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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...this is really good and lovely...i loved it 😳
can u pls continue this one?..i would love to read more of this story! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I agree with samyuktaa... It indeed resembles a M&B novel..
Waiting for the monsoon in BV now... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow.. Lovely OS... 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Ritushree.

hey priety awesome OS dear.loved it so much.this OS is surely a treat to read with the ongoing rainshowers of kolkata right now.i m enjoying it so much.


plz plz plz do continue.

luv
ritushree



yup,and the rain makes the weather so comfortable,hope shiv anandi will become so comfortable with each other,will update the next part soon,may be day after tomorrrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: monamie111

wow...this is really good and lovely...i loved it 😳

can u pls continue this one?..i would love to read more of this story! 😃


yup dear I will continue this one,thanks for support 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kuch kuch hota hai

part: 2

Thank you all again for the support. Sorry for the late update guys,was stucked in some work. Here it is the next part. Hope you will enjoy.

It's raining...shiv driving the jeep slowly. Driving the hoodless jeep is being difficult in the rain'All the surroundings are silent. Suddenly stormy winds start blowing. Shiv looks at Anandi. Is she alright? Anandi lost in her thoughts, the dream and now Shiv's charm. Why is she thinking of all these? The trees nodding themselves heavily. Suddenly a long, solid branch of a heavy tree falls down in front of the jeep by Anandi's side. It falls directly on Anandi's leg. Anandi shouts in pain. Shiv stops the car immediately. He goes towards Anandi, put aside the branch. Blood flowing down from her beautiful smooth skin. Tears in Shiv's eyes. The hero, the macho man who never cries at any situation, became so restless seeing his beloved's pain. What is he just thought his beloved! Does he love her? He covers the wound with his handkerchief. Blowing of the winds stopped. But the rain is still pouring. Shiv looks at Anandi. What a innocent face. Beautiful large eyes. He can spend all his life only looking in her eyes.

Shiv: it'll be dangerous to drive jeep in this wheather.(concern in his voice)

Anandi: collector Sahib I have to to reach home as early as possible.

Shiv:I'm thinking about any other way.

Anandi:there is a shortcut I know. We can walk through the field, and will will reach home in near about twenty minutes.

Shiv : okay let's go.

Anadi tries to stand up but failed due to the recent wound. Shiv lifts her in his arms and starts walking towards the field. Anandi tries to reject him, tries to free herself. But can't because of the strong bond of this muscular man.

Anandi: please collector Sahib, chod dihie mujhe(leave me). I can manage to walk myself.

Shiv: because you are the sarpanch of this zilla(district), don't think you are a super woman and can do whatever you want. Please trust me for once.

Anandi can't utter a single word. She doesn't know what to say? She looks at the man. So muscular even so kind. So much kharoos, yet so charming, so caring. His short hairs all wet. Droplets of rain from his hair directly pouring down to Anandi's hand. Oh Anandi was holding shiv's shoulder. Even she herself don't know when she did this. Shiv walking through the field with Anandi in his arms towards haveli.

Badi Haveli

Dadisa: don't know why the girl didn't came yet. It's raining again. But ane assurance is Shiv is there with our daughter.(in thought: I have to propose Shiv for Anandi's marriage, yesterday that lady said, they are thinking about shiv's proposal for their daughter. I don't want any hardles in our girl's life anymore.)

Precap: Dadisa proposing Shiv for the marriage. Stay tuned 😉

P.S. don't forget to give your lovely comments. Whether it is criticism or appreciation.

part:3 ( http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3054174&TPN=4&#59828138 )

Edited by preity_d - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Loved it dear...
Plz update the next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
wow lovely part preity.loved it so much.continue soon

ritushree
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
was too good yar.. 👏 ⭐️ loved it... 😊
pls do continue... nd its very helpful dat u hav written in english 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Hey Preity... loved it...AnSh in rain..and Anandi in Shiv's arms😍..beautiful and thanks for the PM 😊

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