Aa jaa tujh ko pukaaray...ansh FF (last part updated )on 15/10 pg 18

part 1

she choose singh's over shekhar's. he left from there in anger.he was already upset because of the happening to his sister.as he went a tear trickled down her cheek." what have you done..you have spoilt your life..."sumitra shouted at her.

she could not help it.she went away from there.she went to her room(baadi haveli) and fell on the bed and started to cry badly.

he was not able to concentrate on the road.all he could think of about her."how could she do it...she choose them over me..her husband whom she loves more than her life?"he taught to himself.

(baadi havelli)

she wiped her tears and got up."why are you crying anandi?..you are the one who choose to stay here...he's eyes were telling you to go with him..but you didn't ...then why are you crying now..and whats the use of crying?"she asked herself.

"anandi you still can go to your family...you know that shiv loves you and you love him."sumitra told her."no ma... i am not going there.if you don't want me to stay here then tell me i will leave at once...but don't ask me to go to kesar bhaag."telling this she just from there."anandi listen to me..."sumitra told going back of her.

(kesar bhaag)

shiv was in the same state of anandi."baiyya..."mahi came to his room."baiyya you should go and bring bhabi back...bhabi will be upset...baadhi maa shouted at her family so badly...""mahi go from here...""but baiyya...""mahi go..."shiv shouted at him.he left at once.

shiv saw anandi's photo and placed it next to his heart.

to be continued😊

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part 2

anandi was standing in the backyard."lado"sumitra called."maaa..."anandi went and hugged sumitra and started to cry."tu..jitni din yaha rukna chahti hai.utni din ruk .."sumitra told her.

"lekin anandi tu..zayad din nahi ruk sakti tu shiv ke bina nahi rahe sakti..."sumitra told herself and smiled.At kesar bhaag everyon tried to cheer up shiv but it was of no use.

at last meenu went to his room."shiv...""choti mom..appp"as soon as he saw herhe wiped his tears."shiv kya tum anandi ke begar raha sakte ho?"she asked.he hugged her and started to cry like a small baby.

days passed by.one day was like a year for anandi and shiv without each other.

"ma..mein jaitser jaa raha hoon mhuje do din ke kaam hai"shiv told ira."jaitser"mahi asked."haan kyu""woh..mein bhi aata hoon...""yaha tu kya karega?""woh mein...mere dost se mil sakta hoon...""dost?"shiv asked"haan..woh...woh nitin..""chaal tik hai."shiv and mahi left for jaitser.

the first day shiv went to meet the present collector of jaitser.mahi was in the hotel.he called up anandi."mahi baiyya..."anandi taught and picked up the call."hello""hello bhabi..you have nothing against me right""no mahi baiyya...""how are you bhabi??""shiv ke bina kese rahe sakti hoon"she told softly.mahi heard it and smiled."what bhabi?"he asked."nothing mahi baiyya.""bhabi i am in jaitser i had come to visit my friend..so i taught that i could meet you as well.""ok mahi baiyya...where do you want to meet?""today evening near the lake...""ok mahi baiyya...bye...""bye bhabi."

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