*PART-1*

He took out the key to open his new 'Home Sweet Home'. He let the servant take his luggage into his room as he entered the house. It was was not so big or so small......it was just as he needed. it was quite roomy for him and his 2 other siblings,Anju and Sahil. Sahil was two year oler than Anju....and always try to boss her around but Anju was lucky as her Bharat Bhaiya was always to save her. They were Bharat's world;he could not think living without them. Even though his Amar bhaiya and Divya Bhabhi loved so much, Bharat moved out from Singh Mansion.His bhaiya asked for a reason when he told them his decision..."Aisi kaun si pareshaani hai Bharat...jo tum ghar se jaane ki baat kar rahe ho..."(is there any problem Bharat....that u r talking of leaving)...He did not tell any thing clear other than..."Wo..Amar bhaiya ab college ki parai bhi khatam ho gayi hai....achchi khaasi vacation bhi hogaye...mujhe lagta hai ..ab mujhe job kar leni chahiye.."(umm..amar bhaiya...college is over.....and vacation is over also.. so I think...I should look for a job)....Amar Bhaiya was so confused.." job karne ki kya zarorat hai....Bharat.....family business join kar lo.....aur ghar se jaane ki kya zarorat hai"(What is the need of a job...Bharat...join our family business...and what is the need of moving out)...."Bhaiya mujhe is business sambhalne mein bahut samay lagega.....aur aap chinta kyon karte hain ....Hamesha ke liye nahi ja raha....aap logo se milne aaonga...."(Bhaiya...it will take me a long time to take care of business...and why r u worried...I'm not leaving forever...I'll come to meet u guys) ....he left the house after two weeks. Firstly, Amar Bhaiya and Divya bhabhi tries to convince him but when he insisted they didn't want to force him to stay. They knew he would do what he says....They must be worried...afterall they love all of the siblings like their children...
....It was the evening and he was tired after organising the house. It was harder than he thought as Anju won't let Saahil touch her things and Saahil would make fun of Anju's stuff...no matter how much they fight but they were innocent as angels....he wanted to give them as much time as he could. So, first he organised his sibling's room and then he moved to study room...but his body failed to do so he leaned on some comforting chair.
A while passed and Bharat dozed-off he was so tired too find some better place to rest. His some books were on shelf and some were in boxes....he woke up as he heard Saahil fighting to Anju ......"nahi tune mere pakore liye hain....de mujhe"(no u took my pakora(some snack)....give them to me) saahil said......"bhaiya...not fair...apne khake jhoot bolte ho...abhi BB(Bharat bhaiya) ko batati hoon."(bhaiya..not fair....u ate yours and now u r lying...wait i'll call BB(Bharat bhaiya)) said Anju in anger..."nahi beta mein app ko aur de deta hoon...kyon jhagar rahe ho..."no..child..I'll give u some more.....don't fight) said Jagat Kaka to calm those angry kids down.....Bharat arrived in no time and asked for the chaos..."yeh kya shor macha rakha hai...tum logo ne...kyon pareshaan...kar rahe ho kaka ko..."(why r u guys r fighting..why r u bothering kaka)...He was loud enough to make Anju scared....she dropped her pakora in plate....and there was no voice can b heard anymore....Bharat realised what he did ....He tried to fix the situation as he asked Saahil...."agar usne kuch liya to kya hua.....aapki choti behen hai.....larte nahin.."(she is your younger sister doesn't matter if she took some of yours) ... explained Bharat. Saahil just stared him blankly. He tried to change the topic....."are wah! kaka aapne Ghobhi ke pakore banaye...my favorite"(wow...kaka u made gobhi ke pakore my favorite)Bharat said as he took a bite of a pakora...."hmmm.....delicious...khao bachcho khao.....but no halla gulli...okay..."(hmm....delicious..u guys eat but no shouting)Bharat warned them...
They all had a wonderful time as evening passed by...later Kaka joined them. Bharat spent some time on Kaka's request. He didn't let them feel the absence of their parents or Bhaiya-bhabhi.They played some video games with their BB and went to some park near to their house. It was a beautiful time...they all spent together...He knew they would be busy in school and he would be busy in other work....
It was a dinner time when they all came back to home. Kaka already set-up the table as he knew they would be hungry. They all eat their delicious dinner... and later talk to Amar bhaiya -bhabhi on phone...Bharat put them in their bed and told them a story....and enjoyed theri question as he narrated the story. They were so tired and fell asleep before he could finish the story. He kissed his angels....came to his room to sleep. Kaka came to see him "..abhi tak jaag rahe ho so jao...aur tumhe to jaldi jana hain na job interview ke liye..."(u r still awake...u have to go early tomorrow for job interview)kaka seemed concerned....Bharat smiled .." app bhi jayiye so jayiye ....mein bhi aaram karta hoon..." (u too go and sleep...I'll sleep too) he assured him....He moved to his bed and hoped for a bright Tomorrow and new begining of his life...he fell asleep as he hit the sack....
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So here I stop guys.I know this could be boring a bit and slow. BA haven't met but they will meet soon so don't worry. So guys please tell me how was it...Should I cont or not...your comments/suggestion are welcome...please do tell what you think
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Please continue soon....😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Love that you are writing a BA FF! And from what I can piece together - I can't read Hindi 😭 - it sounds like it will be very interesting as it progresses. 😊
Would it be possible, maybe, please (😃) to add some "english subtitles"? I would really love to read (and understand) the story as it goes along. 😳
Either way tho', thanks for thinking of writing a BA FF. 😊 Best of Luck with your story! 👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! OMG!!! thanks soooo sooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally someone wrote a BA fanfic..my fanfic never came together! I am soo happy that you wrote one!!!!! Thanks and great great fanfic! PLEASE continue!!!😃
Edited by frenzgrl129 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shahsb_26

Please continue soon....😛

I'll as soon as I get some time
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fire_woman

Love that you are writing a BA FF! And from what I can piece together - I can't read Hindi 😭 - it sounds like it will be very interesting as it progresses. 😊
Would it be possible, maybe, please (😃) to add some "english subtitles"? I would really love to read (and understand) the story as it goes along. 😳
Either way tho', thanks for thinking of writing a BA FF. 😊 Best of Luck with your story! 👍🏼

awwwwww🤗.......thanks u so much yaar....I'm happy dat u liked it....
...don't worry I edited it in english also.....hopefully it will help.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyav

thanks a lot..continue soon

thanks dear..I'll...as i get some time free....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: frenzgrl129

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! OMG!!! thanks soooo sooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally someone wrote a BA fanfic..my fanfic never came together! I am soo happy that you wrote one!!!!! Thanks and great great fanfic! PLEASE continue!!!😃

..ur welcome......and thank u so much for liking it......I'll post the next part soon.....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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...thanks😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice one, plzzzz continue asap...
thnx

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