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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sushiani

hmm tou ganga ko kuch kuch hua😉


pen romance was worth remembering evrytime😳

so ds observed how excited jagya is

coughing saga🤣🤣jagya tum ko kya hogaya hai😆🤣and he don't wanna reveal it😆..shanky awesome👍🏼

yeh kya shopping😲tumhe pata hain maine shopping ki hai.. my cousin's wedding in this oct..

toh likes itne match ho rahe hai

JaGan challenge.. n the miracle happened

kya he said it😆hope ganga use this cough saga for future legpulling..

waiting for next update shanky

awesome update🤗🤗



thanks sush mere dost...thank god you liked it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nehamurat

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">Wow there are Ffs on Jagya and Ganga too ?
That;s great.😃</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">Starting is really good.😊
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thank you so much for appreciating...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 2sanjana

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">😊nice.

update soon 😊
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thank you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I actually cant believe it has been almost 20 days that I have updated FF...din kaise guzarte hai mujhe pata hi nehi chalta...This update is dedicated to Rama my tausa...Rama I hope you like it...nervous...

Part 15

Jagya:I don't know...But I think God knew you will be sad so he created a situation so that I
can tell you and we both can laugh at it and your sadness will disappear...

They both were smiling looking at each other...

It was evening...They went for shopping in the morning...They didn't even eat anything as they were so busy.They went to the decorators and gave all the decoration stuffs,then reached haveli...Now a huge task was pending, taking all the shooping bags inside badi haveli...

Jagya stopped the car in front of haveli and said...

Jagya:How will we take the bags inside?

Ganga thought and said...

Ganga:First let me go,I will check and will inform you whether we can take the bags or not...

Jagya:Ok...I am waiting here...

Ganga got out of the car and went inside...There was nobody...The path was crystal clear for them...She came back to Jagya and said

Ganga: Hall is totally clear...You can easily take the bags in your room...

Jagya:Ok I will take ma's bags,you take bapusa's...Let me go inside then after waiting for sometime you will follow me...ok?

Ganga nodded...Jagya took the bags and went inside,he was trying to walk normally,both of his hands were filled with bags...As ganga said there was no one in the hall so he took as much bags as possible,if somebody appears in front of him he will not be able to hide the bags...Jagya decided he will run as fast as possible towards his room,he cant waste time by walking...Jagya turned to enter the hall...As he was thinking and no one was there thing was in his mind he walked two three steps and entered the hall...To his shock he realized everyone from ds to bapusa to ma to taisa are sitting in the hall room and he is standing there with hand full of bags...At once he turned and ran as fast as possible towards the car...

Luckily only DS realized something entering and then disappearing though she couldn't find out that it was jagya...

It was almost dark outside...Ganga saw dactarsaa entering the corridor of the haveli,he asked to follow him after waiting for sometime...Ganga took the bags and started walking slowly...Ganga saw jagya turning to enter the hall...After a moment ganga saw a running dactarsaa coming towards her,looking at the way dactarsaa running crazily ganga got scared and without thinking much she turned and she also started running towards the car...Both of them reached the car...Both were breathing hard...

Jagya:What is wrong with you Ganga...Thik se check to karleti...You should have checked properly...

Ganga:But what happened dactarsa!!!

Jagya:What happened!!!Everyone is sitting in the hall room...I even entered the hall but thank God nobody noticed me I guess..

Ganga:But there was nobody when I went there...

Jagya:Achcha,ok,let it be...Lets keep the bags inside the car...Can't take risks...I will take the bags at night...Lets go inside...I hope no one noticed me...

Ganga:Sorry dactarsaa...

Jagya:It was not your fault Ganga...Its ok...

They entered and understood nobody noticed jagya...both of them took a sigh of relief...

After that no blunder happened,everything was going smooth and according to their plan...Decorations,sugna calling bhairon and sumi,jagya taking the bags,everything...Now it was the time when jagya was going to reveal his surprise to his ma bapusa...Both of them were in their room...Jagya came along with the entire family including ganga and mannu and revealed the surprise...Everyone got emotional but were very happy...Sumitra understood why her son was behaving weirdly and was giving her health tips more aptly beauty tips but didn't want to embarass her son by revealing it...When Jagya said how much ganga helped him sumitra caressed ganga's face lovingly and was crying...Mannu didn't like his kakisa crying so he wiped sumitra's tears with her tiny little hand...Sumitra couldn't stop herself from smiling and took mannu from ganga and kissed him...

Jagya was emotional,he said...

Jagya:Stop crying ma...today is your mehendi...Get ready both of you...mehmaan abhi aate hi honge...

Bhairon:Mehmaan!!!Jagya you called guests also!!!

Jagay:Its a grand wedding bapusa...A typical Rajasthani wedding...No guests means no wedding...Its your marriage and it will take place following all the customs and rituals...Its my ma and bapusa's marriage,I am very serious about it...Bride and bridegroom should only enjoy keeping all the tensions aside...

Atlast Jagya's mom was blushing and said...

Sumitra:Jagya tu bhi na...

Jagya gave a lovable smile to her mother and then looked at Ganga proudly...He thanked Ganga in his mind..Jagya's feelings for Ganga changed that moment but he couldn't realize it...Ganga also couldn't realize or didn't notice the change in dactarsaa's eyes as she was not looking at him..

Dadisa:Ok ok now lets go...Let them get ready and let us do our work...

Jagya came out of his thought...All of them exited from the room and went to their work...

In the evening guests started visiting...Ganga was hesitating to dress up,she tried hard not to look good but that was of no use...She was looking beautiful wearing the dress selected by dactarsa for mehendi...Mannu was also ready...Ganga got busy in work...She put mehendi on kakisa's hand...Everybody was enjoying and having mehendi in their hands...Sumitra,Gehna,sugna asked ganga to apply mehendi but she was so busy that she said later,she even forgot that she hasn't eat anything after lunch...Finally after the ceremony ended ganga got the time and Sugna beautifully designed ganga's both hands with mehendi...Both of them went to their rooms...

Mehendi will take time to dry up,Ganga thought...She felt hungry...She ignored for ten minutes but then she realized she can't wait more...She went to the kitchen and requested makhan kaka to give her food and take the food to her room...Makhan kaka kept the plate on her table...Looking at the plate ganga felt more hungry...She thought of washing her hands but her hands were looking so beautiful that she rejected the idea...

Jagya was in his room...It was an awesome day...Mehendi is an occasion for ladies but the male gang also enjoyed in their own way...He was satisfied and happy...

Jagya thought she didn't even see ganga after the guests started coming...Did she wore the dress I gave to her...He himself answered his question...Why she will not wear it...How she was looking,did she applied mehendi!...Jagya realized he shouldn't think like that...He decided to meet ganga and talk to her and asked her how was her day...

Jagya reached Ganga's room,door was open...He saw Ganga sitting on the bed and there was mehendi in her both hands...Jagya thought to himself she is beautiful...But soon he came out of his thoughts as he got curious seeing ganga staring at the plate...She didn't even notice him standing in front of the entrance...He called her...

Jagya:Ganga...

Ganga:Dactarsa,come in,plz...sorry I didn't notice you...

Jagya:What happened?Why are you staring at the plate like this?

Ganga felt embarrassed and said...

Ganga:I am hungry...But can't eat,mehendi hai na,it will take time to dry up...but I am feeling very hungry, that can't wait...But cant ruin the mehendi also...

Jagya:Whats the big deal?Kisiko bol deti ke khilade...Mujhe bula leti main khila deta...Itni der taak bhuki behti ho...tum bhi kamal karti ho ganga!!!

Ganga:I will eat later...not now...kisiko bulane ki jaruraat nehi...

Jagya:O come on,let me try...Mere haat se kha logi ya spoon lau...

Ganga:No no dactarsa,plz you don't bother...

Jagya:Ok then I am calling sugna jiji, wo tumhe khila dengi...Its insane to stare at food like a bhukkar...Look at your tantrums yaar...

Ganga:No dactarsa don't call sugna jiji,she is tired...abhi abhi to gayi hai...

Jagya:Then lets go to dadisa's room,chalega?

Ganga:Nehi dactarsa,dadisa nehi...you are too ziddi... thik hai aap hi khilado...But I am warning you baad mein meri taang maat khichna iss baat ko lekar...

Jagya:Thats like a good girl...No No I will not pull your legs,I will never mention to anyone about the look you were giving to the poor plate...

Ganga:Mujhe nehi khana...I dont wanna eat...

Jagya:Stop your typical girlish behaviour...Mujhe nehi khana...huh...Ok I will not pull your leg on this matter..

Jagya took the food in his hand and offered it to Ganga and said...

Jagya:Eat...

First Ganga hesitated but then she ignored and ate...If someone cares for you so much why caring what is right and what is wrong...If dactarsa doesn't feel feeding me is wrong then why should I feel eating from his hand is wrong...

Ganga ate like she was hungry for years and jagya was not getting tired feeding her with his own hands...Both were enjoying the moment...

Ganga finished eating...Jagya took the glass and helped her to drink water...He took the plate by himself and said...

Jagya:I will put this in the sink...Don't you dare to cut my words...You take rest...I will put this...

Jagya was leaving...Just then ganga called him...

Ganga:Dactarsaa?

Jagya turned and answer...

Jagya:Hmmm...

Ganga:Thank you...(with a smile)

Jagya:You are welcome Ganga...(a bigger wala smile)


Edited by shankythebest - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ok i am dead.. kya jagya ne apne haathon se khilayaa☺️
shanky i am blushing yaara☺️
having gosebumps imagining the scene..
phir se padne do mujhe i forgot the first scenes.. after reading the end of this part..☺️
will comment on it later..
Edited by sushiani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres

i actually liked jagya running back and forth... 🤣 from car to hall and then back with so many bags...

this sumi... 👍🏼 was the sumi that i paid attention to... nowadays sumi is just... 🤬

🤣 ganga first hesitates to eat from daktersaa's hand and then demands that he feed her...
i loved these lines..

Ganga ate like she was hungry for years and jagya was not getting tired feeding her with his own hands...Both were enjoying the moment...

it was so cute yaa... shanks... ☺️ thankyou... ( beta jagya from ur maa kumi) 😉

Edited by flutterby - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderfully written😃. You've made Sumitra's nature fitting to her name! I love it. I hope CVs read it and learn...
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Posted: 11 years ago
beta jagya... i mean shanks.. 😳 a small request... 😳

can u make an index for your chaps... so we know which pg to go onto to read them...

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Posted: 11 years ago
mera dost mere yaar jagya..
you knocked out my senses with last scene pushed me to dreamland haaye..
hmm dr.sab talking abt destiny.. aww he is talking abt it often these days in show too..
jagya running out like that... bhaag Jagya bhaag🤣🤣
awwe sumi carressing ganga and mannu wiping sumi's tears
wish we get this sumi back.. pls sumi sudhar jao pls😡
Jagya proudly looking at her and something which is new has started.. hmm i was waiting for this start😳
ganga is pretty angel even simple ghaghras mein bhi she looks beautiful.. if the dress is selected by her dr.saab toh she will look like a bomb..
And the last scene poor girl.. she was looking at the plate as if she is hungry for years...
well i can understand ganga here just like we were hungry for JaGan scenes since few weeks😆
and he made her eat.. with his own hands no spoon between us.. like no lies between us☺️
awesome update shanky dil kush kardiya🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeah. I agree with flutterby. We need an Index. Else its a little difficult to read.

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