Ansh FF: dangerous game (part 4 update on page 8)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue

He open his eyes in fear.. Then he notice his surrounding.. His feature suddenly become tense as he sense someone behind him.. he look back at too and stand still like statue.. then he saw him.. he saw him holding gun in his hands.. looking at him.. his master..

master look back at his culprit.. the man standing in front of him all scare.. like rabbit' he love tense look on face and his tense features.. he love when people scare with him.. he love to scare them all of them.. but now his mission is more important for him..

the other man is middle of 40 ' 45 ages.. and looking all scare.. and tense.. Fresh tears appear in his eyes.. as he beg to him for once to his life

" Muje mat mariye . muje mat mariye' mere bacche hai..mai aap jaisa kahegi waiase hi karuga"

master look back at him and smirk.. and than thundered in cold voice

"tumhe kya lagta hai, ab muje tumhari jarurat hai..?,,

The other man look at him with hopeful look

Master chuckle again' and said in stern voice

" ab tumhari mout meri madat karegi.." " tum maroge aur koi aur fasega.." kal aisa ujala lekar suraj aanewala hai ki sab kuch badaj jayega"..

" muje tumhari jarur nahi rahi" " an muje tumhari jarurt bilkul nahi rahi"

Other man looks at him and realized that all hope is died. The look he saw on his face is clear that he going to kill him..

There no way of escape.. he pray for the first time in his life for all wrong this he did..

He look back at him again' he saw that he already set revolver on his temple and then

Shoot..

He cried bloody scream but it's died down in marriage celebration of near bye'

master who killed him saw the people is celebrating.. Unknown to them .. the terror is going to be soon enter in there lives

Because killer decided to keep this body. On the celebration place'

his smile is now getting wilder and wilder by now over his victory of his man death

his dangerous game is just began now'

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KwitKatts thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG what a start!!! I'm already scared
Do continue pls😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pari jaldi update karna
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW nw dis was my forte i love thrillers but i wonder what who whom akhir itne romantic setting mein yeh dangerous game !!

Superb Start waiting hungrily for next!!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It is thrilling. 😲


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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice prologue ...
continue soon nd pm me ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow what a start...👏👏

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

what a suspenseful start


thank you... i am glad that you like this ff.. actually its different from other ff.. but its dark ff.. ansh will introduce soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: katts

OMG what a start!!! I'm already scared

Do continue pls😃

oh thank you.. for replying... you are scared for what.. dont be.. 😉.. its ok.. i will surely update ff but first i need to update my other ff too.. 😛

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