Aa jaa tujh ko pukaaray...ansh FF (last part updated )on 15/10 pg 18 - Page 3

Nice update finally ansh united but what's that new twist who was shot update soon.Can u give longer updates plz.

A good update.

Gunshot...what is this ? Waiting eagerly for the next update.

part 4

the bullet hit straight on anandi's waist."anandi..." shiv screamed.she fell on the ground.at that time even mahi came."baiyya...kya hua.."mahi asked.shiv started to cry."baiyya..iss qaut rone ka nahi..bhabi ko hospital le janeka hai..."

"haan...tu ghadi start kar mein anandi ko lekar aata hoon."mahi took the key and went.anandi had a bit conscious."sh...shiv...""haan anandi..""i love you sh..."before she could complete she was unconscious.tears trickled down shiv's eyes.he lifted her in his arms and took her to the car.

they took her to the operation theater.shiv was holding her hand till they reached the operation theater.then he sat on the chair and started to cry.mahi tried to console him."baiyya..relax bhabi ko kuch nahi hoga...aur police bhi aate hi honge...""mahi...anandi meri duniya agar use kuch hogay..."before shiv could complete"jab tak app hai baiyya bhabi ko kuch nahi hoga."mahi told.shiv hugged mahi and cried.

mahi called up the singhs and shekhars and informed them.the shekhars left from updaipur. the singhs reached the hospital.sumitra came running."meri lado...""maa...anandi operation theater mein hai..."shiv told."tu chup ho ja..tujise yeh sab huva hai..."shiv was more hurt.bhairon came there"shiv beta...woh bahoot dukh mein hai...tu chinta maath kar."shiv gave a weak smile.bhairon was asking mahi about how all this happened.

everyone were sitting."are..doctor agaye"dadisa told.all of them got up."dr.meri anandi kasi hai..?"shiv asked."app ko himat rakni hoga mr shekhar.she is in critical condition hum abhi tak bullet nahi dund paye hai..abb sab uski ssath may..i am sorry..agar unhe hosh aya toh hum kuch kar sakye hai karna..."

shiv held the doctors collar.that time the shekhars aalso arrived."agar meri anandi ko kuch ho gaya toh...""mr.shekhar you are in a hospital...""shiv chodo unhe..."alok told.shiv felt him.the nurse came running."dr.uski haalt aur bigad rahi hai..."the doctor also went.sumitra looked at ira with anger."woh..sumitra ji..."sumitra just turned her face.

shiv just feel on the ground."sab meri vajse ho raha hai...""nahi shiv sambal apne aap ko.."daddu tried to console him.

"uff...why are you all acting like this...uff that anandi .""what did you tell saanchi"shiv asked her."yes baiyya...anyways if she dies..."shiv slapped her.she started to cry."shiv yeh kya...""maa..please..":aap uske liye ...slapped me...apni doll ko..""yoh meri zindagi hai...sab na tei wajse hi hua...na tum ko jagdeesh se pyaar hota..na app dono ki shaadi fix hota..na tumhari natak jagdeesh ke samne aata..na tumhari shaadi tooth jaata na meri anandi yaha rahti..na yeh sab kuch hua hota."saanchi went away from there."saanchi beta meri baath..."ira also went back of her.

meenu asked shiv to relax.the singh's were shocked to see saanchi's behavior.just then the doctor arrived."dr.kya hua"alok asked."we are sorry...but hum kuch nahi kar sakte...agar dr.jagdeesh yaha hote toh shaayad kuch kar pate."

hope all of you like it

to be continued

part five page eight

thanks aditititli, Anjujag, shivan1978, justmesumana, yamijala, Chit15,

Radhika While posting my comment for the previous update internet got disconnected. Previous was good .Keep it up.👍🏼😊

heeyy...awesome yaar...i want anandi to take the bullet and it happened...and who shot her...what shiv did to him..surprise-ah...and here comes jagdishzz...he has to save anandi...great..waiting for next one...

The story is nice .Concept is good👍🏼. Kudos for the effort.👏 Keep up the good work.😊

😊 good work.Please keep updating fast..

Very well eritten and a very nice part but who shot her.Thankgod shiv understood that sanchi's behaviour.Hope anandi will be fine.

A good update...quite interesting. Thank you for the PM.