Hi everyone...starting with an FF...my first attempt...inspired by the stellar writers that we have on BV forumš it may not flow very well...but the attempt is to capture the essence of Ansh...the setup is different from the one in the show...would be glad to have a response
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It was dark, very dark.
She wandered through the blackhole, through the unknown...attempting to find some ray of light, attempting to see that one spot of white somewhere. She was bruised at some places, burnt at others. A scar lay on her neck and cuts on her leg. Her legs were burning, screaming at her to not move any futher, her hands shivering, her throat thirsty and her eyes tired. But she moved on, disregarding the calls of her body. She moved forward, just by the power of her mind. She continued to search for her world, her comfort zone, her peace and her solace. She moved left, but nothing there. She turned right. She looked around. No, nothing. It was absolutely pitch black. She was losing hope, crumbling under pressure.
Out of the blue, a spotlight was thrown on her face. A blast of white met her. Her first reaction was the closing of her eyes. They pinched aggresively, not wanting to face the light. Instantenously, her mind made her step back.
White? did she just see something white? She asked herself, her eyes still shut. Had the black vanished? but how could it be? where did the light come from? why did it come? who made it come? Her mind posing a thousand questions in a nanosecond.
Slowly, her eyes stopped pinching themselves, still shut. Her hands relaxed themselves. Her sound of breath became rhythymic again. Her body was ready to face to the unknown, but her mind, still apprehensive. Her heart was beating with anticipation. But her mind, was not conclusive on the way ahead. She took a deep breath. Enough!! She screamed at herself. "Either I decide to move ahead, or again get lost in the wild"! She berated herself.
At that moment, the moment of taking of final call, where she had to choose between the two unknowns, she decided to move ahead and very slowly and carefully opened her eyes to face 'it'.
Gaping, what she saw left her bewildered. Before she could put herself together and react to the situation,
A voice boomed from the mike - "Aaand cut!!".
To be continued...š
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Suggestions/ comments/ areas of improvement all welcomeš
Edited by Hiral_Halwa - 11 years ago