FF: Final Episode.. and Note on Page 80..

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Hi, some of you have been writing some real superb FF and scenes for SanRaj that are truly fantabulous to read... I wrote a couple of the weekend and thought i could share them with you... its not half as good as the ones ive read but this was my first shot... hope you all like it... X

Memories are Magical
DM awoke abruptly calling Santu's name. Since the day she had gone this had happened many times but he hid his uneasiness behind a false smile. He showered and reached into his wardrobe to get ready for work.
His eyes fell upon Santu's sari's, he pulled out a red one remembering the time he and Santu had joined Meghna/Rasik for dinner. It had been late and the four decided to stay overnight at the resort hotel. He remembered how he and Santu lay under the stars talking into the early hours of the morning and eventually falling asleep upon the balcony hand in hand.
Another memory that he remember was the time Hiten and Toral had given the couple tickets to Austria for their first wedding anniversary. How much fun they had? How he laughed as Santu fell in the snow and how whilst trying to help her up DM had fell himself. How they had snowball fights? How they had laughed?
Placing the sari carefully back into the wardrobe, he wiped away his tears. All he had was memories of Santu but these memories were magical...
(This is just a small scene, as i am having problems with adding my other scenes, will try to put them up soon... anyone curious, Santu isnt dead she has just walked out of DM's life)
Enjoy... Xxx
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Jaz1990 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOOOOW...dat waz really gd pleaseeeeeeeeee carry on....wanna no wat appens next
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great start SanrajDeewani,👏👏👏 I wonder why Santu walked out of DM's life and why did he let her go. 😕 Please do continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 start cont soon plz!!!!!!👏
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I like the last line best!
Santu walked out on DM? fantastic. I always want to write the same thing but after twice, many tears flooded the forum and so i attack more basic issues and am hell bent on making Santu's life in the mansion better!
Good work SRD. Please do not ever make the mistake of comparing your writing to that of others. We are all different and think differently. There is no better or worse here.
It is all in good fun (as i always say).
Keep writing.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it is very nice.........but why santo walk away...don't let them break up
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey SRD,

Its toooooooooo gud. but plz tell us where she went and why she moved out from him?
Edited by vrsharma - 15 years ago
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Thanks everyone for your apprectiation... i have wrote the next part and will be adding it soon... am glad you liked it...
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All Alone
DM was tired, it had been a long day at the office. When he reached home, the house sounded quiet and the lights had been dimmed. 'Baa! Babuji!, Moti Ben!' Is Anyone at home??' Champakali!! But no-one answered he went around the house thinking that the family were playing a prank on him.
Feeling frustrated he walked into the angaan and just then heard the phone ringing..
He answered the phone, it was Kaddu.
'Hello Dad, it me Kaddu.
'Hello dear what is going on, noone is at home? He asked worryingly
'Dad, today it was Santu's birthday, so everyone has come to my house... Even though she isn't near we still love her and this is the least we could do for her, Nanna and Nani have held a pooja at my house. They didnt want to hurt you. Sorry Dad.'
Without saying goodbye, DM put the phone down...
How could he have forgotten? It was this day 3 years ago they had expressed their love to one another. How could have not remembered the date...
He walked over to the table and started to serve the food that had been made for him... but he lost his appetite. He left the plate and ran up into his room and locked the door behind him...
He fell to the ground and cried, he was in pain and agony because she had walked away leaving him and now he had realised that he truly loved her...
Enjoy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sanraj,
Its really gud. but plz here we are dying with our curiacity that where santu gone and why she moved out from his life?
plz atleast give some clue for that
Edited by vrsharma - 15 years ago

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