Aa jaa tujh ko pukaaray...ansh FF (last part updated )on 15/10 pg 18 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a short update but so nice plz update fastly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
plz write liltle more
this is too short...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gud one but please give a little bigger updates

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nice update dear...👏continue soon.😃
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Nice update😊. Loving it. Do try to elaborate.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice radhika..
hope anandi meets shiv shiv instead of mahi at the lake..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3

shiv returned to the hotel."baiyya i am getiing bored ...lets go oit some where"mahi told as soon as shiv entered the room."mahi i already had told you before leaving udaipur that you will get bored.""i know..but mhuje kahi leke jaiye.""ajkele kyu nahi chala jkata?""baiya...please."


"aacha kaha jana hai tumhe??"shiv asked him,."lake...""lake??""kyu vaha nahi ja sakte kya...bhabi ki yaad aa jayegi?"mahi asked with a tease."nahi..mhuje kisi ki bhi yaad nahi ayegi..chalo chalte hain."mahi just smiled and both of them left.


shiv and mahi reached the lake."baiyya woh app cheliye mein abi aata hoon.""lekin mahi...""baiyya chaliye app..."telling this mahi left.shiv went and stood facing the lake.all he could think was about was anandi.


anandi came and saw mahi standing near the lake."mahi baiyya..."he turned back.anandi was shocked to see shiv and he was equally shocked.they stood there looking at each other.a tear tricked down her eyes.she ran and hugged him.he to hugged her back.


"mein apke bina nahi rahe sakti shiv."she told hugging him tighter."mein bhi anandi...i love you."they stood there.mahi who was looking at them smiled.suddenly they heard a gun shot.


hope all of you like it😊

will continue soon.


part four page five


Edited by radhika_kiran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice story
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what i expected has happened..yay...
ansh hug...nice..

and gun shot...hope someone shot anandi...

lets see...

continue soo...
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nice story please update next part quickly

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