Sara TS-If only (Epilogue on page 8) - Page 4

Hey nice story

Loved the way Priya opened up to Ram

Continue soon

Want to read more

But didn’t get the 19yr old priya part

Is she so young here ?

I am glad you sidelined Sara 😆 And your RaYa are so beautiful!

Poor Ram accidentally bro-zoned himself 🤣 but I loved how Ram asked out Priya. "I know you are just nineteen, but you are holding yourself back, and I hope one day, you find a reason to let go". Beautiful lines. ❤

Sara and Vikrant are also very cute.😳 I think Vikrant in the show wasn't so mature in his twenties, his maturity came with age/experience. But this Vikrant is a fresh breeze of air.

Thanks for making this a TS, and thanks for tagging. 🤗

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

I love your version of RaYa ❤️ this can be a mature love story on youngsters and it makes for a nice change. Liking Vikrant here. Is he Ram’s friend here?

lol, not sure, in the first draft, i had made him his friend, but then yesterday's post where i showed how Ram favors his own, I decided ki jaane do😆

Originally posted by: tournesol

I am glad you sidelined Sara 😆 And your RaYa are so beautiful!

Poor Ram accidentally bro-zoned himself 🤣 but I loved how Ram asked out Priya. "I know you are just nineteen, but you are holding yourself back, and I hope one day, you find a reason to let go". Beautiful lines. ❤

Sara and Vikrant are also very cute.😳 I think Vikrant in the show wasn't so mature in his twenties, his maturity came with age/experience. But this Vikrant is a fresh breeze of air.

Thanks for making this a TS, and thanks for tagging. 🤗

Ram ne agar khud pe khuladi nahi maari toh woh Ram kaise🤣 kabhi na kabhi galti se maturity ki baatein nikal jaate hai re Vikrant ke muh se, nahi toh Sara kaise pategi?😆

Okay, it's a wonderful piece. And thank you for considering the gap of PriRa, might not be much in thirties, it is blaring when Priya is just getting out of her teens and Ram is in twenties.

Also, please keep dropping snippets from this world. It's just so wholesome and warm.

Originally posted by: 999loveyourself

Okay, it's a wonderful piece. And thank you for considering the gap of PriRa, might not be much in thirties, it is blaring when Priya is just getting out of her teens and Ram is in twenties.

Also, please keep dropping snippets from this world. It's just so wholesome and warm.

Glad it was worth your time🙈

Ram getting paranoid about Priya bro zoning him 🤣🤣

Uff !! I want to see this so badly now !!

Originally posted by: vaidharbhi95

Ram getting paranoid about Priya bro zoning him 🤣🤣

Uff !! I want to see this so badly now !!

Priya kpo kisi khai se dhakel do, let her get memory loss and then Vedu can convince her that she is PRam'ss muh boli sis😆

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Priya kpo kisi khai se dhakel do, let her get memory loss and then Vedu can convince her that she is PRam'ss muh boli sis😆

Iss idiotic leap se achaa tha, RaYa ko khai me phekkar maar dete aur show khatam kar dete

Originally posted by: vaidharbhi95

Iss idiotic leap se achaa tha, RaYa ko khai me phekkar maar dete aur show khatam kar dete

and then angels ke presence mein phirse shaadi