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Posted: 15 years ago

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aaaw glad you all liked it 🤗

@Soni.. you can call me Sanju..😳

@Vidu and Sheela, i will update soon hopefully!

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Posted: 15 years ago

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oooooooooooo cant wait for the next part - thats it sanju start posting again

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Posted: 15 years ago

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very nice. waiting for the next instalment.

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Posted: 15 years ago

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wow..........I liked the story..........so aman wanted to marry santu eh........poor Dm where is he?? please continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

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You are amazing SRD. What a lovely Valentines Special. I have read all your posts till 14th Feb.All are brilliant. Will read the rest of your posts soon and will write my comment. I wanted to be in Santu's position in real life. Wow!!!! what an experience. I liked your idea of making SanRaj tech savvy. We will never see all these lovely moments in the actual serial. So please create such moments and gift us. We will be happy and thankful to you. Eagerly waiting for some more.

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi SRD I read all your episodes. Simply awesome. Eagerly waiting for your next episode.Very good job.Keep it up.

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Episode 13

As Santu pushed open the door she saw a whole new atmosphere.. She never in her wildest dreams had imagined that her house would change so much.. She saw that the house was totally refurbised and modernised. At the enterance the interior had been changed, the old sofa's were removed with a leather sofa set, a 50 inch LED 😆 Screen and most shockingly a champagne bar had been fitted in..

A pool table and many other changes that shocked Santu.. She stepped back thinking she had entered the wrong house but was relived to see Champakali rushing around.

She called over to Champa who stood frozen in her steps at seeing Santu at the M-Mansion.. Champa ran over and asked her where she had disappeared to the other day and how she came back..

Santu still shocked, asked Champa about DM.. Just then Khemi's screeching voice came closer and Santu saw Khemi for the first time in 9 years..

Santu was in for more of a shock seeing Khemi's outfit!!! 😲 😲

Khemi walked down adorned in a off pink sari, a simple diamond set and her hair let down! 😲

Santu couldn't believe what she was seeing, following her was Toral who wore a simple red patiala salwar suit..

Khemi looked at Champa not seeing Santu and called over to her..

Khemi: Eh Champakali.. Tell Benbaa that me and Toral have left and will meet her at 1pm for lunch..

Toral: Tell Hiten that I will sort out the paperwork after we've been to Mrs Khanna's kitty party!

Champa: Ji..

Santu couldn't believe what she was hearing Kitty party?? She wanted to know what had happened and soon after Khemi and Toral left she asked Champa to explain what was going on..

Champa revealed how Khemi had taken over the business with Toral and thrown Kaddu out..

Hiten went to USA and invested money in casino businesses in LA.. and the reason for the bar was for his partners visiting..

Maulik had open a business with Suraj called SanRaj garments and rarely visited D-pur and finally DM..

Champa didn't mention DM and heard Benbaa calling..

Moti: Champakali, come here!!

Champa ran up to Moti and left Santu looking at the new M-Mansion!! She knew why she had come to the house and she would make sure she fulfilled her task!

Enjoy..x