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Posted: 17 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: anki4life

omg salma ur was too cute =) and i agree with mushi u should write ur own ff...
same with u priya...definately should write ur own ff...would love to see how it turns out =)
and priya ur lil cute scene was sooo cute...=)



i do have one in kdmhmd section, 10 chapters but i have totally forgotten about it..
i should start it again soon.
and thanks...you guys are sweet
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: BMTDian

oh me god!!

HAHA I was smiling so idioticly when I read your post Salma..mwahahaha I could totally see SD...I mean AD doing this!! hehehehe



i'm glad you liked it..i'll do another
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: kmishra

Thank you
priya. mushi, ankita, *xoxo*, adventure gurl, and salma!!!! i am dying to read some more of your scnes...please write some soon...can't wait😊



aww thank you
i'm writing it right now
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Ok here a sweet yet sad scene....

Divya is in her room getting ready for her and amars 20 marriage anniversary. she looks at herself.she sees the wrinkles and the dark spots on her face.she can't believe that her youth has been taken away from her so soon. she was not ready for this.
Life seems different now, she has 3 kids, all whom she loves however she feel this emptiness.

Amar enters the room(he is wearing a grey suit, nicely fitted and his hair grey and messier then usual.

Mere Dulhan kitne daar lagade....ao sub intazar karaha hai humari.
Divya looks glum.
Divya: Ek bhaat bolo
Amar: so bhat bolo...tumhara liya jannu mein kabhi na nahi kehti.
Divya gives a weak smile
Divya: kya mein khubsorat hoon....jaisa mein mere jawane mein thee.
Amar: mera liya tum wohi dibya madam ho...jo maina pane mein gira de.
Divya: so you finally agree that that was you fault.
Amar: tum tab be khubdorat thee, ajj be kubsorat ho aur hamasha rahogi...I love u so much...i wouldnt want to live a life with anyone else. aur ek bhaat aur.....mujhe yeh hata khata divya pasand hai....dekho tumhara ghaal kitne moti hogaye hai, it brings out your beautful smile
Divya:Badmash
Amar puts an arm around her and stares into her brown eyes..
Amar: you still leave me speechless.sache...
Divya: tum kitne acha ho
Amar: tum sa bahot kam

A little girl enters, who is the striking resemblance of Divya.

Little girl: Amarrrrrrrrrrrr
Amar and Divya laugh at that moment and enjoy the rest of the night together, hamasha hamasha ka liya.

it was like a short fanfic
hope you guys liked it..the next one,they'll be young i promise.


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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
aww...it was very c reative...to write a cute scene of them in their old age...i thought it was veryyyy sweetttt
really enjoyed it!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
thanks guys.
i'm glad you liked it
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
LOVED the old AD..so cutee
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
Aww I just read all the scenes that you guys wrote. This topic just made my day, I love each and every scene😳 I wish they would show such sweet and romantc scenes like these in the show😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
i want to read some more..
come on guys
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70

Amar had to work late one night, and so Divya was left waiting for him in the main room. She waited and waited yet no sign of him. Keeping her eye on the clock, watching minutes pass by , she became impatient and decided to give him a call so he can come home. She called only to hear the answering machine. She hung up the phone in anger and stormed off to her bedroom.

She began reading a novel and soon drifted off into a slumber.
Seconds later, Amar finally got home and went into their bedroom to find Divya. As he got there, he saw her sleeping peacefully and smiled. He slowly leaned over her, caressing her cheek and waking her up. As soon as she saw Amar, she quickly turned the other way, crossing her arms like a 5 year old.

Divya: Mein aapse baat nahin karoongi, jao yahaan se
Amar: Arre Dibya

He tried to ask for forgiveness but Divya wouldn't listen to his words. He soon got fed up and just walked to the other side of the bed. She was about to turn around again but Amar stopped her by scooping her up into his arms. Divya was left looking into his eyes, thinking how could she ever be mad at him.

Divya: Amar...
Amar: Divya abhi nahin, bas thora intasar karo
Confused of his words, she kept silent and let him carry her to whereever he wasbringing her. He brought her to the exit of the terrence but then covered her eyes. He led her outside and slowly let her look out into the terrence.

Divya looked at the amazing sight infront of her eyes. There were candles and roses EVERYWHERE, along with a table which was set up or a romantic candle light dinner. Amar just looked at her reaction and smiled, he loved doing things like this for her,expressing his love.

Divya: Amar aapne yeh sab?
Amar: Woh actually, mein ghar hi tha, yeh sab aap ke liye tayar kar raha tha..i'm sorry
Divya:Sorry? (smiles) Sorry toh mujhe kehna chahiye..yeh bohot hi khoobsurat hai..aur aap duniya ka sabse sweet aur romantic pati ho

She kisses him and they both enjoy a romantic late night candle light dinner.

Sorry it turned out so longg. Umm this didn't really turn out so good, but I hope atleast someone liked it😊

Edited by totally_desi - 17 years ago

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