TOI:Where's Balika Vadhu's story headed? - Page 5

Originally posted by: kikyo

Excellent posts Mahi loved reading your thesis 😆..

Actually Bv cvs brains too exit with actors exits remember when the Bhairavi Raichura made an exit from serial they came up with over dramatic twist lets kill Bhago ..i am still scratching my head the plot they had written there how Bhago died were they holding Anandi responsible for her mother's death? no matter how many lame excuses they make how can we believe this in two years Anandi never visited Bilaria ?despite knowing her parents are hugely depressed they need her support too .her mother is dying in depression on her daughter's pain while she is dancing with Shiv she never even talked with her mother ?Her Jagaya sensing radar is so big here he in low voice takes her name she senses him so where was her mother 's pain sensing radar ?Seriously that was a huge mess up with Anandi's character extremely Bad writing. Anandi who keeps in touch with her whole village whether anyone informs directly or not she guesses peoples troubles from their actions so how she was unaware of her mother's condition ?

Now with Anjum's exit they couldn't think of anything else but lets turn Jagaya negative that too when ?after they made him realize his past mistakes ?The pit bottom that members are talking here I believe when they made him cheat Anandi , cheat his family can there be any more pit bottom then this? what he was doing at that time ? There they hit him at pit bottom from then on like @Mahi has explained they were gradually pulling him out of it . A tussle between good and bad .Good building guilt in him making him do good works selflessly , making him feel for his family .somewhere showing care and concern for Anandi too .Bad still there controlling his acceptance of his mistakes made him take some drastic steps .With this tussle they took him too his realization where both good and bad were standing in front of him and had a fight with bad failing good became heavy on bad ..They made him accept his mistakes even showing his guilt is real and true when they made him in his most disturbed states even unconsciously accept his mistakes blame solely himself for them so what kind of sense even common sense is this when forgiveness not given to him turn him negative on revenge against Anandi? When he himself knew very well forgiveness is not easy for him ?extremely abrupt move no consistency in story very poor writing .

According to me very unreal and also very poor move in fiction writing too .Then what is the end of this mess ?.JaAn reunion fate has been closed way back but why closing doors for Jagaya to his house his family ?What will that prove? What kind of show is this against child marriage ? and why Singhs deserves this punishment ? Can Shivraj Shehkar fill Jagaya's gap for them when he has his own such a big family? Can Anandi really happily move on in her life with her adopted family grieving behind at completely losing their son and why he turned like this did these new mistakes because the family shunned him on account of justice to her? When the character had always space for repentance and redemption then why throw him into irrevocable blackness? Why push new traits in him a ruthless, deliberate intent to destroy someone as a revenge, planning and plotting for that purpose which were never present in him before .? From where they introduced clinging to Anandi in him when not too long ago I will not count previous incidents here where he told Anandi to move on but a recent one on divorce day when he wished her well to move on in life later no evil smile not even once thinking haha Anandi I know you cannot move on without me so what is this new trait? Even at school seeing Anandi Shiv he stopped didn't come in front of Anandi , they have shown him not jealous there but saying I cannot come in front of her seeing her this happy to ruin her happiness .

Show your characters going through a continous process of change and gradual improvement for more than a year show them much improved from their previous selves then throw them down in one minute for a not so much required twist which has no satisfying end and going in opposite of theme of the original story ?so people will definitely ask where the story of this show heading to ? A good story is the one, which first knows what the story is about and how the story will progress and knows the end...Then they should bring twists and turns accordingly but here cvs are themselves clueless what to do ? If they are preaching morals then they should be extra careful with their story .Through Jagaya they are too showing something when he has positivity in him his soul is not dead then show how he achieves success and try to overcome his mistakes in a proper way..as you know by dooming him you cannot prove anything so when you have to redeem him then use the space you left for his redemption to redeem him instead of taking that space away from him in such an idiotic way?really they need to use their brains and think of better situations , better twists and turns which look sensible according to story but cvs are just clueless how to take their all characters in a sensible way ?Really recently Balika Vadhu 's story became so senseless with Jagaya's negative track so many bloopers now they are back to same realization which started two months ago .Anandi forgave him even will decide with whom she wants to move on in her life without knowing Jagaya's recent plans so what this negative track was for ? nothing wasting time ruining their story . morals became just useless morals, which they tried to make as the story progressed some were extremely funny and lacking even common sense ..Serial could have been taken in a much better way without this forced negative track but but but ? Now I guess cvs are up to messing up Dadisaa's character ..i hope I am wrong 😕