Ansh FF - Behind the veil - Part 7 and 8 - Updated on Page 19 (14/3) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Chinmay92

Too good and cery interesting.
Sorry for commenting late on ur first one and doing it nw,second part is very nice.update soon.

Originally posted by: Payali09

You clever girl, you!

It works. Stories always draw me back in. Guaranteed ❤️

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I know I said it last time but I will say it again. You are definitely growing and improving as a writer and your work just keeps getting better.

Loved the way you set up the theatre environment. I could just imagine it the way you have written. Description description 👏

And the flashback set up -> spiral to black to sepia to blood. What a way to head to the past and create a mystery. Am curiouser and curiouser 😊

Can't wait till the next one!

🤗 thank u jaaneman...m a sucker for thrillers😉 grown up on sidney sheldon books😆

Originally posted by: Mithi_vani

Hiralll ... Wts this ... 😲 .. 😲 ... Theater scene ... ... I thought its was real ... Omg .. A doing theater wow ... Interesting ... Nd past ... Swings .. Park .. Wts all this ... Nd who is Jagadis wt did he do??? Wts haunting A ???? Omg ... Hiral . .. ⭐️ ... 👏 .. I m so impress ... I m egaer to know wts all this ... Superb job Hiri ... 🤗 ... Waiting for next part .. ..

Originally posted by: adi2512

Hiral...

The plot is absolutely beautiful., and though we can foresee., how this may build up., your writing is just amazing, to keep up the interest...😃

Do continue soon...😳

Originally posted by: radhika_kiran

Its wonderful...

u have done a mind blowing job..

just loved it..

will be waiting for your next update :)

Originally posted by: love.sid

nce idea theater background

part 2 was intresting

update sooon

Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa

🤗 thank u jaaneman...m a sucker for thrillers😉😛 grown up on sidney sheldon books😆

hope to maintain the mystery element...omg writing an FF is a really really tough task!