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ExcuseMePlz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

jamy ,index is there in the second page from part 1 to 7...I will soon update the index and will add the other parts. ..

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zephyr29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

First of all extremely sorry, Shanky, for this months long tardiness 😳. Anyways going to make up for it here by giving my two bits on each part 😳:

Part 1

Love the way these two are so attuned to each other. They automatically sense what mood the other is in and how they feel.

Jagya's guilt at his past is still so strong that its eating him up almost every moment. You have showed it here so clearly where he is not even ready to listen to someone else's opposite view of him. Guess it will take a long time for him to get over it.

Ganga, poor thing, has started to feel Dr.Sa's pain so deeply to the point that if he is hurt she is suffering. But she is completely confused and bewildered what it is that she is experiencing. She is even thinking whether she is physically alright or not 😆. Which just goes to show how alien the feeling of love is for her. Again you have expressed this so beautifully.

An excellent and emotional start to the FF, Shanky ⭐️. Well Done 👏

Next review coming up...

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charuluv_SV

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

wonderful and emotional update yaar😊

dr.sa feeding Ganga☺️

hope we will get to see in BV too😳i love sumi here😃

dr.sa start to fall😉hope Ganga too😳

thank u dr.sa😳

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Brahmaputra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: shankythebest
jamy ,index is there in the second page from part 1 to 7...I will soon update the index and will add the other parts. ..

okay. I did not see that. I will go through it.

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zephyr29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Part 2

Oho! Ganga looks really caught by the love bug 😉. She's taking such a huge step as to check out on her Dr.Sa in the middle of the night!

Loved the slow build up and ending with a cliffhanger 👍🏼

You should probably try your hand at writing serials, you have clearly understood where to stop and leave your readers wanting for more 😊.

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ExcuseMePlz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: sushiani
ok i am dead.. kya jagya ne apne haathon se khilayaa☺️
shanky i am blushing yaara☺️
having gosebumps imagining the scene..
phir se padne do mujhe i forgot the first scenes.. after reading the end of this part..☺️
will comment on it later..

Sush,thanks for the wonderful comment...You had goosebumps!Aww,thats so sweet sush...thank you...

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ExcuseMePlz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: flutterby
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i actually liked jagya running back and forth... 🤣 from car to hall and then back with so many bags...

this sumi... 👍🏼 was the sumi that i paid attention to... nowadays sumi is just... 🤬

🤣 ganga first hesitates to eat from daktersaa's hand and then demands that he feed her...
i loved these lines..

Ganga ate like she was hungry for years and jagya was not getting tired
feeding her with his own hands...Both were enjoying the moment...

it was so cute yaa... shanks... ☺️ thankyou... ( beta jagya from ur maa kumi) 😉
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I wish I could have more clearly write that running scene...mere maan ka nehi hua actually...

Thaks to you flutter for reading it and commenting...index is totally ready...its in page 2...All the links from part 1 to part 15 are there...

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ExcuseMePlz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: -Jamy-
Wonderfully written😃. You've made Sumitra's nature fitting to her name! I love it. I hope CVs read it and learn...

Thank you...I tried,its my first FF...I never tried to write any kind of story ever in my whole life but this couple inspired me and just trying hard to write...thank you ji for liking it...hope you will read all the parts...

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ExcuseMePlz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: sushiani
mera dost mere yaar jagya..
you knocked out my senses with last scene pushed me to dreamland haaye..
hmm dr.sab talking abt destiny.. aww he is talking abt it often these days in show too..
jagya running out like that... bhaag Jagya bhaag🤣🤣
awwe sumi carressing ganga and mannu wiping sumi's tears
wish we get this sumi back.. pls sumi sudhar jao pls😡
Jagya proudly looking at her and something which is new has started.. hmm i was waiting for this start😳
ganga is pretty angel even simple ghaghras mein bhi she looks beautiful.. if the dress is selected by her dr.saab toh she will look like a bomb..
And the last scene poor girl.. she was looking at the plate as if she is hungry for years...
well i can understand ganga here just like we were hungry for JaGan scenes since few weeks😆
and he made her eat.. with his own hands no spoon between us.. like no lies between us☺️
awesome update shanky dil kush kardiya🤗

Wow sush,super cool comment...thank you thank you thank you,yaara...

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ExcuseMePlz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: shankythebest
jamy ,index is there in the second page from part 1 to 7...I will soon update the index and will add the other parts. ..

index is ready jamy...part 1 to part 15 all the links in page 2...Hope it will be easy for you to read...