AnSh OS- Aasmaan se tapka,Khhazur pe aatka

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello frds😛..me back with a comedy part this time😃…don't expect any romantic stuff here😆…in which I am total not capable of…bear with my errors plz!😳

Ps- got this os idea while talking with anjy n appy…spl thanks to both from moi.😛

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Shiv noticed the face of the education inspector who is constantly staring at anandi.

Shiv to avoid that - mr prathmesh singh..aap kuchh plan suggest karnewale the….

Prathmesh- ji..woh pehele anandi jee ajati toh…looking at anandi ho is busy in ph regarding an imp panchayat issue….

Prathmesh continues…jetsar main bahat improvement dikh rahi hai mujhe…jab last time aaya that oh itna progress nehin tha…

Shiv –last time!!

At that time anandi comes n apologized that she cudnt attend the meeting as she has to go to panchayat for an unexpected issue..

Prathmesh- koi baat nehin…who kaal mujhe paas main aur ek school main v jana hai..aaj main yehin rukh jata hoon…kaal meeting karlenge…

Anandi with a broad smile– aapka bahat bahat sukriya sir…collector saab main chalti hoon…n left…..

shiv invites prathemsh to join him in lunch as its too late now..may be he wont get lunch in any hotel. Prathmesh reluctantly agreed.

While eating 'kachodi' from shiv's dabba….prathmesh says- yeah toh bilkul anandi jee k hath k bane kachodi jese hain….!

Shiv in surprise- aap ne pehele khayee hai unk hath ka khana??

Prathmesh- haan main apne maat pita k saath unke haveli gaya tha

Shiv- q

Prathmesh- mere maata pita unko bahat pasand kartey the..

Shiv- pasand kartey the matlab…

p- apne bahu ke roop main n blushed

shiv stunned,fumbles- jee kya?? Bahu k roop main..means aap…

p- haan who mujhe v pasand thi…itne muskil ane pe v unhone itni himmat k saath aage aaye,aapna naam kamaya, itni mehenati hain…who toh aapke sath kaam karti hain naa..aap toh jantey honge….she is perfect blend of beauty n brain….

shiv is like to beat him blue black rite there….but just stopped hearing

"dadijee net oh hamara rista v pakka kar diya tha "…line from prathmesh…

He feels the whole sky fell on him , thinks…"dadi jee"

Before he cud react he got an urgent call n rush to the site to maintain law n order but didn't forget to glare at prathemesh before living who has no clue what is going on in cs's mind…!!!

On the after noon..prathmesh decided to visit anandi's school…as he cudnt resist meeting her..may be he can get a chance to meet. by his luck he met anandi in school ,discussed some school related plans. Anandi invites him for dinner at her home so that they can discuss the plans properly as she has to go to panchayat again for the same issue .

In the evening, jeep was come to take prathmesh by anandi as his jeep gave dhoka to him at the right moment. Jeep reached to CH. Prathmesh surprised as he expected haveli. He is welcomed by anandi who is lil worried. (coz mahi,dadu went to see a cricket match without telling her and got stuck there….rest of the family is at udaipur)

Before he cud ask abt haveli n CH confusion…again few ppl came to anandi for panchayat related work…she got busy with them for sometime.

When they left, Prathmesh again tried to ask …at that time shiv entered y spending his all day fuming, muttering, frustrating …abt the almost pakka rista. Both look at each other n stunned. shiv is like in …"aasaman se tapaka..khazor pe ataka" mode. He stood shocked at the entrance. Anandi happy seeing him, runs towards him with a bright smile..n speaks non stop…"achha hua jo aap jaldi aagaye..main mr singh ko dinner pe bulaya taki jo plan unhone mujhe school main bataya tha..woh hum aapke saath yahan discuss kar pate..ghar main dadu aur mahi nehin hain…mujhe bata nehin paye sayad….main panchayat k kaam main fas gayee thi..ap theek time pe nehin aate toh ajeeb lagta…maine bheem sigh ko bataya tha…usne bola nehin…."

He heads inside with angry eyes towards prathmesh without properly listening anandi's words. prathmesh thinks anandi informed CS abt the school plans n Cs sifted the dinner from haveli to CH to have discussion . His heart broke as he cant meet ds n rest as he cud have a chance to re settle the lost matter.😉

Anandi went to kitchen with confusion for not getting shiv's reactions properly..

All three start dinner with the official discussion…when they r almost finished the discussion…dadu n mahi came…shiv introduce them as his dadu n bro..both went inside t freshen up…anandi went inside the kitchen to bring plates for them…prathmesh still has no clue abt Anandi as mrs shekhar.

In the mean while..p- kahan bahut achha tha….anandi jee bahat achha khana banati hai

shiv fumes- mujhe pata hai….

p- haan aapne toh bahat baar khaya hoga ese dinners pe.. I wish mera rista tuta na hota unke sath unke pehle pati k wajah se toh aaj main esi dinner….

Before he cud have completed ..dadu n mahi joined them…n saved him from very much possible "dhai kilo ke" punches from shiv.

Dadu n mahi cherished anandi's cooking so much referring as their DIL n bhabhi….ki prathmesh now got his shock of life realizing…anandi is now mrs anandi shivraj shekhar.. Its her home…n highly embarrassed looking at shiv who is controlling his anger with so much difficulty…

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ds n bhiron just came at that time to give them karni maata's Prasad as they went there today . n stunned to see prathmesh there….he is equally stunned. dadu with a broad smile invites both of them to join…both joined . n r confused n tensed whether prathmesh told everything or not.….Anandi went inside for plates. Ds mutters sab ko pata lag lagay yaa nehin ..shiv heard n got it…"kya yehi ki iske saath rista hone wala tha anandi jee ka". Ds stunned n says haan tujhe kese pata…anandi ko toh humne bataya nehin"

Shiv in shock- unko nehin pata….!! Tavi …

Ds- kya tavi…

Shiv- kuchh nehin..main abhi isko bhagata hoon….

Shiv to prathmesh- aap ko apne plan k ek proper presentation agar aap mujhe kaal jaldi se jaldi de dete toh acchaa hota…mujhe darr hai mujhe kaal phir usi site pe jaldi jana padega toh meeting nehin hopayegi. Prathmesh too wants to leave as its very un comfty- he literally rush on the same excuse to prepare presentation without saying bye to anandi….Anandi came out with plates n surprised not to see him. Shiv said abt his presentation…before anandi can ask more qs..she gain got a call for the same pachayat work which is not solved till now n went there in emergency, denying shiv's offer to come with her.

At the hall

After dinner….dadu asks abt the uneasiness. So ds spills out abt the almost fixed rista conveniently hides her pota's kartoot n pleaded not to tell anandi as she has no clue.

Dadu joked- yeh rista hojata toh ab tak hum iske liye abhi tak ladki dundhtey rehetey aur sayad yeh ab tak na na bolta reheata…..aap se sayad mulakal v nehin hopata kalyani jee

Ds blushed

Shiv is sitting with his latka hua face.

Ds- chhora main na hoti..toh tum dono ki viha k baren main koi sochta v nehin…maine jab yeh baat cheedi toh sab haanse mere pe…mere baas main hota toh usi mele ke din tum dono k phere karwa deti….par thara yeh sasur "ponting at bhiron" mhari baat ko ek kaan se sun ke se kaan se nikal diya….

Everyone laugh…Shiv pouts…dadu – q aapko shiv pasand nehin tha…

Bhiron- nehin shiv hamare ummed se badh k tha..aur ummed se badh kar ummed karna..mujhe sahi nehin laga…par hum bahat kismet wale hain jo shiv hame damad k roop main mila.

Mahi with a wink- jo bhi ho…bhai toh 2nd choice hi the..how sad… 🤣

Shiv annoyed. All have a gr8 laugh on that except shiv who made a puffed face still now. Singhs left.

At AnSh room

Shiv in room still fuming…muttering…at that time anandi came, is super happy coz she finally solved the panchayat matter completely n happy abt her school grant too. She smiles at shiv and starts her 'chapar chapar' …"ab tak soye nehin..sab chalegaye naa…khana achha tha naa..meheman jo aaye the pasand aaya hoga unko…thank god achha plan suggest kiya…school ka kamm v hojayega aur….."

Shiv just cudnt handle it anymore…stands up n by mistake bang his foot on nearby table.

Shiv- aah..uhh..aouch…

Anandi-kya hua ….

Shiv- kuchh nehin hua…thank god kuchh nehin hua(thinking abt his Ajee n prathmesh rista fix)

Anandi in shock- kya

Shiv (while jumping in pain)- haan, thank god kuchh nehin hua..varna pata nehin mera kya hota… 🤣

Anandi shouts- aap yeh kya bole ja rahe hain…chup chap bethiye…she orders n Shiv follows that obediently. anandi massage his feet with balm. And that seems even works wonder on Collector saab's jala hua dil. He lost in his Ajee.

Anandi- better hai abhi

Shiv- best hai (thinking abt his n Ajee's rista) 🤣

Anandi(has no clue what shiv is talking in what sense)- achha toh ab so jaeye…kaal education inspector k saath meeting main baaki formalities puri kardenge….

Now by listening this shiv again back to his 'jala hua' mode…hit his hand on his foot again n again "ohh auch".

Anandi- kya hua aapko…jyada dard hai kya…lal singh ko bulaun…

Shiv made a rondu face n says like a kid- nehin koi zarurat nehin..main sone jar aha hoo….covered himself on the sheet n buried his face in the pillows. 🤣

Anandi in her mind "yeh inko kya hua hai subha se…ajeeb harkat q kar rahe hain….jese kisisne vaid jee ki kadwi dawai pila di hai…" she got the Fbs of shiv's face when he had nakseer n she made him to drink the ayurvedic medi. She blushes n thinks "jo v hain..jese v hain..bahot pyare hain………….." 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khushi this is sooo cute 😆 I can so imagine Crybaby ka rotlu face 🤣 wish Ajee cud come to know the issue and tease him more...that'd be fun! 😉
But loved both the parts...I wish I wish it happens in real.Jalkukde Shivjee will be ultra adorable 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww khushi di its sooo cute ! Just like you !
Made my day 😳 thx a lot for this wonderfull, amazing, funny, lovely OS. Love you for this ! *loads of hugs*

P.S. You yourself prooved that Shiv is a bechara aashiq !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice, Jealous and whining CS looks cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
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khushi wow (in cs style),

maza aa gaya 🤣

tum toh CS ko jala ke hi manogi,😉 dil jala and hath-pair toota hua🤣

one request from me too,write one for anandi , when ashima comes to visit and
chipkoing shivji😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is cute and funny.😃
Superbly written!👍🏼
You made me 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww...so sweet !!!👏


Maza aaya...I wish yehi Serial mein bhi dekhaye...


shiv is 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆 poor Shiv😆..all burnt with jealousy 😆 par jaisa bhi hai bohat pyara hai 😳 lovely OS 👍🏼 ❤️ 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow khushi wo prathmesh bhi kuch jyada bol raha tha.. ek do padne chahe..they.. 🤣..but love bechara.. shiv.. mera bhlo bhala shiv kuch bata bhi nahi sakta...

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