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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part:3

kuch to hai tujhse Raabta

Mumbai

who was that whom I saw with anandi,yesterday in the T.V. I must found out. If that man is like Shravan, then Anandi may be in problem. I should rescue her. Gauri is also busy with work. In between I must chek it out, who was that man? Anandi is such a foolish girl, he don't evev know how to talk to people, and govt. giving her prizes. Hahahaha. That man surely a problem maker .

In S.N.G

Senior Dr.(dr.33): gauri we are going to jaipur for attending a conference in the jaipur medical college tomorrow. You also join us. It will be very helpful in your career.

Gauri: (willingly) yes Sir, why not. (Then hesitantly) but Sir I have to ask my husband befor.I will inform you tonight.

Dr,33: Sure, and try to make it possible. It's a good opportunity.

Gauri nods her head.

Jaitsar

In one days rain, the village became so isolated. No one in the road, or elsewhere.

Shiv brings Anandi in front of Badi habeli. He put her down on the floor and helps her to walk. They comes in the living room.

Dadisa keenly waiting for them. She looks that Anandi limping and Shiv supporting her. She in a deep concern asks,

Dadisa: kya huo chodi? Kaise huo? Are o gehna jaldi aa.[what happened girl?and how? Gehna come immedialtly]

Then Gehna arrived.

Gehna: are Anandi kya hua?( She supports Anandi . ) chal mere saath main dawa laga deti hoon.[what happened to you Anandi? Come I will give you some medicine]

Shiv still holding her hand and staring at her with concern.

Anandi: collector sahib, we have to go.( and she tries to free herself from Shiv's hold. Shiv realizes and frees her.)

Dadisa notices all this with happy heart. When they left, she asks Shiv to sit.

In gaga couple's house

Gauri: after completing her packing. She thought now I must tell jagat.but where is he? Didn't arrived yet. He has no work,and still out of home. Disrespect came on her face. She then finds a letter on the table.

"sorry Gauri tumhe pahle bata nahi paya. Main kuch kaam se bahar jaa raha hoon. Do tin dino me laut aaunga"("sorry for not telling you. I'm going out of station for some days,will come within 2 or 3 days"). Gauri snatches the paper with anger.

Jaitsar

Shiv is still looking at the way of Anandi's departure.

Dadisa: shiv beta kyat um maari Anandi se byah karoge? Shiv in a shock.

In his mind, did she realizes my feelings about Anandi? Oh god, I can hide anything.. but he have to tell his family. But now he have to something to Dadisa? Suddenly Anandi's beautiful face came in his mind. All flash backs, her chumpy, her anger, her cute arguments, her mesmerizing speech, her pain. Oh god he want to wipe away her tears. He badly wants her in his life. He nods his head in yes.

In circuit house

He is dreaming about Anandi. Her everything. He cant stop himself to stop thinking about her.

( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gIZWXV3SoYw&feature=related ) open the link and hear the song "RAABTA" while reading to visualise this following part.

He dreams a dance sequence . he holding Anandi with his arms. They are visiting a beautiful hill station. Anandi dancing ,holding Shiv's hand.they are on the sea beach. Anandi fondling his face,his hair.In the dusk, They are sofly ball dancing in the isolated beach, holding each-other.In a forest cottage.It's raining outside. Its night time. They are sitting near fire-place. Anandi on Shiv's lap. Shiv softly kisses her neck, her shoulder. She is so close that he even can feel her warm breath. His lips going to touch her's.

Suddenly, the phone rings. It's Ashi's call. He says everything to her. He is so happy. Ahsi broken in her heart but feels happiness, because of Shiv's happiness.

Precap: (Anandi's rejection and Jagat's ariival)

P.S. please comment, whether it is good or bad... criticism or appreciation anything.😃 should I continue?😕

Edited by preity_d - 13 years ago