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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Manshi

I love the new name Anandi "Maharani" nd Shiv "Maharaja"🤣🤣🤣, nd Shiv is "laadkuwarsa" this is fantastic ,amazing awesome part, I love Ansh sweet cute nok-zok😉, its wonderful👏 nd lovely😳😳😳, another great work⭐️, pls continue soon.


Thanx for liking my work

I too can't stay away from writing

Lekin thoda sa patience rakho yaar

AnSh par I am writing two stories and I think U r reading my story on QH too

Jalbaazi mein gadbad na ho jaye

Idhar ka udhar aur udhar ka idhar ho gaya to mera hi band bajega

Chahat


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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Maharani A & Maharaja S!! Loved it! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
chahat...awesome updates yaaar...cant get enough.. dil maange more...
ahhh the nok jhoks of S and A...thats the utter pleasure of a husband and wife relation, being in love every single passng second...superb updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Chahat,
I think this is exactly what is going to happen next week, about Dsa falling sick and asking for jaggu and that is how Jaggu will end up coming back from Jail and attending the marraige...only hoping that he does not create any more trouble in Anshland.
I stilll dont understand how Jaggu got away so easily from his wrong doings, how can the family ignore what he did to Shiv and take his confession to be an act of good deed? I think they just wanted to somehow get Jaggu back in the story...this is the only track that did not make any sense in BV...
Please continue writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Vedo

Maharani A & Maharaja S!! Loved it! 👏

Anandi ko maharani kehne ka credit main nahi le sakti

It's cause if you remember Gauri always used for Anandi , O Maharani!

An Anandi Maharani hai to of course Uske C S Maharaja hote hi hain

Waise bhi Shiv traditional clothes may kisi crown prince se kam nahi lagte RIGHT?

Chahat

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Kurup

chahat...awesome updates yaaar...cant get enough.. dil maange more...

ahhh the nok jhoks of S and A...thats the utter pleasure of a husband and wife relation, being in love every single passng second...superb updates...


Dil maange more?

Doongi don't worry bas ye awesome laga to next part ko aur awesome banae ke liye edit kar rahi hoon

True AnSh ke nok jhok bade cute lagte hain

She did not have a true Husband wife relation with Jagga Daku

I consider Shiv to b Anandi first Husband in all means so unki married life mein mera thoda cute contribution

Enjoy further updates

Chahat


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananhita

Hey Chahat,

I think this is exactly what is going to happen next week, about Dsa falling sick and asking for jaggu and that is how Jaggu will end up coming back from Jail and attending the marraige...only hoping that he does not create any more trouble in Anshland.
I stilll dont understand how Jaggu got away so easily from his wrong doings, how can the family ignore what he did to Shiv and take his confession to be an act of good deed? I think they just wanted to somehow get Jaggu back in the story...this is the only track that did not make any sense in BV...
Please continue writing...


Shiv wiil do anything for Dsa's happiness

Agar Jagga Daku (J D) ki jagah kisi aur ne wo fraud kiya hota toh he would rip that person into pieces with his bare hands

Dsa ke kaaran ke forgave J D Even when J D ne uska EBM kiya tha to leave Ajee even that time he thought Dsa too wants me to scarifice

Dsa was a major deciding factor for him at that time

Even I hate the fact that he has never paid for any of his misdeeds

He is given a chance to sudhro par that BSTRD does something more grievous than the previous misdeed

I will make him pay thru my story for sure

Enjoy my work

Chahat


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Index

Part Page

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Further index on page 15


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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Ok so here's the next installment

This is written in true Anandi style

I have used the words she would and the writers of BV

so enjoy

Chahat

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Part 6

After the lunch they move to the baithak. Daddu enjoys a paan made by Dsa. They discuss about being great grand parents and seeing the new generation. Mahi, Saachi and the kids are joined by Shiv and Shyaam to play a friendly game of catch. Shiv wanted to speak with Shyaam regarding his fears but wondered and felt shy as Shyaam was his friend but also Anandi's older brother. Ira, Sumitra, Meenu and Gehna get together and talk about the duties they will have and also make lists of instructions for Anandi. Basant, Bhairon and Alok discuss the expansion of the latter's export business of handicrafts. It will be a way for regular visits with Anandi and Shiv.

Anandi wanted to speak about something very important with Sugna. Sugna was a married woman with two kids. Sugna was her jiji and it would be easier for Anandi to speak with her regaurding her and Shiv's 'personal life' during the pregnancy. She was very shy to ask anyone else about it. Even with the doctor she had just discussed the gist of the matter. The doctor had told her no complications so go ahead with a little caution. Anandi had tried to explain to Shiv about it but he was too afraid about hurting Anandi and the baby.

They go to her room and Anandi quickly bolts the door to keep away unwanted company. Sugna sees that Anandi is very shy. She can't meet her eyes. She understood what she wanted to discus about because she was there not once but twice. She took Anandi's hand and made her sit comfortably on the bed. "Anandi chal ab mujhe sab bata." "Kya bataoon jiji?" She blushed. "Sab baba sab kuch." "Jiji wo kuch nahi aap toh jaanti hain na ki hum dono kaam ko lekar kitne busy ho jaate hain. Pichle poore mahine ye railway line ke kaam mein lage hue the. Humein zara bhi waqt hi nahi mila ek doosre ke saath. Bas yahan wahan se kuch pal chura lete the aur jo bhi karte badi jald baazi mein. Unhi dino mein shayad pata nahi kab. Pichle kuch dino se mujhe mera mann kaccha se lagta tha par pakka pata nahi tha kya hua. Maine socha kaam ki wajah se bechaini hui hogi. Parson raat ko itne waqt ke baad hum poori tarah se bina kisi jald baazi ek doosre ke saath rahe the. Kal subah mujhe achanak se mandir jaane ki soojhi. Unhone poocha jaane ke bare mein kyunki meri tareekh unhe pata thi tab mujhe shak hua. Apne jo mujhe calendar banane ko kaha tha wo maine banaya tha. Usme jaake check kiya toh mujhe samajh mein aaya ki shayad main umeed se hoon. Udaipur se maine Home pregnanacy kit li thi jab hum railway ka kaam shuru hine se pehle gaye the. Darassal main soch hi rahi thi apne parivaar ko badhane ke bare mein unhe bhi yahi chaht thi par mujhse kaha nahi. Main unhe surprise dena chahti thi is liye poori tayyari kar ke rakhi thi. Ghar par test +ve aaya toh maine unse turant hospital jaane ko kaha. Doctor se kaha ki kisi ko na bataye main nahi chahti this ki Gauri ya Jagat ko pata chale aur wo baat faila de. Sab ki umeeden jagti aur agar test 've aata toh main inko aise hataash nahi dekh pati. Mandir mein hi mujhe kal subah pata chal gaya. Main kitni khush kismet hoon na jiji mujhe jis Devima ne unke jaisa pati diya unhi ke saamne mujhe itni badi khush khabri mili. Main bahut khush hoon jiji ki aaj main unhe ye khushi de pa rahi hoon. Peeche mudkar dekhti hoon toh apne aap par gussa aata hai ki maine unhe kitna tadpaya hoga mere pyaar ke liye." She sobs.

"Anandi ab peeche mudkar nahi tum dono sirf aage hi dekho. Jo hua jaise hua wo Devima ki hi marzi thi. Jab jaago tabse savera. Ek baar tujhe ehsaas hua ki tu jijusa se pyaar karti hai tab tune hi pehel karke unhe khud se joda unke liye yahi sab maayne rakhta hai. Unke intezaar ke badle mein unhe jeevan bhar ke liye saccha pyar mil gaya. Aur haan tu mujhse jo bhi poochna chahe pooch. Kabhi bhi mujhse mat jhijhakna. Hum dono behne hi toh ek doosre se saari baaten kar sakti hain na? Mana ki tu mujhse bahut choti hai aur jab mujhe zaroorat thi tab tu mere liye aisa kuch na kar payi par teri ye jiji tere saath hai. Tu samajh rahi hai na ki mai kya keh rahi hoon." She hugs Anandi as she knows that the queries Anandi has only she can anwer them without holding back.

"Jiji wo mujhse bahut pyar karte hain. Aur ab toh bachhe ki baat se unka pyar aur bhi badh gaya hai. Par pyar ke saath saath unka dar bhi badh gaya hai. Shaadi ke baad bhi wo mere saath bahut sambhalkar rehte the. Sab kuch naap tol kar karte the. Wo mujhe zara sa bhi apni baat se ya harkat se dubha na de yahi sochkar humesha apne daayre mein rehte the. Kal raat maine unki wahi jhalak phir se dekhi. Wo itna kush the ki mujhe kaskar pakad liya aur phir unke chehre poar wahi darr ke haav bhaav dikhe. Sote waqt bhi mujhe jaise pakadkar sote hain waise nahi kiya. Mere kareeb aana chahte the mujhe pyaar karne ka bada mann tha aur mera bhi tha. Wo paas aaye bhi lekin jhat se door ho gaye. Wo mera mann rakhne ke liye sab kuch karte hain. Kal jab mera mann kiya toh unhone mera sath diya par unka darr unpar haavi ho gaya toh mera adhoorapan unhe kachotne laga. Bacche ke liye darr aur meri khushi poori na karne se unme apraadh bahaavna ghar kar gayi. Wo aur duukhi ho jaate hain. Unhe dekh main dukhi ho jaati hoon. Maine samjhaya ki Doctor ne kaha hia ki hum aisa kar sakte hain par unka mann nahi mana. Maine unhe samjhaya bhi ki mere andar baccha door surakshit hai par aap unhe nahi jaanti. Wo darte hain ki unki aisi chaah ki wajah se mujhe ya bacche ko koi nuksaan na pahuche. Humein khush aur tandarust dekhne ke liye wo apne mann ko maar kar jiye ya humaari khushi par koi baadha aaye ye main nahi dekh sakti."

"Anandi tu fikar mat kar sab theek hoga. Jijusa tujhse bahut pyaar karte hain na isliye itni chinta karte hain. Aur tu samajh aur unka boj mat badha. Thoda khud par kabu kar. Aur ye kya dukhi hone ki baat kar rahi hai. In dino toh tum dono ko bahut khush rehna chahiye. Anandi taali ek haath se nahi bajti agar unhe darr hai toh tu unhe sambhal unke door rehne par dukhi hokar unhe dukhi mat kar. Wo pita banne waale hain bahar se chahe jitna mazboot lage aadmi par andar se humse zyaada komal hote hian. Shyaam bhi aise hi chinta karte the. Dekh humaare beech bhi inhi baton ko lekar bahut uljhan thi. Ma mein bahut jhijhak thi mujhe samjhane ki aur ma sa bhi zyaada nahi keh payi. Shyaam aur main doctor ke paas saath hi gaye the. Doctor ne humein sab kuch acche se samjhaya. Meri har jaanch ke waqt unhone humein samay samay par hidayaten di agar humen kuch sambhalkar rehna ho. Dekh tune toh unhe samjhaya na par wo nahi samjhe. Doctor ka gyaan aur unka anubhav jijusa ki madat karenge iss darr ko door rakhne mein. Lal Singh aur Abhishekh hai na chahe toh jijusa unse baat karle wo doctor ki tarah hi unhe samjhayenge. Tum dono ko agar yahan ke hospital mein jaane se koi hichkichahat hai toh tum dono Jaipur ke kisi acche doctor se milo is mamle ke liye. Baki humaare hospital main to ab bahut badhiya doctor aaye hain bahar se. Teri aur jijusa ki wajah se hi na. Tera saara dekh rekh acche se ho jayega."

"Jiji main unse Lal Singh ya Abhishkeh jijusa ke paas jaane ko kahoongi toh wo sharmake 100 bahane bana denge. Wo collector hai aur main sarpanch hoon is liye wo yahan to mujhe nahi lagta baat karne ko hospital jane ko raazi honge. Unhe kehti hoon ki kahin bahar hi mil le. Phir aap jo keh rahi hain wo bhi sahi hai. Jaipur nahi ja payenge Udaipur mein humaare family doctor hain unke paas jayenge. Mummyji aur papaji bhi honge humaare saath toh thodi kam jhijhak hogi. Wo doctor inhe bachpan se jaante hain. Main unse aaj hi baat karti hoon. Waise bhi unke paas toh jaana hi hoga unhe mere reports bhi toh dikhane hain."

"Jiji wo toh baad ki baat hai jab hum Udaipur jayenge par main abhi ke liye kya karoon unhe kaise samjhaaoon? Koi to tareeka hoga na unke darr ko door karne ka? Unka sabse bada darr jiji yahi hai ki main itni choti si naazuk si hoon aur wo thode .. aap jaanti hain na." She blushes. "Anandi agar unka sabse bada darr tujh par kisi tarah ka bojh na pade ye hai toh toh phir ilaaj bhi tumhi dono ke paas hai." "Main samjhi nahi aap kya kehna chahti hain?" "Tu bhi na shaadi ho gayi hai ab tak na samajh hi hai. Arre kuch aur tareeke bhi hai pyaar karne ke. Ek doosre ki madad kar sakte ho apni charam seema tak pahuchne mein. Tujhe khulke hi samjhana padega. Kuch aur position try karo jisse unka wajan tujhpar na pade aur dekho tum logon ko kya pasand aata hai. Padhne ka bahut shaukh hai na dono ko toh kitaab le lo ya phir internet par dekh lo. Waise bhi Ira kakisa ne kaha hai ki agle hafte tum sab unke saath Kuldevi ke darshan ke liye jaaoge. Tab Udaipur mein rukoge toh unke saath jaana doctor ke paas. 7 din ki toh baat hai unme kitni baar?" Anandi looked at her and blushed which gave Sugna an idea that they were very passionate lovers and could do the act daily or manybe multiple times on some days. She was very happy for Anandi and told her that all would be well. Anandi was happy to have an older sister like Sugna. She was relieved.
Edited by chahat11 - 12 years ago

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