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rdjha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

awesome part again!! Anandi showing mirror to Prithvi and in a way bringing him out of his anger and the barriers he has created...waiting for ur next update!!

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drooler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

paheli indeed this 11th chap was

loved it

plsss continue soon

u r a fab writer

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roberoi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

what an imagination!!! too good and awesome paheli👏

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

I am sure the part is nice... but I have some backlogs to catch up on... U complained last time.. so I need ur permission to "like" the part without actually reading it? 😃 I will get to it soon though...

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Lol Priti. U really are a brat. Oh! Pishposh. What permission? Like away...

On mobile. Might not be able to get back to desktop for a while.

Edited by Lahari. - 12 years ago

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Tyro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

there r so many elements in this part that I am not able to write...

for this I will just listen to what others have to say...

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: Tyro
there r so many elements in this part that I am not able to write...

for this I will just listen to what others have to say...

You should write them down for my sake if nothing else. 😊

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I'm slightly surprised that there wasn't more resistance or reluctance from Prithvi to take Anandi's help or to hear her story.

😊 Oh! there is more to his stance than meets the eye...

Remember, the narrative is in Anandi's perspective.

Edited by Lahari. - 12 years ago

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: Lahari.

Which being?

Some doubts are still there as in:

Why was it two faced lifestyle. Is it that gruesome?
Is Aanadi really ignorant or she is well aware of his this side? or is having inkling of his this characteristc??
The prisoners view point... why is it hazy ( or say appearing to me)???

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: Onir
Some doubts are still there as in:
Why was it two faced lifestyle. Is it that gruesome?
Is Aanadi really ignorant or she is well aware of his this side? or is having inkling of his this characteristc??
The prisoners view point... why is it hazy ( or say appearing to me)???

Not that gruesome - I can assure you. You will know in like 3-4 updates.

The narrative is from 2 years ago to the current day. She was ignorant then. But, of course, in the course of time she is made aware of many things. Roshomon is the keyword. ;)

Prisoner being hazy - I think that is a good thing. You will know - just have some more patience.