OS: Shubh Shubha with Ansh + Jugat!

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Nazneen

@SiriuslySujal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hahahaha, love it! 😃 The ultimate punishment for Jagya! xDDD

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I commented on aastha's thread here also commenting so glad to see naughty shiv😉

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liv2laugh

@liv2laugh

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Anj 🤗

Now you are writing OS' too 😛

Hahaha I know you already wrote on a long time ago on Geet forum ...yaad karo 😉 😛

This one is nice especially because Gauri married Dr. 33 Khanna 🤣 🤣 ...and Jagya is now junior to Lal Singh and Abhishek and they yell at him cos he has no value for money 👍🏼.

The intimacy between Shiv and Anandi was very well shown. Loved how Shiv kept yelling not knowing Jugs was right there and Anandi alerted him 😳

I already wrote an OS so we will consider this payback 😛.

Jhan 🤗

Edited by liv2laugh - 13 years ago

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Awesome dear...even i want a track where Gauri ad Jagat burn seeing well deserved love in Anandi's life

but what i loved most was how u managed to keep Jagat's character same even after him asking for forgivenees...insaan ka andar ka insaan same hi rehta hai...

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Monamie

@monamie111

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

OMG!!! OMG OMG...this is sooo cute and amazing!! ☺️ 😍

superb...i loved it!...pls write more like this..plsss... 😳

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dixie123

@dixie123

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Like I already commented, it is superb. Accha romantic naughty Pati bangaya hai Shiv !

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AnjanaYYZ

@AnjanaYYZ

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: liv2laugh
Anj 🤗

Now you are writing OS' too 😛

Hahaha I know you already wrote on a long time ago on Geet forum ...yaad karo 😉 😛

This one is nice especially because Gauri married Dr. 33 Khanna 🤣 🤣 ...and Jagya is now junior to Lal Singh and Abhishek and they yell at him cos he has no value for money 👍🏼.

The intimacy between Shiv and Anandi was very well shown. Loved how Shiv kept yelling not knowing Jugs was right there and Anandi alerted him 😳

I already wrote an OS so we will consider this payback 😛.

Jhan 🤗

Jhan - right , u don't have to pay the due😆🤗

I didn't mean to write OS... accidentally likdhiya🤣🤣🤣 Shaista requested outlandish story idea...then a romantic one...my fingers slipped!😳😆

Geet forum...chhup bilkul chhup...its not my fault its got like 200 or so likes🤣🤣 I didn't realize it would become such a hit! 😲 Aaj bhi usse forum ki pagal ladkhiyon ask me to update that one incomplete OS...but, if I do then I will be accused of corrupting children that visit IF☺️

Edited by AnjanaYYZ - 13 years ago

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dixie123

@dixie123

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Not to worry Anjana bacchon ke bare mein. We can put a censor board like thing at the starting 'Enter with caution. Not for children under 18 yrs or whatever age is appropirate !!! 😊

You are such a terrific writer and a poet too.. Apni creative kalakaari ko waste nahin hone dena. hum sab ko yeh CVs yeh sab TV par nahin dikhayenge. Toh, atleast we can read and enjoy !

I wish I had this kind of creativity.

Edited by dixie123 - 13 years ago