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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
omg loved all of them =)
seriously guys...
this thread just made my day...
too cute =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

okay everyone here is one from me

Divya is around the house cleaning. Unknown to her, Sindoora had someone play around with the chandlier. She placed Divya's phone on the table beneath it.

She has just finished cleaning the kicthen when she hears the phone ringing. She stops what she is doing and heads towards it. The chandlier's screws are becoming undone above her.

Amar has reached home but decides to tease her.

" Amar when are you coming home?," she asked.

" Sorry Divya I'll be home late today," he replies.

" Oh ok. Just wake me up if I fall asleep. I'll warm up food for you," she said sadly.

" Theek hai baba. I will wake up. I love you," he stated.

She blushes slightly.

He is now standing in the doorway. She hasn't seen him.

He looks up to see the chandlier about to fall on her.

" Divya!," he yells.

She turns and drops the phone. Amar rushes towards her and pulls her out of the way just in time.

Divya was breathing hard after the chandlier crashed to the ground Amar held her and when she pulled back he kissed her forehead.

" I love you Amar!," she cried as she embraced her. He rubbed her back soothlingly and helped her up to their room. He then called a repairman and had the chandler replaced and screwed on tighter.

They sat together and ate.

Sindoora was steaming bad. She was hoping to get rid of Divya forever but instead the couple was closer than ever.




I LOVED It..omg i think something like that CAN happen, because we know that this track has to have a repeat on some parts like it did before..rememebr when the lamp was about to fall on sagar yea..theyll repeat it..i love ur idea so cuteeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
thanks Mushi! Yeah I do recall that! I actually missed the epsiode for when it actually came on, so i was searching for it like crazy until I found it!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
omgg...u guyz are soo good...these scenes are soo cute!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

here's one...

Divya is getting ready for a party for the wedding. *The wedding hasn't taken place yet.* It isn't a ritual. it is just a celebration party. Anyway, Divya looks magnificent wearing something like this *Not as much jewelry* http://lh4.ggpht.com/_o6RqiGvoS5w/R4dtm2KpQtI/AAAAAAAABWg/j6SdhgbfMCs/Image3.jpg

Anyway, she is standing in front of the mirror, struggling with her necklace. She is thinking about what SIndoora's plans are. She is so deep in thought that, she doesn't see Amar behind her in the mirror. Her thought breaks as soon as she feels someone tie her necklace. She looks at the mirror:

Divya- Amar *her voice is sweet and low*

Amar- Hum iss duniya mein aapse jada kisi ko pyar nahin karte. *He hugs her from back.*

DIvya blushes.

*By the way, they are both still facing the mirror and Amar is behind her over her shoulder.*

Amar- Dhekhiye

Divya looks up and sees them both in the mirror. They look perfect. Both cute and smiling.

Amar- Khaali ek cheez thikh nahin hai. *He puts her pallu over her head and bites his lip* Ab yeh hooni na baath.

Divya blushes.

Amar- Humko lagta hai, ek aur cheez gyaab hai.

Divya- Kya?

Amar- Ek choti Divya aur ek chota Amar. Likhin aap phikar nahin kariye. Shaad ke baad, kum se kum do hafte mein, oon log ka bhi khabar aaj aayega.

Divya- Matlab? Itni jaldi? Bache? Mujhe toh khaali do-theen chaaye. Aur mujhe koi jaldi bhi nahin hai.

Amar- Mijhe toh futta-fut bache chaaye. Humhe toh saath bache chaaye.

Divya- Kya? Saath? Itne bache!?

Amar- Haan.

Divya- Aap sum bhalana itne bache.

Amar- Dhekhiye...hum toh bache log ko khaali pyar karenge. Aur aap oon log ko daatingi.

Divya- Kya?! Nahin toh. Hum dono daatenge. Hum dono pyar karenge.

Amar- Kher chodiye. Woh shaadi ke baad dekhenge. Humko toh khaali ek cheez ka phikar hai.

Divya- Kya?

Amar- Shaadi ke baad, aap moti ho jayengi. Khaas karke bache ke baad. Hum rehenge aise...aur aap ho jayengi moti. *smiles mischievously and clicks his tongue*

Divya- Kya!??! Mein moti!?

Amar let's go of Divya and runs. They run around the bed.

Amar- Humhe maaf kardijiye, Baba. *he yells things like this as he runs*

Divya is just about to catch him but they fall on the bed. Divya is on top of Amar. They have an eye lock. They are about to kiss when Chintu walks in.

Chintu- Bhabhi, aap tayar ho ga-

He sees them on the bed and turns around. Divya and Amar come up right away.

Amar- Hum dono phisal gaye the. Uhh...Mujhe lagta hai ki Badi Ma mujhe bularehi hai.

Amar starts to walk out of the room. He looks back at Divya and smiles shyly. Divya smiles back.

I know it was really long. Sorry if it was boring. I had wrote it in Hindi because the dialogues sounded a lot better if I wrote it in Hindi. I'm not that great at Hindi so I hope it was okay. It was actually hard for me. I don;t know why. But...please tell me if you want me to write an english translated version as well..if you have any trouble reading this. I really hope something like this happens. Anyway, hope you enjoyed it.

*I EDITED ALL THE TYPOS I COULD SPOT*
Edited by kmishra - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
Loved it, mushiii=]] *if i cn call u tht* and priyaaa=]]
I'm glad everyone liked this topic.
Amazing work, everyone! Keep it up =]
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
i loved yours omg 7 kids lol...sooo cute., yea i want them to talk about their KIDS lol...ye you can call me w.e lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: mushtari

i loved yours omg 7 kids lol...sooo cute., yea i want them to talk about their KIDS lol...ye you can call me w.e lol

hahah thanks
Im looking forward to reading more of yours soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
omg kalee!! that was cute! i loved it
Edited by sharad+divz4evr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
Thank you
priya. mushi, ankita, *xoxo*, adventure gurl, and salma!!!! i am dying to read some more of your scnes...please write some soon...can't wait😊
Edited by kmishra - 17 years ago

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