--ANSH LIGHTS out --Part 2 Updated pg -14 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: khusi_*

patti ko kiss kar raha hai🤣

awesome ritzi!!

😆😆 bechari Ritika...dheere dheere romance pe utar aa rai he😆
Awesome job Ritz👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: katts

😆😆 bechari Ritika...dheere dheere romance pe utar aa rai he😆
Awesome job Ritz👏👏


I know its funny lol i am bad writer in case of romance n my idea of romance is Null🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Hey nice one Ritzi.. Just finished reading it...👏
I agree with katts... "dheere dheere romance pe utar aa rai he" 🤣

Read some M&B to brush up your knowledge on Romance...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Thanks Sanju

No i cant torchure myself reading romantic novel !!!

Haha it will be comic romance 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75


PLOT 2
Anandi turns around in shock n sees Shiv sleeping She wondered if her ears were ringing due to weakness!!
She then thinks to bring the medicine of vaid ji it will be good for him and will help to lower the fever .
She goes out to fetch medicine .

{Meanwhile near the kitchen }
Ghena talking to DS "SHiv ki tabiyaat kaafi kharab ho gaayi woh bhi hamari wajah se Par ek taraf se yeh devi maiyya ka sanket lagta hain
woh bhi Shiv aur Anandi ka milan chahte hain Ab toh hamara kaam aur aasaan ho jayega .."

DS "Tu saahi keh raahi hain chodi abhi main soch rahi thi ki mandir se ghum ke aate hain !!"
Ghena"Masa iss waqt mandir ghar pe koi nahin hain aur Shiv ka khayal rekhne ke liye hum mein rahna chahiye "she said confused.
DS "Arre chodi abhi samjhi nahin dekh mujhe bhairon ka phone aaya tha ki usse aane mein der hogi aur Shiv ka khayal rakhne ke liye Anandi hain na isse woh log ek dusre ke saath aur waqt beta sakenge kya pata Anandi ka gussa shant ho aur usse kuch aage nazaar aaye ..Ab chal jaldi Thaal lekar "

"Kahan jana hain " Asked Anandi from behind ..
DS n Ghena are astonished and change expressions quickly
DS"woh chodi mandir jana ka mann kar raha tha baithe jee ghabra raha tha isliye chal ghena "
"par dadisa abhi paani hoga kaafi "Replied Anandi
"nahin paani nahin hain baarish nahin hui na humlog jald aa jayenge tu apna khyal rakhna aur wooh Shiv ka bhi haan hum aate hain "Said DS
Ghena comes taking thaal n they both leave ..
Anandi stares on thinking pata nahin dadisa ko kya ho gaya mujhe paani lekar jana chahiye collector saab so dawaai deni hain ..
She fills a glass of water and goes to Shiv's room

Shiv is sitting checking his mobile whcih has got wet and not working
Anandi enters and Shiv sees her she tells "Yeh lijiye dawaai kha lijiye yeh vaid ji ki dawaai hain isse khane se aapko kaafi rahat milegi "and gives the medicine
Shiv looks at it with disgust and asks "kya yeh kaafi kadwa hain "
"are apko abhi bhi baachpana suj raha hain apko thik hona hain ki nahin aur yeh dawaai kadwi nahin hain lijiye "replied anandi like teacher
Shiv takes it thinking aapke haath se zeher bhi piloon khushi se n smiles
Anandi sees this n says "kya hua ??"
Shiv nods nothing and eats the medicine and drinks water .

Anandi takes the glass and leaves .She comes down and keeps it in kitchen suddenly theres loadshedding !!
Anandi thinking aare yeh baati kaise chali gaayi shayad kal toofan ke karan bijli ke tar idhar udhar ho gaye honge ..She goes to find candle .
Shiv comes down the stairs and wonders yeh sab log hain kahan bijli ko bhi abhi jaani thi .He arrives down and sits on couch .Anandi comes taking the candle enlightened and asks"aarre aap niche kyun aaye kuch chahiye tha toh bol dete "
"No am fine aap ne dawaai di uska asar kar gaya "says Shiv "waise sab kahan hain koi dikhai nahin de ra ha ??"
Anandi "Tausa kisi kaam se savere hi nikal gaaye ,baapusa lal singh ko laane gaaye hain aapke liye aur taisa dadisa mandir gaaye hain abhi aate hi honge ..pata nahin bijli kab aayegi !!"
Edited by ritzi12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
hey giri giri giri giri bijli giri... Shiv mein giri, anandi mein giri, lo gir padeee 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
i like it first one wala part... 🤣..mera bechara shiv.. 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
My vote goes to plot 2...AnSh and batti gul!!! Can't ask for more😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
ritzi can u pls change the color of the text buddy...cant read it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
thanks all but which part vote plz!!!

Unlike the one u dont wanna vote for !!

@sanju wats this bijli giri nahin gul ho gaayi

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