Jalebi time --SS !!--Updated ON PAGE 5!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its Very short i so much want to write but cant type at one go so please bear with me !!

I wonder if my writing has detoriated coz am writing one after such long time


FB of yesterday night's dinner play on

Shiv's mind as he sits in his office

cabin ...nowadays he thinks all the time

the sweet moments he spends with anandi

.. he blushes remembering how anandi saw

him in that towel state ..and her advise

of "ache se nahiyega "
All was perfect if only choti maa.. thodi

der se aati toh he would have got more

time to spend with anandi

He then gets up and starts to leave for

anandi's school he has to thank her for

yester night dinner which he hadnt

...why is he telling lie to himself

thinks Shiv he cant resist to meet her

again ...
He takes his Jeep and says to Bheem Singh
he is going to anandi's school ..
BS then remembers some

thing and goes out

to tell that the jeep has some problem

but by the time he does Shiv doesnt

listens and is off ..He decides to call

sir but the mobile is switched off he

is left worried !!..
And there Shiv is merely Driving the car thinking about aandi and on his way buys some

jalebis for his sweet heart and reaches school ..

He heards sounds of giggle and laughter coming from school as he reaches nearer and the

sight leaves him amused and amazed !His mouth is left half open and jalebis almost fall!!

but he grips them ..there he sees his lady love eyes blinfolded and she is playinh luka

chupi with school gals and she is smiling this beautiful scene almost makes shiv heart leap

and he freezes for some seconds before the gals notices the collector saab standing there

and drags him but before they cud say anything shiv signals them to be quite ...

He moves forward as anandi is turning aroud and trying to grasp any one of the girls and

saying kahan ho sab badmaashi kar rahe ho abhi pakkadti hun sabko !! the girls stand away

and smiling and Shiv moves forward keeps jalebis on a side table and turns around but loh

!! and is standing right behind him and she collides and impact of Shiv makes her fall but

before she hits the ground SHiv with his strong arms holds her in srk style !! Anandi is

confused thinking what happened and relieved someone caught her .. Shiv stares at her face

her eyes blind folded ..Anandi tries to get up SHiv comes out of his reverie ...but as she

does try to get up shiv doesnt leaves her waist then she tries to untie her blindfold but

Shiv stops her hands and himself opens her patti !!


Anandi opens her eyes to see Shiv staring her with moony eyes !!



DO hit like if u like it 😃
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khusi_* thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
itna chhotu sa rit..teri tarah!!
but cute too like u😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww 🤗 ritzi...you are sooo cute! 😳 and your SS is cute like you only. And as khushi di said, its chootu like you 😆 😆
So complete it jaldi jaldi 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww kitna Short and sweet update tha yeh Ritziii.. jaldi se next part update karo.. loved it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was nice though small, but the point at where u ended is scaring me...Dont harm shiv in anyways plz...I know he is ther hero with a body and a brian, still ek kharoch bhi nahii lagna haiii uss well maintained body kooo,,,,

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cute one😛. Lekin sirf itnasa... dis is not fair, jaldi update karo plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: khusi_*

itna chhotu sa rit..teri tarah!!

but cute too like u😆


😆thanks lolz iss mein bhi u all found cutness and similarity to me thank u all
i will update this part soon!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye itna chotu motu update.. jaldi update kar..
itsRitzi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: DonIsback

oye itna chotu motu update.. jaldi update kar..


thank u kya karu i cant type at one go i have given a chotu update!!😆
vasanthimrao thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Following Anjana's strategy kya?? editing in d same post... But this one was also very short😔.. need more dosage😆😆

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