OS special for my AnShians-fans at sagayi thread

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This is a special THANK YOU OS to all the friends who had liked my OS in the sagayi thread and made it into a winning OS. :)



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Anandi and Shiv are looking at each other , while the family members and guest are enjoying the delicious food prepared by the Haveli Members.

Mahi: Ahem, Bhabi, kya main apnay bhai ko aapsey do min ke liye cheen saktha hun?

said Mahi with a twinkle in his eye.

Shiv looked at Mahi annoyed. He did not want to leave Anandi even for a moment. Something had changed inside of him. He had never felt like that before. Yes he did love Anandi but the feeling had intensified.

Anandi looked at him and then the next moment she turned and headed towards Irawati who was gesturing her to come and sit besides her.

Kya hua!? said shiv irritatingly to mahi

'bhaiyah sorry, aapko maine bhabhi sey door kiya lekin, mujhe aapsey ek zaroori baat kehni thi' he said urgently

Shiv still looking irate, searched for Anandi

bhaiyah ! shook mahi

'bhaiyyah plan tho suniye. Bhabi aur aapko akele main milanay ka plan!' said Mahi urgently

Shiv finally paid attention towards Mahi. The words Anandi, alone rang like bells in his ears!

'kya?' he said looking shocked

Mahi's proposal might be tempting but he knew that trying to speak to Anandi that too alone was no less dangerous than putting his head in the mouth of a lioness.

Mahi looked at his brother excitedly and continued.

'bhaiyyah come on. Thoda tho romance layiye apnay zindagi main. acha aap koi gift laye hain bhabi ke liye?' he asked innocently

'gift?' asked shiv confused.

Don't tell me, ki aapnay kuch special nahi khareeda bhabi ke liye! said mahi flabbergasted with the very thought of how Shiv could be related to him.

Shiv looked at Mahi sheepishly and nodded.

'Oh wow! Good. Ek min ke liye tho main dar gaya tha' Ok then aap bhabi ko ye gift akele main dijiyega main arrangement kertha hun.

Mahi then looked at shiv and then with a flash he rushed out of there.

Shiv was now earnestly terrified with the thought of meeting Anandi alone. He put his hands inside his sherwani , feeling through the gift that he had gotten for Anandi.

His heart starting to race faster as he saw Anandi sitting besides his mother and speaking animatedly.

For a moment he felt as if she had looked at him but the very next moment he saw her deeply immersed in the conversation. Then out of no where he saw his brother move towards Anandi.

Shiv noticed that he was talking to her and pointing at the stairs. Anandi for a moment looked at Shiv, with what felt like an accusatory look. Chills ran down his spine. He could not imagine how a strict collector like himself became so fragile in Anandi's presence.

Anandi walked towards Dadisa and spoke with her.

Han ja chori lekin jaldi aa jana' said Dadisa

Anandi then went towards the stairs and moved to her room. Then the very next moment there was darkness everywhere.

'Are maaakhann! ye ke ho gaya ' came the worried voice of Dadisa

'Masa aap fikr main kijiye main abhi dekhtha hun' came Bhiarav's voice in response.

'India nay bohot taraqi ker li hai lekin electricity kay mamlay main voh peechay reh gaya hai.' came the voice of Dadaji

'Papaji aap dariye main main yahin per hun' said Alok

'Oye chup! main aise hi major nahi tha Indian Army main. Ye tho kuch bhi nahi hai. Maine tho raath kay andhayray main dushman kay puraay battalion ko hakka bakka ker diya tha' Said Dadaji

'Ok ok daddu aap please abhi shuru math ho jayiye' said Mahi who was standing besides his grandfather

'Shiv kahan hai' asked CM worried

'mom voh bathroom gaye hain' said Mahi

'Lekin is andhere main kahin '' said Cm

'kya ghum na jaye?' mocked Mahi

'Mom Shiv bhaiyyah ki Shadi honay wali hai. Voh chotay bachay nahi hai ki ghum jayengay' said Mahi.

Irawati, Alok and Dadaji laughed

Shiv had slipped and gone upstairs. He saw that there were 3 doors but he was not sure which was Anandi's room.

He knocked at the first door

'Anandi'Anandi..'

There was no response

He then moved to the second door

'Anandi'.Anandi'A'' he said and the door opened

Shiv knew at once that Anandi was standing in front of him. His heart had started to race which was an indication that she was in his presence.

'Collector..sa'' said Anandi

'Shiv' , Shiv kahiye

'Han lekin kya hua.. aap yahan kya ker rahe hain' asked Anandi urgently. She thought it must be something important.

Suddenly Anandi felt her hand being pulled. Shiv out of a sudden impulse had pulled her hand and was taking him somewhere.

'Kya hua?asked Anandi worried. There was darkness. Slowly the candle lights were filling up in the main hall, yet it was not enough to lighten the entire hall.

Soon Anandi and Shiv were standing on the terrace. The darkness had finally met its match as the moonlight hit the face of Anandi and Shiv.

Anandi looked at shiv confused

'abh batayiye ki kya baat hai! aap mujhe yahan chath per kiyun le ker aaye hain' asked Anandi. She was facing shiv.

Shiv looked around and then looked at her.

There was nothing as beautiful as the sight in front of him. The moonlight hit the jewelry that Anandi was wearing and shone brightly.

'Anandi, aapsey kuch kehna tha' said Shiv

Anandi looked at him confused and waited

'main aapke liye kuch laya hun. Sabkay saamnay de nahi saktha isiliye aapko yahan per'' he said

It had just dawned upon Anandi that the electricity cut might not be coincidental after all.

Shiv was waiting for her outburst but he saw that Anandi looked at the floor in silence.

'Tho ' main aapko dun? he asked innocently

Anandi looked up at him. There was a twinkle in her eye suggesting that she had found Shiv's gesture absolutely amusing. Yet she did not let the smile reach her lips.

Shiv took out the gift and showed it to her.

'I hope aapko acha lagay' he said

Anandi gracefully took it from him.

Shiv looked at her hopefully.

'Thanks' She said

There was momentary silence and then they heard footsteps!

'Lagtha hai koi aa raha hai' said Shiv urgently

They ran towards the other corner of the terrace, which held the water tank.

Shiv's massive body easily obscured Anandi. She slowly peeked through his shoulders to see who it was.

'Bhaiyah'bhaiyyah' came the whisper of Mahi

Shiv came out of hiding.

'Mahi thumnay tho aaj maar hi dala mujhe' he said panting.

Mahi looked around and saw Anandi appear behind Shiv

He waved at her excitedly.

'Bhaiyyah kaam ho gaya? ! he asked

Shiv nodded

'ok BHabi chaliye. Issey pehlay ki aapko dundnay sabh aa jaye' said mahi urgently.

As Anandi made her way out, she was pulled back. She turned around and noticed that her duppata had been stuck in Shiv's watch.

Shiv and Anandi looked at each other for 5 whole seconds and slowly a smile emerged in both their lips.

Anandi remembered the first time her duppata was caught in his watch and she was sure that Shiv was reminiscing that very thing.

'Wow! kya classic yash raj scene hai!' interrupted mahi

'lekin agar aap dono nay ye jari rakha na tho , aapki khair nahi'

'Collector aur Sarpanch, 2012 Love story- kay kissey puray jetsar main tho kya, puaray Rajasthan main mashhoor ho jayengay' said Mahi

Anandi removed the duppata from Shiv's watch and followed Mahi.

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Vishakha_Sakhi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mine! 😛 Loved it Suchi!! 👏 👏
Shiv was so cute, being all afraid of Anandi!! 😳
Such a sweeet gift he got her...I want a scene of him making her wear it!!!

Edited by Vedo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye thank you os.. agar muje pata hota.. thak you os milega winner se to mai sab ko winner declared kar deti.. 😆, but suchi.. os was just awesome.. wow. its so romantic.. i love ansh ka chori chupke romance... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...suchi...write one more for this one😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oyeee gift kya hai re !? Meri tabby me pics are not loading 😭 😭
btw, WONDERFULL OS 👏 😳
love you suchi 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congooo suchi🤗
And u know if the gift for us is this soo lovely OS...then we will give you 'Best OS' award daily so u write more n more for us.Its soo sweet and adorable suchi...u express their emotions so beautifully.Loved the ansh+mahi bonding.Suchi you shud write more plss😊
Edited by Malika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats Suchi on winning ! This was so sweet. Awesome job as always !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will save this treat for later. Thank you, Suchi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS! You write some of the best AnSh fiction. Thanks for this. I hope there are more to come!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Suchi ... that was sweetness & adorableness personified !

Congrats !

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