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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3883968
Part 2 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3883968&TPN=3

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"...Jagdeesh" she shrieked, jolting her eyes open. Her lips quivering, she clamped her mouth.

She looked up. A couple of ladies were staring at her from their seats, alarmed by her sudden shriek. She shifted her gaze down again, biting her lips, embarrassed by the moment.

After a moment, she felt someone laying a hand on her shoulder. She looked up to her light side. A young girl, carrying a sling bag, with freshly polished nails and wearing neon coloured t-shirt was standing with a bottle in her hand. Anandi assumed she was in college.

The girl smiled. "Are you ok, Anandijee?" She asked, extending the bottle of water to her.

Anandi was taken by surprise. How did she know her? She couldnt recollect meeting her before here?

"Haa, main theek hoon, woh bass buraa sapna dekh liya... aap mera...naam...kaise...jaanti hai?" hesitant, Anandi asked.

"Aap Anandi hai na, theatre actress? ofcourse, mai aapko jaanti hoon..." The young girl giggled in excitement. "Infact maine aapka sabse first play bhi dekha hai, meri mom ne khaas uss play ki cd buy ki thi, because she loved it..sanjeevani right?" She looked at Anandi in an excited manner.

Anandi nodded. Sanjeevani, the play that had changed her life forever. How could she ever forget it? She drifted out of her thought process almost immediately.

"Waise ur a wonderful actress Anandijee, aapke ek ek expressions...you know sabke inspiration movie actors hotey hai, par meri aap hai..such flawless performances from such a young age...I am an aspiring actor myself, maine acting ki institute bhi join ki hai...but aapki tarah I want to only do theatre...not interested in movies...the adrenaline rush of performing in front of live audience is something else na...please give me some tips?" The girl was almost about to jump out of excitement.

Anandi smiled back "Aapka naam kya hai, aur please mujhe sirf Anandi bulao"?

"Grishma, but pyaar se sab mujhe Gulli bulaate hai" she replied.

Amused, Anandi smiled "Toh gulli, pehle toh aapka shukriya, meri itni taareef karne ke liye...aaj ke zamaane mai tumhare jaisi yuva pidhi milni mushkil hai, jo naatako ko mulya samaj sakeyy...ek bahot hi adhboot anubhav hai...there are three things to a play:

1) It's a matter of direct communication between the audience and the actors.
2) Nothing can really equal the awe and sense of hushed expectation which is felt by a theatre audience and the actors as the curtain is slowly raised.
3) The more emotionally involved the audience becomes, the more the actors can play off the atmosphere they are receiving.

You have to live and feel the character...but just remember one thing...sometimes the difference between realism and imagination can thin down to such an extent that a person may get absorbed so much in the character, he or she forgets his own real being...Don't let that happen to yourself."

Anandi finished off thoughtfully. Gulli, surely had not understood most of it, but she was too much in awe of meeting her inspiration.

"Thank u Anandi, I ll surely remember these tips... it was great meeting you in person...really...oye mera station aa gaya" Gulli shook her hands and finally departed to get down at her station.

Anandi looked at her walking away. Such a bright, young and vibrant girl. Maybe still unaware of the googlies that the life could throw. The world of theatre...Anandi sighed...one play that could change her life forever and the same one destroyed it forever.

At that moment, Anandi felt a droplet of water on her palm. Another one, before she could wipe off the first one. The clouds were turning grey...the tiny droplets were gathering at a faster pace. It was beginning to rain outside. She recollected a shayari, which was his favourite -

Girti hui baarish ki bundon ko apne haton me samet lo,
jitna paani tum samet paye utna yaad tum humen karte ho,
jitna pani tum samet nahi paye, utna yaad hum tumhe karte hain..

With a flash of lightening and a sound of rumble...Anandi departed back to her childhood...

...To be continued...

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Awaiting response...humbled by the response from everyone sofar🤗 do let me know, how you'll liked this one😊

Edited by Hiral_Halwa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Res res res!
--edit--

I was just merrily going about my business when I saw you had updated the story...and then this happened...



Another wonderful update. I'm a major theatre fan and I loved how you captured the apprehension, excitement, anticipation and adulation one gets from being on stage 👏

Totally unexpected appearance of Gulli. In fact everything about this story is proving to be very unpredictable. Me likey!

And where did this come from?

Girti hui baarish ki bundon ko apne haton me samet lo,
jitna paani tum samet paye utna yaad tum humen karte ho,
jitna pani tum samet nahi paye, utna yaad hum tumhe karte hain..

My halwa is a kavi as well! 😲



I'm just so happy I could gush!!!! Which I am totally doing! *phangurling*

Cannot wait for another wall-slamming update!




Edited by Payali09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
omg omg...Hiral...🤗

kya story likh rahe hain tu 👍🏼

Girti hui baarish ki bundon ko apne haton me samet lo,
jitna paani tum samet paye utna yaad tum humen karte ho,
jitna pani tum samet nahi paye, utna yaad hum tumhe karte hain..


wha...wha...


btw Hero ki entry kab hogi ji...😉

Edited by blushing - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
hiral nice part you are making it more interesting loved it keep rocking
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: blushing

omg omg...Hiral...🤗

kya story likh rahe hain tu 👍🏼

Girti hui baarish ki bundon ko apne haton me samet lo,
jitna paani tum samet paye utna yaad tum humen karte ho,
jitna pani tum samet nahi paye, utna yaad hum tumhe karte hain..


wha...wha...


btw Hero ki entry kab hogi ji...😉


Thanks Aditi❤️

Usko time hai...may b the one after the next one😆 abhi toh build up ho raha hai😛 hero should get hero wali entry na😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushma89

hiral nice part you are making it more interesting loved it keep rocking


Thanks sushma❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it...
your writing is brilliant...
update the next part soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww ... Hiri .. Kya kamal kar rahi hai tu ... 🤗 .. ⭐️ .. Ananadi a briliant theater actress ... Wow .. Nd Guli immress with her ... Wtever u said about theater .. I totaly u/s nd agree with u .. As me too in my school clg days done many drama .. So i can u/s that feeling .. Uska ek alag hi maza nd thrill hai ... Its wonderfull experiance .. .. ❤️ .. Nd that sayari .. 'Girti hui baarish ki bundon ko apne haton
me samet lo,
jitna paani tum samet paye utna yaad tum
humen karte ho,
jitna pani tum samet nahi paye, utna yaad
hum tumhe karte hain..' ... Maasa alah Hiri ... Kya bat hai ...dil ko chhu gae yeh bat.. .. Kya sayari hai ...
😳 .. ⭐️ ... By each part .. U amaze me yar .. 👏 nd yar now u made me more curious about anandi's past ... Aisa kya hua hai??? ... Nd most imp que... Where is our Hero yar ... 😳 .. 😉 .. Hume intezar hai uska ...again superb part Hiri ... Waiting for next update .. ...
Edited by Mithi_vani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Nice part you are making it more interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hiral...🤗
Heart warming, dil ko choo lene waala update...❤️
Got a very pleasant surprise, that the setting is theatre..
Theatre artists are the " True Artists" ., unfortunately, there are given neither due recognition , fame nor money.
An actor, who is just a telly or a movie actor can never stand in their league.
Overwhelmed that your story focusses on one such artiste...😃
and then your shayari...take my bow...⭐️
So., this is what you actually do hiding behind trees in secluded places, in full perview of nature...Hmmm...😛😆
Awaiting next update...😳
Edited by adi2512 - 11 years ago

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