Ansh SS 'Ek Junoon EK Ibadaat' (chapt 10 -page 24) - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..wow.. Aditi.. kya bat hai...😳... Mr.. Khadus.. akadu... Devil..Don..😈😎.. Shivraj Shekhar ka yeh soft part roop bhi hai..😳...😉😆😆😆... Kya bat hai... maza a gaya...🥳...
nd ohhh... that hug... ankho ki gustakhiya... maf ho...😳😉😉...
Well Anandi ne usse pana pura sach kyu nahi batya,... one more twist...😲😲😲...
nd I love Shyam-Shugna-Ashima ke rections...😛😆😆😆😆...440 wlt ke zatake...😉😆😆..
nd last wala to bahot hi mast tha... dono... Anandi nd Ashima... niharounging...
Don Sji..😎 nd Mr.. Doni... koe farak hi nahi padta...😛😆😆😆...
well bachu padega... kuch time bad jarur padega...😉😆😆😆
Superb part Aditi... I like Sji ka short roop...Day Dreaming...
This is for u...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update!!

Suspense is awesome!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow vry nice...plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW! Great going Aditi ...Thx for the few laugh out loud funny dialogues in the romantic suspense. HAAA You thought that you wrote a mystery suspense 😉 thaari sararat saab janu mai. 😛
The hug sc was very well written...though he took time but it is quite evident that how much he desires her😉. Her soft, sweet scent set his blood afire, and no wonder he had to wrap her in his arms to chase the sadness from her eyes. To Anandi it would have been only all hard muscle for now but picture abhi baaki hai 😳 ...better make it dangerously passionate 😆
For a second I thought that I was reading a book by Linda Howard😆

Don ji bring on all the dangers now 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much for wonderful comment 🤗

Tina U comparing me with Linda Howard 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome Aditi...anandi falling for Shiv...bahut acha lag raha hai mujhe...ki Shiv bhaav kha raha hai 😆so a triangle is coming up ...intresting...and yeh suspense kab khulega?
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Posted: 12 years ago
when is the next update??? its more than a week now.
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Posted: 12 years ago


part 7




Shivraaj mobile buzz breaking silence in home as both girl gazes are steady at him

He pick up.. and walk away form them.. to talk with sehgal..

Shivraaj eyebrow raise as he heard news form sehgal.. Something is really going on interesting.. he thought to himself..

He turn and glare both girl direction..

Anandi suddenly found her breakfast most entertaining so she just go and join breakfast table with maman

Ashima stand there looking at shivraaj with fear fool eyes.. he glance towards breakfast table and move form there..

She understood and too join for breakfast.

Hi I am ashima khurana.. ashima introduce herself to anandi

Hi anandi smile back and nod in acknowledgment

Both started to have breakfast together..

Its goes well with silence.. as shiv come and took his seat as well

"miss khurana.. he voice made ashima almost jump in panic attack

:"sehgal tumhe address dega tumhe wha par jana hai. .dekho koi evidence milta hai ki nahi. Muje us lakdi ki bare mai jankar chahiye kisibhi kimat par.."

Ye sir.. ashima only able to nod in yes..

Koun ladki.. anandi could not stop herself to raise question..

Before ashima could protest and said anything..

Shiv replied to her.

"anandi its about work matter ...that I am working over it.."

Anandi to nodded in understanding.. and says nothing in reply..

Ashima is really surprise that girl actually asked question to him and managed to get away with it.. Without receiving anger in return… she wonder.. now she is sure.. this is same girl who is ordering him yesterday.. when sehgal inform about call info..

The way he shower his concern over her.. and even his tone talking with her little calm and compose.. Something is really change in him.. as she never received this kind of attention form him.. this is the first time she witness something like this. .that he is showing little more care to others . the air is started changing. .and she can feel it.. she feel little bad that this affection is not for her but for someone else.. but she didn't mind it.. , she feel happy for shivraaj.. at least now he will be understand.. that happiness is meant for him as well.. she glance at anandi direction who is happily munching her breakfast.. she will teach him to love..

Anandi thought drafted once again more and more about ashima.. as look wise she is decent.. nice girl.. her eyes the way admire shiv.. she understood that.. she like him.. but this is puzzle her. Why this hurt her if anyone interested in shiv.. she kind of hate it when his attention shifted form her towards someone else.. but she knows it that he is no interested in this ashima anyways.. wo to uska naam bhi nahi leta miss khurna bulata hai"she thought happily.. and who the hell is this new girl that information shiv trying to find out.. What is special about her that he is so interested to finding about her..

Her thoughts of chain broke suddenly ..as she heard shiv voice

Maman there is news about related khajan singh murder.. new acp talk something about his case. But he is keeping away from media as this is important for the murder investigation. " I am sure acp ko kuch to mila hoga.. bahot important case hai ye. he said seriously and continue saying.. Aaj live conference huvi this uski..media ki vajah se leni padi use.. subah.. wo kisi political leader ko protection de raha tha.. road show mai.. tabhi media ne gher liya..to javb dena pada" he chuckle in the end..

Hmm media ke sath sabko interst hai is case mai.. dekhte hai kya hota hai.. naam kya hai.. naye acp ka..maman asked

Maman din bhar media wale interview dikhate rahge tv par… so dekh lijiye naam bhi mil jayega… after all this all about business.. wo to dikhaynge hi.. as soon as anandi heard is she froze at place.. herrdad.. shiv just talk about her dad… its right time to tell him about her.. but its left her stunned to.. she is just.. to much stunned to react…

Shiv left.. for his work as well… bidding good bye to maman.. as usual forgetting her.. but she didn't mind today..

Papa.. anandi whisper to herself… color of face faded as soon she here about it… whatever shiv said left her curious.. may be new acp will be the link but how did she contact him. And what will she asked him.. can she trust that man who is doing investigation.. no.. she is not sure.. she have to find out first who are doing this investigation..

Shiv words ring in her ears about new acp and her dad case… she is more determined to find out more.. may be acp interview will help too... anandi think herself...


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the office enter in office more angrily... his other fellow look at him with fear

kya huva.. one constable asked other.. sir ka mood itna gusse mai kyu hai

wo aaj suabah.. leader ko protection de rahe they.. media ne gher liya.. wahi famous case.. sir ka gussa tab se sar par chada huva hai.. pehli baar sir ke kaam parr sawal utha hai.. so he is angry.. very angry..

well leking sir ne to acha javad diya media ko.. pehle media ke baja aaye.. ab lagta hai hamari bajanewale hai... the other one said it..

all are agree with giving fearful glace to there boss

bheem singh.. the officers voice come suddenly... making jump in fright.. to others..

jee.. bheem singh come running to greet him..

ji sir..

sare officer ki meeting bulao jaldi.. abhi urgent.. aur case file mere table par chahiye muje..

kounsi case file sir

acp jagdish singh ke logo ko inta bhi nahi pata ki kounsi file... wow.. media ne police par sawal uthaya.. kuch naya nahi hai.. tum log hi uski vjah ho.. mere passs.. aiske aalwa jo aur case hai wo inte important nahi hai.. mai us par meeting bulavu... to kounsa case hoga..

kounsa sir.. bheem singh asked.. again

bheeem singh khajan singh murder file lavo. bevkoof...

ji sir abhi lata hu... aab samne hote hai to soch nahi pata hu mai...

javo.. he shouted again

bheem singh come back with file.. and left.. in hurry.. not wanted to face his anger..

jagdish know that.. he is being to rude to him.. but just today conference with media irked him more. .and more irked him that arrogant leader.. who completely.. wanted to show him only responsible for this mess in front of media.. bull sheet.. here the wanted to him to take responsibility of there protection .. for security reason.. and the same time wanted to full proof investigation to.. with difficult case.. well the case is different.. criminal is not easy... its not peace of cake to find him easily... he know that this case is more then.. that.. there lot of hiding behind this murder... its not magic show that he cant bring anyone on there demand,.. its frustrated him.. but what frustrated him more.. that the case his more then complicated that he expect to be.. still there is not clue.. he told media he have something and he cant disclose it.. well there is not much proof he has now... the case turning complicated.. very complicated...he thought as he take look at case file again.. the postmortem report is there too.. there many thing he need to discuss with his other officers too.. about current result of case... the smirk of his face is visible...its so visible.. that anyone would understand if they saw him.. he really soothing have in his sleeves..

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Shiv was taking update for his team mates.. ashima found nothing in that apartment. .when khajan used to live.. he didn't find any information about his daughter.. that mean he was hiding if from long..he actually plan it form long that why.. his daughter is unreachable .. he cant even able to get single photograph of hers.. in childhood she used to study there.. but they only remember how she used to look in childhood.. no certain member even remember her name. or may be they dont want to reveled it.. lado what kind of name is that.. he thought frustrated... well at least give him good news..

shiv come back in afternoon to completing his all work..

yeah sehgal.. he speak as he received phone call

your information was feb.. this new acp is really is something.. jadish singh his name isnt it... the way he handled media i am really impress..

so sir what next step for us in this case..

well uske bare mai aur information hai.. nature kaisa hai uska... money minded hai.. kahi bikavu to nahi hai shivraaj asked

no sir.. kehte hai bahot hi imandaar hai.. uska record bahot accah hai... he is great person for this case.

imandaar not bad... well..uskie personal information dhundo... about his personal life.. uski weakness.. and all.. find out about him more..muje meri informer ne batya hai .. ki wo aaj hi koi meeting arrange karnewala hai... apne officer ke sath is case se related.. aur shayad acp ko kuch mila hai is case se related... .

sir aapko kaise.. sehgala asked in surprised

relax.. i have my own source... its not easy to find out

shiv was busy on phone.. when at the same time anandi is watching video.. of jagdish conference again and again.. she surprise to find her college mate... jagdish is charge on this case.. she remember he was her friend in college.. just like others.. he was soft spoken and kind of like her as well as her friends suspect that he was in love with her... but she never believed on this.. her friendship with him all nice .. he is caring guy.. but not her type... same like her other friend he to don't know that.. her father is political leader.. her dad never allowed her to reveled about it.. even when she watch her dad interview with her friends in past.. no one now that she is sharing the beautiful relationship with that man.. father and daughter.. bond.. jagdish is not exception either.. but she can reveled it now to him.. but if she wanted to know about case. .she have to meet him.. in casual manner to finding out her dad case without letting him know.. his liking towards her may be help.. she thought with smirk.. well shiv ko sath lekar jati hu.. mai akle to bahar nahi jaskati... just his name bring smile on her face .. forgetting all tension and worry everything is left behind... suddenly she wish to see him..

she come in hall and saw shiv was busy with his mobile phone as always.. did he every give rest to that poor instrument... she thought angrily and mutter.. to grab his attention.. but all vain...


she heard him say the last line us se milna hoga muje.. sure.. its time to meet him ... kal hi milta hu mai us se... and he hang up.. she didn't heard rest...


shiv muje tumse baat karni hai.. anandi shouted.. in top of voice

anandi kitni jor se chilla rahi hu.. mai yahi hu.. padosi ke ghar par nahi hu.. he teased her..

tum kal mere sath chal rahe ho.. mere friend se milne lejavoge muje

par anandi.. muje kal ek important kaam ke liye jana hai.. tum apne bodyguard ko lekar javo he glare at her.. he determined to not to loss his temper at her.. at least not when she is not in good condition.. its about her health..

no way.. tum mere sath aarhe hai.. mai us.. potato hippopotamus ko lekar nahi javungi.. ..anandi pouted.. ignoring his glare..

what shiv asked in shocked..he is still shocked that she come with this name for bodygurad..

well anandi i dont think its possible. he trying to control his laugh... before he could can continue

anandi give daggers to him.. tum chahte ho mai maman ko bolu... she threaten to him

anandi maman muje important kaam mai nahi rokegi..shiv complete with obvious tone

anandi know that how much its important for her to meet jagdish..but she didn't trust jagdish. .she believe on shiv.. she wanted him to be with her.. suddenly a crazy thought come in her mind.. as she started to closing distance between them.. shiv stood confuse looking at her...

anandi s slowly put her finger on his face stroking his cheeks slightly... and said in flirty tone. .shiv ..tum kitne handsome aur strong ho...aur mai tumhe na bhaot like karti hu. to tum mere liye inta bhi nahi kar sakte...anandi said with naughty glint in her eyes..

shiv was taken a back wit her advance.. he didn't understand once. .what she is doing...he look in her eyes.. and think ise huva kya hai...he quickly compose himself.. he put first distance in between them..

anandi.. no way.. tum chahe kitne bhi tricks karo this not possible..

anandi give him pleading look...

kya huva anandi kis se milna hai.. shiv asked her ...he cant believe.. that little tiny girl front of him actually try to trick him... there must be something important if she behave this way... otherwise she is too innocent

shiv muje acp jagdish se milna hai.. wahi jiska interview aaaya tha.. wo mera college friend hai.. baho dino ke baad kisi purane dost se contact hoga... anandi replied..

are you sure.. its dangerous anandi.. wo bahot dangerous case handled kar raha hai.. jo bhi log involved hai usmai.. khatarnaak hai.. tumhara ab us se milna sahi hoga.?.. shiv asked worried.. he know that.. he cant take risk for her..

anandi dont like to lie to him or wanted to hide anything.. but if the people is dangerous.. how can she let him fail in danger.. so she dont wanted him to know now.. may be she can reveled it letter.. until she have enough information to tell him..

yeah i am sure..she said smiling...

shiv node in yes and about to left that he suddenly circled his arms around her waist and pull her towards him.. and speak in naughty voice..

anandi.. you are so beautiful.. he wink and left leaving stunned and speechless anandi behind...

who just gap at the sensation that he leave with his touch...she close her eyes and think about it that moment she just share with him.. wherever she is with him she feel bliss joy..he complete her in every way.. and realization drawn upon to her. .what feel for him. .she feel secure with him.. his presence overshadow her sadness and make her feel happy.. isn't that feeling make you complete... its love.. she whisper to herself..

i am in love with you shivraaj shekhar.. she speak slowly listening her heart bits. and now its your turn to fail for me... ..anandi giggle.. remembering his shocked expression.. when she trick him.

anandi is in her day dream... unaware about that... the bodyguard in disguise is none other then informer of someone who hate shiv with his all heart... he informed him about anandi and how she is important for shiv...the other side of person.. is happy with the information that he got.. now he can use her against shiv.. so shiv to have weakness.. and that to a girl..he smile devilishly ...

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ACP - Police station.. (meeting chamber)

isnt that every new day acp jadishs singh call for meeting.. everyone is so tense looking at him..

so officers.. is case ke bare mai aapko information kya kya hai

jee sir..machine gun se body ko chalni kiya gaya hai.. bahot buri tarah se firing huvi thi

aur .. jagdish asked..

aur kuch nahi... baki hathiyar bhi nahi mila hai.. officer replied with fear..

aur kuch bhi nahi... postmortem report mai ek important baat hai.. notice nahi ki.. kisne bhi...

kya sir.. second officer asked in confusion

.well.. murder sirf ek goli se huva hai.. na ki un baki ki goliyon se jo machin gun se chali thi.. baliki wo ek revolver se chali thi...wo bhi sar ki bicho bich... matlab ki jo bhi khooni hai.. usne goli sar ki bich mai mari.. to fir ye aanddhund fire kis liye.. itni sari goliya marne ki vajah..

sir kahi aisa to nahi.. khooni khoon kar kar nikal gaya.. aur uske baad aaye huve logo ko.. khaajan singh ke mout ke bare mai pata hi nahi tha.. to unhone lash par hi goli chala di hogi . jadish singh ringht hand.. javed shekh said in last..

hmm right mai bhi kuch aisa hi soch raha hu.. well.. khajan singh ki bodygurad bhi they na.. unka kya huva

sabke sab mare gaye sar.. the first one speak again..

so rakesh.. maine tumhe pucha tha bodygurad ki information ke liye le kar aaye

ji sir. .rakesh replied

maine sab dekha hai.. sab 5 bodygurads they

but hame to 4 lashe mili hai.. javedh shekh speak in between

jagdish look at his officer who all look little confuse about revelation

well mai batatu hu... he speak gaining attention for all of them

bodygurads ke 4 lashe mili... 5th bodygurad gayab tha... well uske bare mai pata lagaya to pata chala ke he was dead.. kuch 6 mahino pehle hi.. par fir bhi uski jagah par ek bodygurad aaya tha... cc tv camera mai dekha... to pata chala mout ke dauran jab khajan singh ghar se bahar nikle they tab unke sath.. 5 bodygurads they... sab sath mai.. aur muje record mai 4 batya gaya tha... lasho ke mutabik tabhi shaq huva.. cc tv camera check kiya to 5 shadow they.. aur khajan singh ke piche... chalte huve..

ye bodygurad usni khoon kiya hai khajan singh ko.. jo darasal unke mout bankar aaya tha..


but sir wo bodygurad nakli hai baki logo ko pata kaise nahi chala other officer asked

well mathur ..agency alag alag logo ko chungi hai. jo ek dusre ko jante nahi.. taki wo kaam imandari se kar paye.. same yaha par bhi wahi huva.. 5 anjan log.. jo na to ek dusre ko jante hai aur na pehchante hai.. koi nakli hai kaise pata chalta... ye jo bhi hai usje us pachve bodygurad ko markar khud jagah le li... aur hamre pass saboot ki tour par.. uska ye shadow hi hai.. jo andher mai uska slide out hi bata raha hai... hame us admi ko dhundta padega.. well ye admi professional lagta hai... the way he shoot.. goli jistarah se bheje ke paar huvi hai.. itna aacha nishana kisi professional ka hoga.. ho sakta hai koi profession killer hu. aur ye snap hai us shadow ka.. ye shadow ka hight bhi sabse alag hai.. baki ki koi bhi dead body is hight se nahi milti.. na hi buit bhi same lagti hai.. he shown in projector.. shado figur to everyone... heis the one a killer.. he declare it... sabke detaile nikalo.. thik hai bheem singh ye kaam tumhara. .aur ha.. rakesh tum bhi yeh kaam karoge..

rakesh replied yes sir..

bheem singh jadish called out him. .who is in thinking mode..

jee sir.. bheem singh look at his boss..

tum aur baki team iski talash shuru kar do aaj se..

ye sir bheem singh node in yes.. everyone left meeting room one by one.. bheem singh watch the figure closely... that in photograph... well.. he know that who is he... the one who kill khajan singh... shivraaj sir ko inform karna padega... ki wo khabadar ho jaye.. iske pehle acp ko pata chali ki wo fifth bodygurad aur khajan singh par goli chalnewale kou aur nahi balika shivraaj shekhar tha..


to be continue...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Donji, 👍🏼

What a twist in the end .😲

Shivraj Shekhar killed Khajan singh ? Dont let this happen .

Jagdeesh as ACP .

Well your detailing of the meeting was interesting.😛

Now curious to know about A-J-S meeting.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Don - you kept up the gripping suspense at every turn 👍🏼 and Anandi's realization!!

I am going to patiently wait for further updates to find out who Shivraj Shekhar really is..

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