JaGan..FF..Forever yours...Updated Part15 page32 - Page 27

Originally posted by: zephyr29

First of all extremely sorry, Shanky, for this months long tardiness 😳. Anyways going to make up for it here by giving my two bits on each part😳:

Part 1

Love the way these two are so attuned to each other. They automatically sense what mood the other is in and how they feel.

Jagya's guilt at his past is still so strong that its eating him up almost every moment. You have showed it here so clearly where he is not even ready to listen to someone else's opposite view of him. Guess it will take a long time for him to get over it.

Ganga, poor thing, has started to feel Dr.Sa's pain so deeply to the point that if he is hurt she is suffering. But she is completely confused and bewildered what it is that she is experiencing. She is even thinking whether she is physically alright or not 😆. Which just goes to show how alien the feeling of love is for her.Again you have expressed this so beautifully.

An excellent and emotional start to the FF, Shanky ⭐️. Well Done👏

Next review coming up...

first of all I am so happy to see you made such a detailed comment... I myself got emotionally attached with this two so tried writing on them...thank you zephy for reading and also commenting...

Originally posted by: charuluv_SV

wonderful and emotional update yaar😊

dr.sa feeding Ganga☺️

hope we will get to see in BV too😳i love sumi here😃

dr.sa start to fall😉hope Ganga too😳

thank u dr.sa😳

charu thanks babes for commenting...Extremely happy that you liked it...

Originally posted by: zephyr29

Part 2

Oho! Ganga looks really caught by the love bug😉. She's taking such a huge step as to check out on her Dr.Sa in the middle of the night!

Loved the slow build up and ending with a cliffhanger👍🏼

You should probably try your hand at writing serials, you have clearly understood where to stop and leave your readers wanting for more 😊.

LOL...I deliberately left that part like that but there was no surprise...ganga was there in front of dactarsa...

Part 3

Lovely update Shanky 😊 aww Dr.sab ne apne hanthon se khilaya apni Ganga ko 😳 loved two moment the most Ganga watching the plate lyk bhukar and Jagya running back after seeing everyone in hall..uske piche Ganga v running. These two kids 🤣 ❤️ enjoyd so much.

Originally posted by: zephyr29

Part 3

Hilarious part😆. Each one trying to make sure the other is okay. Ganga getting him to talk to her and him trying to force his medicine on her😆, and both of them waking up with restlessness, headache and lost thoughts, which will finally culminate with a nice bump which you have again left dangling-off-the-cliff for us 😉.

Loved Ganga's awkwardness and comic moments trying to escape from Dr.Sa. She is soo a girl in love😆

yes the girl is in serious danger which can be named as love...very happy that you find it hilarious...thank you

Originally posted by: KiranlovSriti

Lovely update Shanky 😊 aww Dr.sab ne apne hanthon se khilaya apni Ganga ko 😳 loved two moment the most Ganga watching the plate lyk bhukar and Jagya running back after seeing everyone in hall..uske piche Ganga v running. These two kids 🤣 ❤️ enjoyd so much.

yes dr sa fed ganga with his own hands...maine jaab first part likha tha or perhaps second part,taab rama suggested to put a scene where jagya will feed ganga with his own hands...wo likhte likhte 15 parts lag gaye...

Thanks kiran for commenting...

Shanky yaara.. Thanks for dedicating the update for me. Loved it loved it...you fulfilled my dream of jagya feeding Ganga. I am sure Ganga will be soo beautiful with mehendi and new dress her docsaa bought.. I wished we could see a proper Jagan wedding.. But looks like we won't...no problem.. Your update is there to imagine..write more.. Don't take soo long for the next update yaar...

Yo shanky. just read your first part. very nice starting.

ha in the starting i was only foccused on the show witch sumi... she is amazing in ur ff so cute n sweet..