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Posted: 12 years ago
aweeesomee! Anandi is slowly developing feelings yay!!

Thanks for the update ...looking forward to read the next one!!
Edited by Suchi-Virmanian - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Don_theEvil

kyu is update mai javab nahi hia.. maine to javab diya hai ki shiv hai koun.. par readers ke liye pakdna asan jo nahi hai isliye shayd aisa ho raha hai..



Lol, Don ki tarah uske clue koi pakadna bhi mushkil hai.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Don & Aditi ...you guys are true to guns & roses in each part👍🏼
WOW! What thrills & chills 😎...
Gotyaa...A is a distraction which he'll not be able to stay away from for long 😳 & on the other hand she'l find out who her smoking hot killwrangler really is 😈

Aditi next part better be seriously steamy ❤️
I wanna some some exquisite temptation and then the consequences of that temptation 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
Don this was super!

You guys are giving "ek se badkar ek" updates

So finally, Mr khadoos is melting...

As Tina said...Aditi...next update better be a super romantic one😛...take your time but want an ANSHlishious update☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: blushing

@ all


agar bata diya Shivraj kon toh SS kahtam hoo jayega 😊

waise ander ki baat bataun mujhe bhi nahi maloom ki Shivraj kon hain 😉


😲 u r talking like daily soap writers- they also dont know what is going to happen next 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali_pi


😲 u r talking like daily soap writers- they also dont know what is going to happen next 😆

well she honestly didnt know.. the plot it mine... so unless i explain further story she to dont know who is shivraaj shekhar.. 😆,,but she is amazing partner anyone could have.. she can grab any end of my update and continue with it.. a perfect partner in crime for me..
Edited by Don_theEvil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update guys 👏👏👏

Story is just getting better and better! Wow Mr SRS, are you really the killer that you seem to be in this update or someone leading a double life? Mhhh...the writers don't even know...or maybe Donji does but she's not sharing yet 😆

Love that the iceberg is melting...after all how long can he hold out against the sun 😉 Can't wait for the next update...will he realize exactly who he is sheltering? Or will he be too busy yelling at her for not taking care of herself. Happy writing ladies!
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Posted: 12 years ago
m so sorry donny fr late rply

d update is sooo thrillicious

n SRS...awww wat attitude ..if attitude cud kill 😳😳
is he realy gonna kill d gal aftr cumng to knw who she is ...
ab ye suspense opn up hone ko kitna tym lagega 😉

bt realy awsum wrk by u guys 👏 👏..lupdate soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 6


Shivraj slowly enters in guest room. Anandi was lying on bed. He goes slowly towards bed. Anandi is sleeping as Doctor gave her saline glucose. He looked at her. Her pale face but yet there some spark on her face. Shivraj just nodded his head. He sits near her.

Yeh ladaki bilkul pagal hain he mutters. Maine toh isse kaha ki main aake baat karunga. Yeh din bhar mujhse baat karne ke liye bhooki rahe. Kyun'..ajeeb pagal hain.Sirf mujhase baat karne ke liye yeh din bhar mera intezar karti rahe. Bewakoofi hain yeh sarasar. He looked at her. He tries get close to her forhead but holds his hand back.

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He gave her look. Anandi is still sleeping peacefully'.Well yeh yahan meri zeemedari pe hain. Iska dhyan toh rakhana hee padega he mutters. Mean while Anandi is slowly gaining her conscious but she is half consious.Shivraj is observing her.

Shiv'.kahan hoo mujhe baat karni hain. Shiv'.Shiv baat karni hain bahot jaroori. Nahi Maman main khaana nahi kahungi mujhe pehale baat karni hain Shiv se. Shivraj is surprised Anandi is blabbering his name constantly.He move close her & touch her sholder.

Anandi'utho'main yahin hunn'Anandi aakhen kholo'.Shivraj said.

Nahi Shiv se baat karni hain'.usse ne kaha aake mujhse baat karne wala hain. Meri saza bhi ab khatam hoo gaye hain Anandi still in trance.

Anandi'..meri taraf dekho'Shivraj is worried seeing her condition.Anandi'.Anandi'he grab her tightly. Anandi opens her eyes'saw Shivraj is sitting infront of her. She looked at him'with surprise.

Shiv'.'.she said & hugged him tightly. Shivraj was taken back with her sudden action but remain quite. He tries hard not to hug her back. He can feel her heart beat. Anandi buried her tiny face in his broad chest. Her hands were cluching his broad back hard. She is relived yet crying her heart out. Her velvete body making things worst for Shivraj but he can't do much about it, as he has given word to Maman. For him Maman's word is everything. Here Anandi is hugging him more & more tightly. Finally he gave up & put his one hand around her waist & caresses her hair with other.

Shiv'.Shiv Anandi is blabbers his name constantly while crying.

Anandi main yahin hunn clam down. Tum meri baat sunn rahe hoo naa clam down. Shivraj is trying clams her down.

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Anandi gets conscious. She looses her grip & slowly broke hug'.her hands were still on his cheast, she cluches his shirt with her hand. She looked at him. Both share intense eye lock. Shivraj stares at her, deep big yet innocent eyes. Anandi is looking pale but one can't ignore her beauty. Shivraj is for first time feeling bit awakward as he gets shiever in his body with her soft touch. Her dimple smile is missing but her warmth of body making him uncomfortable. Shivraj unble to control his feelings he put aside her hair from her face. Anandi is equally memsmarized by Shivraj's muscular body & his intense eyes. His muscular yet warmth touch, she felt safe in his strong arms. Both are staring each other without blinking their eyes. Shivraj was first one to gain conscious. He avoids her glances. Shivraj try move away from her. He relase his hand from her waist. Anandi saw his discomfort & move from him. She is looking down. Shiv gets up from bed moved towards table where some food was placed.

He chekcked food & rings the bell. Nathu came running.

Je bahiya jee'.Nathu asked with shocked expression seeing Shiv is in Anandi's room.

Soup thanda hoo gaya hain garam lee aao jaldi he ordered.

Jee abhi lata hunn bhaiya jee.

Mujhe bhook nahi hain Anandi said.

Shivraj ignore her & gave her water. Anandi looked at him picks glass but does not drink.

Nathu came with fresh soup & left.

Yeh loo'he said coldly.

Maine kaha na bhook nahi hain. Nahi khaana mujhe kuch Anandi admant too.

What do u mean nahi khaana he raise his voice but stopped midway rememebering Maman's words? Shivraj looked at her.Mean while Anandi gave him furious look.

Anandi isse khana nahi hain.Yeh soup hain isse pee loo'..he teased her.

Anandi gave him stern look. He gave her soup bowl. She took it from him.

Well tumhe mujhe kuch batana tha na agar soup nahi peeyogi toh mujhese baat karne ki energy kahan se aayegi. Iss liye isse soup ko pee loo chupchap he said in soft voice.

Anandi reluctantly started drinking it. Shivraj smirk.

Ab baki ka tum mujhe peelao'.she ordered.

What? Are you out of you mind?

Thik hain nahi peena mujhe Anandi placed bowl on table near bed.

Shivraj was furious & about say something but remain quite. Agar main isse kuch keh doonga toh Maman naaraz hoo jayengi. Waise bhi woh pehale se naaraaz hain mujhse aur unko gussa nahi deela sakta. Yeh ladaki mujhe'.well'he mutters.

Fine'chalo baith jao'.he said reluctantly.

Anandi was shocked with his nod but she was thrilled. She sits on bed. Shivraj grabs chair & sits near bed. He started feding soup to her.

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Anandi is looking at him. Shivraj is avoiding looking at her eyes. His conceration is on soup. Anandi is enjoying her meal. She loves Shivraj's gesture of feeding her by his hand.

Ab tumhe dar nahi lag raha hain na he asked.

Nahi'..waise main kafi strong aur bahadur ladaki hunn. Mujhe koi dara nahi sakata she said.

Shivraj looked at her. Haan woh dekh hee raha hain he said.

Hain na'''.tumhe bhi laga na'.she said in playful voice.

Shivraj smirked. Soup khatam karo'.Lady Dara Singh

Yah sure Anandi replied.

BTW main bodyguard appoint kar raha hunn tumahre liye.

Wow boduguard'..kaisa hain? Kya naam hain? Dekhne mein kaisa hain? Handsome 6ft tall with 6 pack abs...Anandi shoot her Q.

Shivraj was stunned to hear those Q. Well sorry to dispaoint you its female Bodyguard.

Oh'..hooo Lady Boduguard. Sara maza kirkira kar diya Anandi showed her disappointment.

Why? What happened Shivraj was confused.

kitana maza aata koi ladaka hota toh. Main flirt karti uske sath. Wow'..so exciting na Anandi said.

Shivraj is looking at her with disbelieve. Yeh ladaki kitani filmy hain he thinks.

Haan...Ekdum kisi film ki tarah. Wow'.kya scene hoga. Anandi is day dreaming. Par no problem ab tum flirt karna uss female Bodyguard ke sath no issue'.Anandi said.

What?? OMG yeh maine soocha hee nahi'mujhe iss ghar mein koi love story nahi chaiyeh Shivraj thinks in his mind.

Haan'.accha rahega na. Tum thode muskurana sekh jaoge. Tum aur woh Boduguard acchi Jodi rahegi na. Aur phir''Anandi teased him.

Shivraj glare her with anger.

Yahi thik rahega female bodyguard hee sahi rahegi. Meri friend banake rahegi. Hum dono dher sari baatein karenge'Anandi assure Shivraj.

Shivraj eyes popped up. Kya? Yeh ladaki bhi na'..koi bhi Body guard rakhunga toh bhi. Mera dimaag waise bhi''..Well mujhe lagata hain Male Boduguard hee thik rahega Shivraj said.

Anandi smiled looking at him.

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Shivraj look at her. Tum isse hee hamesha bekaar mein muskarati hoo kya? Mera matlab bina kisi wajah ke bhi.

Haan'kyunki meri smile bahot acchi hain. Main bahot khubsurat lagati hunn muskurate hue Anandi is nonstop blabbering.

Suddenly Shivraj's cell buzzes. Thank God'..bach gaya iski self parising se He said. Khud hee apani kitani taarif karti hain yeh he states while picking up his cell.

Anandi makes faces. He handed over her bowl. Arre'..maine abhi soup khatam nahi kiya she screamed.

Shivraj raises her hand to stop her. It's from work'..must be important.

Lekin'abhi mera soup khatam nahi hua hain. Yeh nahi chalne wala'Shiv...Anandi try to speak.

Ek min'..its imp call'..Wait no need to be so impaitenat'.keep quite he ordered her.

Anandi makes faces again.

Yes Mr Shegal Shivraj said. It's Shyam Shegal from his group.

Mr Sehgal'..yeh Shiv bhi ajeeb hain. Kitana formality se baat karta hain Anandi mutters.

Hello Chief'..well sorry to bother you'but its urgent Shyam said over phone.

Yah sure'.tell me Shivraj said while walking towards door.

Anandi saw him going'Shiv'.ruko Shiv'she shouted. Yahahn aao jaldi'tum abhi nahi jaa sakate. Abhi meri baat poori nahi hue hain Anandi states.

Shivraj shocked with her shouting'..he looked at her with furious face.

While on phone Shyam was equally surprised & shocked to hear girl's voice.

Kon hain yeh joh chief ko Shiv keh rahe hain he thinks. Kon hoo sakta hain aur kiski itani himmat who bhi ek ladaki ki'.Shyam said in low voice.

Shivraj gesture her remain quite.

Anandi is about to say something but remain quite seeing his furious face.

Mr Sehgal ek bodyguard bhejna ghar aur haan ab koi male hee bhejana female nahi. I will call you later on Shivraj hurriedly cut the call before Shyam could say anything.

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Here Shyam was still in shock what he heard. Sugna came near to him.

Kya hua shyam she asked.

Haan''well'aaj ka kuch ajeeb din hain. Chief meeting chodke achanak chale gaye'.aur ab'phone'.he try to say something.

Phone pe kya Shyam Ashima came & join them.

Well Ashima dekho na Chief se baat kanre ke baad isse kya hoo gaya hain Sugna complains.

Well tum dono sunogi toh hairaan hoo jaogi'Shyam said.

Kya hua issa both asked.

Well'.main Chief se baat kar raha tha'aur peeche se ek ladaki ki awaaz sunaye dee Shyam said.

Ladaki'..both said.

Haan'.yahi hee nahi who ladaki Chief ko Shiv kehke bula rahe thi. Aur uski awaazse mujhe laga ki woh order dee rahe hain Chief ko.

What???? Both screamed.

Yeh kaise hoo sakata hain Sugna said.

Yah 'Cheif ko koi kaise Shiv keh sakata hain who bhi Ladaki Aashima said. Aashima was bit confuse & nervous hearing this from Shyam.

Are you sure about this Shyam Sugna asked him.

I am dam sure Sugna. Ladaki hee thi aur order hi dee rahe thi Shiv ko mera matlab hain Chief ko Shyam replied.

Unbeliveable'..Ashima said with reluctant voice.

Ek min'sugna said. Kahin yeh who kya naam tha Chief ne kaha tha'Anandi rht Anandi who toh nahi.

Haan'.you are right Sugna Anandi hee hain joh Chief ke ghar pe hain. Uski ke liye Bodyguard bhi chaiyeh.

Anandi Ashima said. Yeh ladaki ne Chief pe issa kya jadu kar diya ki Chief uske liye meeting chodke bhag gaye Ashima showed her bit anger towards Anandi.

Haan'.aur yeh Chief ko Shiv bhi kehti hain Shyam said.Sugna also nodded with him.

Main kal Body guard leke jaati hunn Chief se milane Ashima said.

Haan male bodyguard Ashima Shyam told her.

Tab iss Anandi se milana bhi hoo jayega Ashima mutters. Shyam & Sugna are still in shock mean while Ashima was feeling bit sad.

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Shivraj looked at her. Finish your soup now he said.

Kab ka khatam kar diya'Anandi said.

Good for you.Now Tell me'..konsi jarrori baat karni thi mujhe se jiske liye tum bhook hadtal pe chali gaye Shivraj asked in serious tone.

Anandi becomes all serious too. She sits on bed. Anandi try to find words to explain him.

Shivraj is observing her & goes near to her. He sits on chair near bed. Tum aaramse bolo'main sunn raha hunn. Aur haan bina kisi dabaav ke kaho'.Shivraj made her comfy.

Anandi smiled. She feels lot more relaxed now. Well'..My father was killed by somebody Shiv she said with chokced voice.

Shivraj is listening her carefully. Do know know the person behind all this he asked.

Nahi'wahi mujhe jaana hain kisne kiya yeh sab. Kon hain iss sabke peeche. Mujhe lagata hain bahot badi saazish hain iss sabke peeche.

Shivraj is looking at her.

Mujhe tumhari madat ki jaroot hain she said in soft voice.

Shivraj smiled. So Lady Dara Singh need help'.he teased her.

Anandi laughed. Yes'..indeed. Well mere Dad ka naam hain'.

Govind Singh'..right Shivraj interpted.

Anandi was shocked. Jee'..tumhe'.lekin'

Well tumhare college records mein hain. Miss Anandi Govind Singh Shivraj replied.

Anandi looked at him. She looked bit disturbed & wanted to say something but remain quite.

Well'..you don't worry. I will help you to find out your Dad's killer. Its promise from me Shivraj said. Well tum nahi bhi kehti toh bhi main dhoond leta kyunki pata tha mujhe tum ek na ek din yeh mujhse jarror kahogi.

Anandi looked at him with confuse face.

Well'.you must take a rest now. And one more thing'.I will be in next room in case you had bad dream he said.

Anandi smiled palely. Shivraj left room.

Govind kaka'..she mutters. Papa ne mere college mein apana nahi Govind kaka ka naam mere papa ke naam par likha tha. Papa hamesha hee aapani identity chupake rakahte thi. Mere safty ke liye yeh sab papa karte the. Kisiko yeh baat pata nahi hain. Ab main yeh baat Shiv se kaise kahun ki Govind Singh nahi mere Papa ka naam Khajan Singh hain.

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Next morning Anandi gets ready & comes out of her room. She looked everywhere for Shivraj. She walks towards dining area. Suddenly Shivraj showed up there. He comes back from his routine Gym. Anandi smiled.

Good Morning Shiv'.

Shivraj looked at her'.Morning he said coldly.

Anandi makes faces with his cold reply. Maman kahan hain she asked.

Shivraj doesn't pay her attention he is busy chking his cell. Door bell rings. Pappu ran towards door.

Bhiaya jee koi milane aaya hain yeh card diya hain Pappu gave card to Shivraj.

Shivraj reads & went to main hall.

Anandi followed him too.

Anandi is right behind Shivraj. Shivraj is talking with some guy.

Anandi unble to see man since she was standing behind Shivraj's back. She moved to right side & shocked.

Aiyeee she screamed & cluch Shivraj's arm tightly.

Chup''ek dum chup. Chillana band karo subah subah Shivraj ordered her.

Chillao nahi toh kya karu'yeh kon darawana insaan hain samane Aanndi buried her face in his arms.

Anandi he is your Boduguard he told her firmly.

What? She screamed'.no way'..he is too she stopped.

Shivraj glared her angrily but remain quite thinking abt Maman. Well'..accha hain'lekin tumhe darne ki jarrot nahi hain. Baki sab tumhare ass pass aane se darenge he said.

Lekin'main'.Anandi try to say something.

Anandi'.he touch her hand. Relax'.nothing to worry He assures her.

Good Morning Chief'.Ashima greeted Shiv while entering in main hall.

Anandi looked at direction from where voice has come & saw tall slim fair dress like professional Black trouser with white shirt girl standing in front of them. Anandi gave her look. Girl is equally glares at her.

Ashima saw Shivraj is standing close this girl. Girl is cluching his arm tightly. Ashima was shocked but remain clam.

Morning Miss Khurana Shivraj said while moving away from Anandi.

Miss Khurana'.Anandi mutters. Kon hain yeh ladaki she thinks.

Oh toh yeh hain Anandi. Iss dekhke lagta nahi ki yeh Chief ko order dee rahe hogi she thinks in her mind. Acchi hain'.innocent lagati hain Ashima feels. Lekin chief ko pakadke kyun khadi thi yeh'''Ashima thinks.

Miss Khurana ' Dekhane mein toh ekdum Miss Tiptop'Shiv ko Chief kehti hain Anandi thinks.

Both girls looked at Shivraj who is busy looking at his cell ignoring both Girls.


To be continue...

Edited by blushing - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow !! nice update as usual 😊😊 hayee AnSh ka hug😳😳 and the top of it loved anandi's chirpiness😛..and the suspense still continues...😉
who is shivraj shekhar?
Edited by sophie_ansh - 12 years ago

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