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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: QuagMyred
Haw!!! How did I miss it???
Its awesome Ritz!!!
Update soon!!!
Loving it!

Oh nyra i didnt knw u havent read am glad u liked it 😳

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Vishakha_Sakhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Heya Ritz update this already...pretty please! 😳

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Vedo
Heya Ritz update this already...pretty please! 😳

will try to !!!😃

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

PART --2 Jalebi time😃

Anandi hesitates first but finally manages to speak .."Aaap yahan koi kaam tha?? mujhe

bol dete main aa jaati !!"

Shiv snaps out from his lala land and both realise Shiv is holding anandi's waist in his

strong arms !! And both move away !!

Shiv "Ahem kya main aap se milna nahin aa sakta aise hi bina kaam se ?"

Anandi "Nahin mera matlab yeh nahin tha .. she turns to the girls and say aacha sab

ladkiyan aaj ka homework le lo !!"

She goes to the black board and writes the homework and then the girls leave the skul !!

sayin

"byee jiji "!!

Shiv adjusts his jacket and then remembers the work for which he came here and fetches the

jalebis and move towards her both sit down on stairs !

Shiv says "yeh jalebiyaan aap ke liye kal raat ke khubsoorat dinner ke liye thank u !! "

ANandi evtends her hands to take one but realises theres chalkdust on her palms and says

"Main haath dho ke aati hun !! " And takes out bottle from her bag but Shiv stops her

and says "Main hun na main khila deta hun ! "

Anandi is amazed and a bit shocked then turns Shy .. BG music!!

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roberoi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Res

My first res so I blundered I think and quote mein type kiya sorry...but my comment is on next page now...looking forward to more soon...this is going to be cheesy soon I know like the show (fingers crossed)

Edited by roberoi - 12 years ago

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dixie123

@dixie123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Haaye Haaye.. Shiv is feeding her Jalebis !! ☺️ Will probably get to see this sometime soon.
Itni short update Ritzi ?😡

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VerboseG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Tarsa tarsa ke kyon maar rahe ho??😛

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

@dixie thank u i also think we might see it soon !! but mujhe maat daato see slowly i type so abhi ke liye itna hi i have to think plot in advance 😳

@gina sowwie will update more next time if i give full fledged updat it will take time and the update will get delayed so thoda jo likha de diya 🤣

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Piya Sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Awww ritzi...its so sweet ☺️ Shivji feeding jalebis to Ajee

Btw itni ''long'' update kyun ? Thodi aur chhoti kar deti 😡

I want next update soon ! 😡 😆