Ansh FF - Behind the veil - Part 7 and 8 - Updated on Page 19 (14/3)

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RainbowSun

@RainbowSun

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Hiral very nice

A theatre background- loved the idea

So who is Mahadev ?

The Hero of her next drama-😉

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sushma89

@sushma89

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

nice part 2 its really interesting

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chinmay

@Chinmay92

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Too good and cery interesting.
Sorry for commenting late on ur first one and doing it nw,second part is very nice.update soon.

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa

Payaliyaaa...- ❤️nice...letting out a secret - FFs and all are attempts to catch hold of u😛😉😆...updating soon😉😛

You clever girl, you!

It works. Stories always draw me back in. Guaranteed ❤️

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I know I said it last time but I will say it again. You are definitely growing and improving as a writer and your work just keeps getting better.

Loved the way you set up the theatre environment. I could just imagine it the way you have written. Description description 👏

And the flashback set up -> spiral to black to sepia to blood. What a way to head to the past and create a mystery. Am curiouser and curiouser 😊

Can't wait till the next one!

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love.sid

@love.sid

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

nce idea theater background

part 2 was intresting

update sooon

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Manshi

@Mithi_vani

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Hiralll ... Wts this ... 😲 .. 😲 ... Theater scene ... ... I thought its was real ... Omg .. A doing theater wow ... Interesting ... Nd past ... Swings .. Park .. Wts all this ... Nd who is Jagadis wt did he do??? Wts haunting A ???? Omg ... Hiral . .. ⭐️ ... 👏 .. I m so impress ... I m egaer to know wts all this ... Superb job Hiri ... 🤗 ... Waiting for next part .. ..