Chahat11's AnSh FF Makar Sankraanti {Completed} - Page 3

Originally posted by: roberoi

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Originally posted by: NDDgirl

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Part 3

The families were very excited to celebrate the first post wedding function of Anandi and Shiv. Nandu, Varun and Shagun were yet to arrive. They had gone to get some more kites. The families were on the terrace. Saachi reminds Shiv and Jagya about the competition. The Shekhar's especially Alok is angry at Saachi's childish behavior. "Papa main apne bhaiyya par poori tarah se confident hoon. Iss liye maine Anandi bhabhi ke cousin ke saath shart lagayi. So what can I do if it is a competition between Anandi bhabhi's ex and current husband. Unhe jiska saath dena hoga who dengi." "SAACHI. Enough is enough. Agar iss baar koi badtameezi ki hai tumne toh yahin se tumhe hostel bhijwa doonga and you will never be called for any festivals." The Singh's who were away from the Shekhar's did not know what the issue was but felt sad for Saachi that she had been scolded on a festival.

Anandi and Shiv were both not present. They had gone downstairs to receive Shyaam along with whom the kids arrived. Jagya heard what Saachi had said. He could not believe his ears that this girl was related to Shiv. On the other hand he also saw a spitting image of him in this girl. He was too a spoilt brat from a decent family. He decided to lose the competition so that Anandi would not have to have problems from Saachi. Anandi and Shiv come with Shyaam and the kids. Nandu was very excited about the competition. He wanted his bhaisa to win. Saachi too was rooting for her bhaiyya. Everyone wanted to get over with this competition. Shiv and Jagya both wish each other all the best. They prepare their kites for the competition. Shiv is teaching Anandi how to tie the kanni of the kite.

"Shiv tum bekaar mein mehnat kar rahe ho. Apna time waste mat karo. Maine itne saal koshish ki par Anandi kabhi seekh hi nahi paayi. Uske bas ki baat nahi hai. Tumhe bahut patience lagega." Jagya said it in the spur of the moment once again without considering the fact that his words would hurt Anandi. The Singh's and Shekhar's were taken aback by his sudden statement. Jagat always remembered the happy times associated with Anandi. He did not for once think the effect his words would have on her. Unintentionally the painful memories of the sankraanti's she had spent with him and also how he used to scold her and called her a duffer came flooding back. Shiv saw her being engulfed in her painful past. He quickly retorted to Jagya's comment. "Jagdeesh aap meri fikar mat kijiye. Mujhme har baat ko sehne ki patience hai. Muhskil waqt se main kahbhi bhi bhaagta nahi. Jab bhi kuch naya seekhna hota hai toh seekhnewaale aur sikhaanewaale dono ki pareeksha hoti hai. Majaal hai agar koi kuch theek se sikhaaye toh saamne waala use seekh na paaye. Anandi ka hi example lijiye unhone koshish ki tab aaj Jaitsar ka har insaan padh likh sakta hai. Unhone sahi tareeke se sayyam se sikhaya tab jaakar sab seekh paaye. Agar teacher sahi ho toh kaisa bhi student ho jo sikhaya jaata hai wo ache se seekhta hai. This is one more thing that I have learnt from Anandi." It could be heard from his voice how much he was proud and confident of her.

Jagya realized his mistake and was quick to apologize. "Ab toh mujhe haarna hi padega. Main aisi galti kaise kar gaya?" he thought. Anandi was touched by Shiv's words. He always stood up for her. He had an effect on her. He touched her in a way no one could ever. A smile came to her face. The Singh's and Shekhar's were proud of Shiv. The Singh's thought that though Jagya had begun to change he still has a long way to go. Jagya and Nandu and Shiv and his official charkha holder Anandi were all set for the competition. The spectators too had chosen their sides. The Singh's were with Jagya. The Shekhar's cheered for Shiv. Shyaam, Varun and Shagun were on Shiv's side whereas Sugna and her in ' laws cheered for Jagya. Nandu chose a multi colored kite (just like his personality: Jagya bahut rangeela hai ' Anandi, Gauri and ab shayad Ganga ya Saachi ya koi aur hee) for Jagya whereas Shiv chose a white kite. Shiv had a reason to choose the white kite. "Arre jawaan ye safed rang ki patang kyun chuni? Jang mein jab ek taraf se jang rokni ho toh safed jhanda lehraate hain. Abhi toh competiotion shuru bhi nahi hua." "Daddu ye safed rang ki patang Anandi jaisi hai. Is par har rang chad sakta hai ( Mere pyaar ka rang bhi chadega ). Ye rang har rang mein ghulmil jaata hai ( Dono parivaaron mein apne asli maayke ke jaise ghulmil gayi hai ). Ye saaf hai ( She is like the first dew drop) . Pavitra hai ( She is pure even after Jagya had stained her ). Iss neele asmaan mein alag alag rang ki patang ke beech rehkar bhi alag hai (She is an individual, she has her own strong qualities. She is self made )."

Anandi just stood there staring at the man in front of her eyes. She was the only one who understood the hidden meaning in his words. The man was her friend and her husband. How could a man of his caliber have such great thoughts of a village girl like she. She never felt inferior in the company of this London educated city bred IAS officer. She tried to see in her what he saw but always failed to. She had always been made to feel inferior. She used to second guess herself when it came to being worthy of his love. She did not trust herself enough. He was her best friend. She felt as ease with him. She trusted him. She respected him and she even liked him. She liked the way he treated her with so much love and respect. She wanted to return the same to him. It pained to her that she was not able to give herself completely to him. She liked the attention he gave her. She even responded to his smiles and healthy flirting with sweet smiles. But when it came to taking the final step with him she was not able to. She wanted to fall in love with him. She did not want to submit herself because of what all he had done for her. She could not insult him, his love and their relation by doing so.

She was brought out of her thoughts when she heard Shiv call her name. He was standing behind her maintaining distance. "Anandi kahaan kho gayi hai aap?" "Nahi main bas wo. Kya hua?" "Patang udaane ka competition shuru hone jaa raha hai. Anandi wo main advance mein hi aapko sorry kehna chahta hoon. Wo main patang udaane mein bahut involve ho jaata hoon. Aap please bura mat maniyega agar meri charkha theek se pakadne ke liye main chilla doon. Aur haan ek aur baat agar main aisa karoon toh please put me in line. Deal?" "Deal." Saachi was the refree. She blowed the whistle for the competition to begin. Shiv gave his kite to Anandi and asked her to throw it up in the sky. At the same time Nandu did so for Jagdeesh. Anandi and Nandu both took their jobs as the charkhi holder very seriously.

In no time Shiv's kite was up in the air. It was climbing higher and higher. Jagdeesh too gave him competition. It was a tough competition. Saachi was right Shiv was very good at kite flying and he had great command on the manja. He pulled it at the right time and also gave it freedom to fly. Jagya too was proving to be a worthy contender for the win. It was a very close competition. Sometimes Jagya would be on the winning side and sometimes it would be Shiv. The audience was cheering for their favorite teams. They were being served cold drinks and water to soothe their sore throats so that they could cheer more loudly. Anandi noticed something. "Jagya tum patang theek se kyun nahi chaga rahe ho? Tum toh kitni acchi tarah se patang udaate ho. Ab tak toh tumhe saara aasmaan saaf kar dena chahiye tha. Kya hua?" "Nahi aisa kuch bhi nahi hai main acche se hi uda raha hoon." "Nahi Jagya tum poori koshish nahi kar rahe inhe competition dene ke liye. Jagya inhe aise jeetna pasand nahi aur naahi tumhe jaan boojhkar haarne ki zaroorat. Ye ek muqabla hai aur uske kuch rules hote hain. Jagya inhone aaj tak jo bhi kiya hai wo Dsa ki khushi ke liye koi ehsaan nahi kiya jo tum jaankar haar kar chukka doge. Please inki aise insult mat karo."

Everyone at first thought Anandi was rooting for Jagya but later on realized that she was speaking for Shiv's respect. Jagya realized what he was doing was wrong and began to fly his kite properly. There were many hits and misses. Nandu every time thought that his bhaisa was going to cut jijiusa's kite so screamed "Kai po che." He became very sad when it had not happened. Shiv was winning the competition but saw Nandu's sad face. He decided to back off in a way Nandu would be proud of his bhaisa. Jagya was that little boy's role model. Shiv on purpose cut his finger with the manja. Jagya took one jerk and cut off Shiv's kite. Nandu and Jagya both screamed "Kai po che." The Singh's were very proud of Jagya. Nandu was extremely happy. The competition was over. Jagya was declared the winner.

"Congratulations Jagdeesh." "Thank you. Tumne bhi bahut accha competition diya Shiv." "Arre aapko toh chot lag gayi hai main band aid lekar aati hoon." "Nahi Anandi kuch nahi hua hai its ok." "Aap phir se shuru ho gaye. Main kuch nahi sunne waali." Anandi goes to get a band aid for Shiv. Jagdeesh felt that his jeet was a khokhli jeet as he had no one dear to share it with him. He saw Anandi care for Shiv and it pained him. "Jijusa dekha maine kaha tha na ki mere bhaisa se acchi patang aur koi nahi udaata. Aap haar gaye ab aapko murga banna padega." "Nandu aisa nahi kehte." Basant told him. "Par bapusa shart toh yahi thi na?" "Nandu beta aap kush hai na ki aapke bhaisa jeet gaye?" "Haan jijusa main bahut khush hoon mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha ki mere bhaisa hi jeetenge. Kitne saalon ke baad maine bhaisa ke saath patang udaayi. Mujhe bahut mazaa aaya. Jijiusa chalo ab murga bano." "Shiv bhaiyya what is this aapse ek patang udaane ka competition bhi nahi jeeta ja saka. Seriously aapne meri naak kata di. Maine aappar yakeen karke bahut badi galti kar di. I should have never trusted you. Main aapko best samajhti thi par aap. Aapne in sabke saamne meri insult karwa di." Saachi huffed and puffed as she lost the bet to a village boy. She was out of control. Everyone just stood there in shock. No one was able to say a word. She was once again a reason of embarrassment to her family. Shiv paid no heed to her as he was busy watching the smile on Nandu's face.

"SAACHI!!" Everyone looked in the direction from where the scream came from. It was Anandi. She had heard all the things Saachi said to Shiv. She could never tolerate one word against Shiv. "Chup ab ek shabd nahi bologi tum inke khilaaf." Everyone had seen this avatar of Anandi when she had stood up against Heth Singh when he insulted Shiv. "Anandi bhabhi aapko mujhpar chillane ka koi right nahi hai. Aapne aur bhaiyya ne miolkar mujhe harwa diya. Bhaiyya humesha aappko aur aapki family ko aage rakhte hain. He always and only thinks of you and your family." Shiv wanted to mediate between the two but he remembered Anandi's words "Aap hum nanand bhabhi ke beech kuch nahi bolenge. Main Saachi ko handle kar loongi." "Right hai Saachi. Mujhe poora haq hai. Tumhaari bhabhi hone ke naate tumhe sahi galat ka ehsaas karane ka haq hai mujhe. Main ab tak chup thi kyunki maine socha ki nadaani mein tum iss tarah se behave kar rahi ho but no you are doing it on purpose. Tumhe ehsaas bhi hai ki tumhaare behavior ki wajah se hum sab ko auron ke saamne kitna sharminda hona padta hai. Tumhaare bhaiyya jinki nazren kabhi nahi jhuki wo tumhaare is bartaav ki wajah se Dsa aur unki family ke saamne nazren jhukar khade rehte hain. Mere parivaar ko sharminda hona pade ye mujhe manzoor nahi phir wo chahe meri apni nanand ki wajah se hi kyun na ho." "Maine jo kaha wo mere bhaiyaa se. So keep out of it bhabhi." "Nahi Saachi tumne jo kaha wo sirf apne bhaiyya se nahi mere pati se bhi kaha. Main unke saath koi badtameezi bardasht nahi karoongi. He is my husband. He is the man I '."

Anandi suddenly became quiet. She had a realization. Shiv is her husband. He is the man she loves. She has fallen in love with him. She had tears of joy in her eyes and a smile on her face. "Ye kaise ho gaya? Pata hi nahi chala ki kab wo dabe pao mere dil mein aa gaye aur apne liye jagah bana li. Mujhe unse ye kehna hoga. Sabse pehle unhe jaanne ka haq hai ki main unse pyaar karne lagi hoon. Be- intehaa mohabbat ho gayi hai mujhe unse. I LOVE HIM. I LOVE SHIV. SHIV mere Shiv sirf mere Shiv." She went ahead and hugged Saachi. She also kissed her on the forehead. No one understood her behavior. Saachi was all the more annoyed. Shiv nudged Mahi on his comment when he said "Bhabhi ye Saachi hai Shiv bhaiyya nahi." Anandi did not feel scared or frozen on Mahi's teasing instead she profusely blushed this time. Her pulse was racing. Her heart she felt like was on the trapeze in the circus. She could not even look Shiv in the eyes. He could read her like an open book. She wanted him to read her but they would have to wait to read and to be read until they were alone.

"Saachi apne bhaiyya se sorry bolo. Tum ko kitna confidence tha unpar. Mujhse zyaada aur pehle se jaante ho na unhe tum. Tum itna bhi nahi jaan paayi ki wo jaankar haare. Nandu ka dil rakhne ke liye. Saachi tumne competition ki shart lagayi. Tumhaara dil rakhne ke liye shart ko buri cheez maanne waale tumhaare bhaiyya ne competition kiya because he loves you." "Sorry bhaiyya." "Aur Anandi se?" "Sorry Anandi bhabhi." Shiv hugs her. The Shekhar's are all smiles. "Jijusa chaliye ab murga baniye." Nandu who had gone down with Jagya comes back. Shiv had to do so to keep the fact from Nandu that his hero had won because of Shiv. He was about to hold his ears. Anandi holds his hands. She nodded in a negative. He told her it was ok. "Jiji ye kya aap ne jijusa ko kyun rok diya."

"Nandu ye shart kya tumhaare jijusa ne sweekaari thi? Nahi na. Unhone tumhe samjhaya tah na ki shart lagana buri baat hai phir bhi tumne aisa kiya. Galti ki na tumne toh tumhaare jijusa kyun kaan pakde? Nandu tu bahut khush hai na ki Jagya patangbaazi mein jeet gaya? Tu jaanta hai na ki tere jijusa teri khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain? Toh unse kaan anhi pakadwaate theek hai." "Haan jiji jijusa mujhse bahut pyaar karte hain. Wo mere saath cricket khelte hain. Aapko pata hai jab main khidki ka kaanch todta hoon toh Dsa ke saamne wo kehte hain ki unhone kaanch toda. Jijusa to mujhse itna pyaar karte hain ki mujhe jeetane ke liye khud haar sakte hain." Nandu was very proud of Shiv. He loved him very much. "Nandu tune kya kaha ki jijusa tujhe jeetane ke liye haar sakte hain hain na?" Anandi smiled at him and Nandu slowly understood what Shiv did for him.

He hugged his jijusa. "I love you jijiusa. Main ab kabhi shart nahi lagoonga. Promise." "Nandu ye toh bahut achi baat hai ki ab tum shart nahi lagaoge. Ab main bhi kabhi shart nahi lagaoongi. Par tumhe Anandi bhabhi ka dialogue nahi bolna chahiye tha. Shiv bhaiyya se I Love You toh sirf Anandi bhabhi hi bol sakti hai." "Saachi kuch bhi mat bolo. Sabke saamne tum aur Mahi bhaiyya shuru ho jaate ho. Humaari family ke saamne theek hai par yahaan sab in sab ko lekar itni freely nahi sochte." Shiv saw her blush and he smiled inwardly. Something was going on with Anandi. He would find out later. He would hear, see and feel it loud and clear. The tension of the competition had subdued. Now everyone is going to fly the kites to celebrate the festival. Anandi had put the band aid on Shiv's finger. They whispered "Anandi aap theek toh hai na?" "Haan." Anandi replied without looking him in the eyes. She was getting a tingling feeling standing so close to Shiv. He saw her shyly smile when their fingers touched. He wanted to take them away but she tugged them even more under the pretense of putting the band aid.

Originally posted by: Serviana

Wooow...nice one👏

We all are waiting for her realization. And after all those crappy episodes this week we needed some nice stories and yours is one of them.

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Originally posted by: ananhita

'Nathu entered at that time. He was introduced to the Singh's. He was the Udaipur version of Makhan kaka.'

Very funny, you are simply superb Chahat, love your eye for detail and your ananlysis of each situation and person, if you keep writing like this, i am soon going to stop watching BV and just wait for your posts, they are far better than the boring episodes being shown!!!

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Originally posted by: michelle281194

awesome 👏

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Originally posted by: umam

Superb update 😊

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