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Okay, so I loved Monday's episode (181) Ram's confession was so damn good, and Priya's hesitation was acted out by the actress so well, seriously both of them have amazing chemistry... But this is something I imagined Priya doing after all the VK investigation. So, here goes...


"Brinda, you sure he will like this?" Priya asked. Brinda raised her eyebrows, Sara intervened "Priya, are you sure you wanna do this?" she asked, "Yes, I do, but I am nervous, I have never done anything like this before" Priya said looking at her knotted fingers. "I am very sure he will love this, especially when it's from you. Go for it, you both deserve this." Bri said holding her shaky hands. "okay... let's just check over things once more. Chocolate cake check, ice check, roses check, champagne check, the watch... wait where is the watch?!" Priya asked frightened, "Calm down Priya, it's under the sheet... look... you know what, you drink some water, and please don't get tensed, everything is perfect" Sara assured her. "Hmm... I guess Mr. Kapoor, must be arriving in sometime, Adi should be bringing him here. I hope he is patient enough to listen to me" Priya sighed. Brinda knew what had happened, while Sara questioned, "Well, he has gotten really good at reading me, and I didn't want to ruin this surprise for him. Remember the birthday scene, something similar to that. So, today morning when he asked me that if I was free today so we could spend time and go out, I said no coming with excuses that I have classes. I do feel bad for lying but I only did it for him. Anyways, he got mad, and just stormed out, saying that I don't ever spend time with him, I don't think he is important, he kept going on and on. You know how he is..." Sara nodded and chuckled, "he is gonna be blown away" Bri agreed too, while Priya gave a small smile to both. "Thanks to you both, without whom I would have never been able to do this." The tri shared a hug, and both Sara and Bri wished her all the best.

"I don't have any mood to go to the bakery now" Ram whined, "Ram, what is up with you? From morning you have been grumpy?" Adi asked, "Woh... Priya... I thought today you know, we could go out somewhere, spend time with each other, just us. But no, uss madam ka favourite word hai no! she has classes it seems. Like seriously man! I was so sweet and romantic this morning and she refused..." he complained, "Ohhhh... toh yeh baath hai" Adi hummed, "I am sure, if that Krish had called her, she would go, why wouldn't she, he is smart, intelligent, a ladies man, oh, he solves mystery, blah and blah" he said rolling his eyes, while Adi laughed. "What?" Ram asked. "I have never seen you this jealous, man" Ram gave him a look, which only made him laugh harder. "Seriously, it is a sight to watch... you getting jealous of Priya and Krish, who are just friends. You never this jealous of Vedika and Shashi... Uhh, I am sorry I didn't mean to bring that up" Adi said scratching the back of his neck embarrassed. "Nah, it's fine. Actually, now that you say, I think you are right. Maybe because my love for Priya is true and deep. With Vedika, I was in love with the idea of love, but with Priya, it's different, I want to be selfish, I want to put my happiness first. That feeling you always talk about when you are with Brinda, I understand it now with Priya." he said proudly. "We've reached" Adi said, parking the car and hugging him, "But I am hungry" Adi pleaded, "Is Priya there?" Ram asked, Adi smirked, "No, she said she had some classes and she went home as it ended. At least that is what Sara told me when I asked her to keep some Choco-vanilla cupcakes" Ram frowned that Priya never informed him, but no, he wasn't gonna call her now. "Well, okay then, I will also have cupcakes" Adi smiled widely, "That's the spirit. You still angry with Priya?" he asked, "I don't know yaar, I want to be, but I am not able to. I guess I'll have a cupcake and then go talk to her." Adi nodded, as they got down. "Brinda called me, I'll just see what, you go inside okay?" he said, Ram gave a thumbs up, as his mouth watered on the thoughts of cupcake.

As he stood at the entrance, the bakery was dark, "Sara di? Hellooo?" he yelled, getting panicky, he was worried that something might have happened, the lights were all off, and the door was open, He entered the bakery, carefully in a karate pose, extending his right hand forward which was rigid and vertical while the left backwards. The moment he entered, lights came on, and he could see Priya standing in front of him in a dark orange sari, looking heavenly. While she looked at him in confusion to his stance. "Mr. Kapoor? Aap yeh kya kar rahe hai?" She said raising her eyebrows. He stood back to his normal way, laughing sheepishly, "Woh... the lights were off, door was open, I thought someone broke in" Priya shook her head, chuckling. That is when Ram saw the bakery, the fairy lights hung up, flowers decorated the wall, a table with a cake and champagne. He went closer to the cake, 'Happy anniversary' was written. He looked up to see Priya but she wasn't there. There was a tap on his back, he turned around, Priya who was standing back now, kneeled down on one knee, shocking the daylights out of him. "Priya...?" he spoke but she cut him, "Shush, you won't utter a word now, it's my turn to speak and you will listen" He was still in daze, "But..." Priya cut him again "Uh- no. I said not a single word" she spoke, he nodded his head.

"Okay, calm down Priya, you can do this, it's Mr. Kapoor, deep breath" she whispered, as Ram stood there looking at her. She looked at him, extended her hand, he placed his in hers, his hands were really soft, she smiled. "I never believed in fairy tales, or happy ever after, or the prince always getting his princess, I never believed in finding happiness in love, enjoying the rains, I never believed in hope. But you barged into my life, changed my beliefs, my thoughts, you changed me to be a better version of myself, a version I have began to love." He could feel his face getting warmer by her words, blushing he smiled. "One year ago, we made a deal that we would never expect anything from this relationship, we would never love each other, and we just are married for the sake of our siblings" she said, as his face dropped a little, she didn't mean that, again right? She continued, "But today, I want to make a new promise, breaking all of that. We have come a long way, from two strangers who never got along to two people who need each other and cannot live without the other. So, Mr. Kapoor will you make this promise with me?" she asked, pulling her hand out of his, and giving him a small wrapped box. He took it curiously and opened it to find a beautiful watch inside. 'FOREVER YOURS' engraved on the back, he traced his fingers on that, overwhelmed by emotions, he teared up. He held the watch in his hand and looked at her, who was looking at him with the same love and passion. "okay... huh" she chuckled, Ram narrowed his eyes in confusion, "I can't believe I'm doing this" she whispered again. She looked into his blue-green eyes that she gets lost in, but before she could drown more, she spoke "You have bewitched me, body and soul and maybe, it is our imperfections that made us so perfect for each other. I love every moment when I am with you. You are the sunshine of my life, the moonlight of my night and the... the love... the love of my life." His eyes widened, did he hear that right, did she just confess, of course he knew she loved him, but hearing that from her made his heart skip a beat. He pulled her into a hug, she reciprocated with the same intensity. After a few good minutes, he made her look at him, "Tell me again" she was confused, "you want me to tell that whole thing again?" she asked, he chuckled, "no, tell me, you..." she kept her finger on the lips shushing him, "I... I love you. I love you Ram, and I want you, all of you, your smile, your laugh, your anger, every flaw, every imperfection. I want you and only you" Ram took her into passionate kiss, it's not their first time, but it was different this time, it was more love filled. "I love you too, Priya." He said panting touching their foreheads together.

After which they cut their cake, fed each other, sitting close by, with his arms around her waist and her head rested on his shoulder. "So, did you like my surprise? Are you still angry at me? I lied about work so that I could prepare all this." She said innocently, "Priya... I... Oh god! I am speechless, I loved all of it, and how long can I stay mad at you? Eventually I have to come back to you right. But what made you do all this?" he asked, she smiled. "Mr. Kapoor, it's just that you do everything for everybody. This time, I wanted to do something, make you feel special, make you feel loved. And you love filmy stuff, so I thought why not?" she said. He laughed, "No one has ever done something like this for me... the way you went on your knees and giving me that watch, I truly do feel like a hero of some movie" he smiled. "Good you felt that way, you know what, I had to watch thirteen, I repeat thirteen rom-coms." He looked at her shock, "The Priya Kapoor, who hates romantic movies watched 13 just for me? I am honored..." he said, "Yes, 7 Hindi and 6 English. Although, theyw ere not that bad you know" she said. "Thank you Priya. You really-" she cut him, "I really didn't have to do this? That is what you were gonna say right?" he nodded, "but how did you know?" she smiled, "I am your wife, I know everything. I know I didn't have to do any of this, but I wanted to. I wanted to show you that, I feel the same way you feel, and just because I cannot express it sometimes, doesn't mean I don't feel it." He kissed her hand, "I know and I love you for that. This was really beautiful. The fact that you did something you don't like for me, just for me, it melts my heart." She blushed. "And I would do these hundred times for you, because I know you would do what I like for me. As I said you bring the best in me" she said. "Are you admitting you like this?" he asked, "I am saying I don't not like this" he looked at her confuse but before he could say something, he heard the rain.

"It's raining Priya!!!" he exclaimed, "No no, Mr. Kapoor" she whined making him frown. "Come on, Priya. You know it's fun" she shook her head, "I think I did enough flimy stuff today"she said. "Uh huh, remember when we watched jab we met, you said it was a nice movie?" he asked, "yeah so?" he smiled, "Do one last thing for me." He said,she knew what he was gonna ask her, she couldn't say no now. "Dance with me to that song?" he gleamed, she gave in and he pulled her out. He put on the song 'Tum Se Hi', dancing and drenching in the rain. "Things I do for you" she said putting her arms around her neck, he gave her a toothy grin, "For me... Happy Anniversary,to today and much more" he said pulling her closer. "Always and forever" she said chuckling, "how many of those lines did you learn?" he asked, "Don't ask me that, I am saving up some for the next time" she replied, "So there is a next time?" he asked smirking, kissing the corner of her lips, "you'll never know" she said smugly, this time taking the lead in kissing him.



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I hoped you liked it... Do tell me how it was, I love it when female leads propose, it's cool. So Ram already did one for Vedika, I felt this time, if Priya did it for him, he would be over the moon.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I'll come back to this later 🤗


I'm so happy I can finally see Ram realising he didn't love Vedika, he found true love in Priya❤️


It was so easy to picturise this happening, I hope this happens in their anniversary if the show is running for that long.


Please continue this scene, I want the after romance!


As always, great work👏

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Thank you for the tag!


Loved the whole role reversal in the confession!! And really, it's only love that makes you want to step out of your comfort zone and do something special for the one you love in a way that they love ❤️

Thank you for writing such a beautiful story!

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It’s sooooooo good! You nailed it bubs 😻😻😻😻

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Thanks for the note, I'm just from work, so I'll read it a little later)

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I totally agree😆


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Originally posted by: Anonymmus

Okay, so I loved Monday's episode (181) Ram's confession was so damn good, and Priya's hesitation was acted out by the actress so well, seriously both of them have amazing chemistry... But this is something I imagined Priya doing after all the VK investigation. So, here goes...


"Brinda, you sure he will like this?" Priya asked. Brinda raised her eyebrows, Sara intervened "Priya, are you sure you wanna do this?" she asked, "Yes, I do, but I am nervous, I have never done anything like this before" Priya said looking at her knotted fingers. "I am very sure he will love this, especially when it's from you. Go for it, you both deserve this." Bri said holding her shaky hands. "okay... let's just check over things once more. Chocolate cake check, ice check, roses check, champagne check, the watch... wait where is the watch?!" Priya asked frightened, "Calm down Priya, it's under the sheet... look... you know what, you drink some water, and please don't get tensed, everything is perfect" Sara assured her. "Hmm... I guess Mr. Kapoor, must be arriving in sometime, Adi should be bringing him here. I hope he is patient enough to listen to me" Priya sighed. Brinda knew what had happened, while Sara questioned, "Well, he has gotten really good at reading me, and I didn't want to ruin this surprise for him. Remember the birthday scene, something similar to that. So, today morning when he asked me that if I was free today so we could spend time and go out, I said no coming with excuses that I have classes. I do feel bad for lying but I only did it for him. Anyways, he got mad, and just stormed out, saying that I don't ever spend time with him, I don't think he is important, he kept going on and on. You know how he is..." Sara nodded and chuckled, "he is gonna be blown away" Bri agreed too, while Priya gave a small smile to both. "Thanks to you both, without whom I would have never been able to do this." The tri shared a hug, and both Sara and Bri wished her all the best.

"I don't have any mood to go to the bakery now" Ram whined, "Ram, what is up with you? From morning you have been grumpy?" Adi asked, "Woh... Priya... I thought today you know, we could go out somewhere, spend time with each other, just us. But no, uss madam ka favourite word hai no! she has classes it seems. Like seriously man! I was so sweet and romantic this morning and she refused..." he complained, "Ohhhh... toh yeh baath hai" Adi hummed, "I am sure, if that Krish had called her, she would go, why wouldn't she, he is smart, intelligent, a ladies man, oh, he solves mystery, blah and blah" he said rolling his eyes, while Adi laughed. "What?" Ram asked. "I have never seen you this jealous, man" Ram gave him a look, which only made him laugh harder. "Seriously, it is a sight to watch... you getting jealous of Priya and Krish, who are just friends. You never this jealous of Vedika and Shashi... Uhh, I am sorry I didn't mean to bring that up" Adi said scratching the back of his neck embarrassed. "Nah, it's fine. Actually, now that you say, I think you are right. Maybe because my love for Priya is true and deep. With Vedika, I was in love with the idea of love, but with Priya, it's different, I want to be selfish, I want to put my happiness first. That feeling you always talk about when you are with Brinda, I understand it now with Priya." he said proudly. "We've reached" Adi said, parking the car and hugging him, "But I am hungry" Adi pleaded, "Is Priya there?" Ram asked, Adi smirked, "No, she said she had some classes and she went home as it ended. At least that is what Sara told me when I asked her to keep some Choco-vanilla cupcakes" Ram frowned that Priya never informed him, but no, he wasn't gonna call her now. "Well, okay then, I will also have cupcakes" Adi smiled widely, "That's the spirit. You still angry with Priya?" he asked, "I don't know yaar, I want to be, but I am not able to. I guess I'll have a cupcake and then go talk to her." Adi nodded, as they got down. "Brinda called me, I'll just see what, you go inside okay?" he said, Ram gave a thumbs up, as his mouth watered on the thoughts of cupcake.

As he stood at the entrance, the bakery was dark, "Sara di? Hellooo?" he yelled, getting panicky, he was worried that something might have happened, the lights were all off, and the door was open, He entered the bakery, carefully in a karate pose, extending his right hand forward which was rigid and vertical while the left backwards. The moment he entered, lights came on, and he could see Priya standing in front of him in a dark orange sari, looking heavenly. While she looked at him in confusion to his stance. "Mr. Kapoor? Aap yeh kya kar rahe hai?" She said raising her eyebrows. He stood back to his normal way, laughing sheepishly, "Woh... the lights were off, door was open, I thought someone broke in" Priya shook her head, chuckling. That is when Ram saw the bakery, the fairy lights hung up, flowers decorated the wall, a table with a cake and champagne. He went closer to the cake, 'Happy anniversary' was written. He looked up to see Priya but she wasn't there. There was a tap on his back, he turned around, Priya who was standing back now, kneeled down on one knee, shocking the daylights out of him. "Priya...?" he spoke but she cut him, "Shush, you won't utter a word now, it's my turn to speak and you will listen" He was still in daze, "But..." Priya cut him again "Uh- no. I said not a single word" she spoke, he nodded his head.

"Okay, calm down Priya, you can do this, it's Mr. Kapoor, deep breath" she whispered, as Ram stood there looking at her. She looked at him, extended her hand, he placed his in hers, his hands were really soft, she smiled. "I never believed in fairy tales, or happy ever after, or the prince always getting his princess, I never believed in finding happiness in love, enjoying the rains, I never believed in hope. But you barged into my life, changed my beliefs, my thoughts, you changed me to be a better version of myself, a version I have began to love." He could feel his face getting warmer by her words, blushing he smiled. "One year ago, we made a deal that we would never expect anything from this relationship, we would never love each other, and we just are married for the sake of our siblings" she said, as his face dropped a little, she didn't mean that, again right? She continued, "But today, I want to make a new promise, breaking all of that. We have come a long way, from two strangers who never got along to two people who need each other and cannot live without the other. So, Mr. Kapoor will you make this promise with me?" she asked, pulling her hand out of his, and giving him a small wrapped box. He took it curiously and opened it to find a beautiful watch inside. 'FOREVER YOURS' engraved on the back, he traced his fingers on that, overwhelmed by emotions, he teared up. He held the watch in his hand and looked at her, who was looking at him with the same love and passion. "okay... huh" she chuckled, Ram narrowed his eyes in confusion, "I can't believe I'm doing this" she whispered again. She looked into his blue-green eyes that she gets lost in, but before she could drown more, she spoke "You have bewitched me, body and soul and maybe, it is our imperfections that made us so perfect for each other. I love every moment when I am with you. You are the sunshine of my life, the moonlight of my night and the... the love... the love of my life." His eyes widened, did he hear that right, did she just confess, of course he knew she loved him, but hearing that from her made his heart skip a beat. He pulled her into a hug, she reciprocated with the same intensity. After a few good minutes, he made her look at him, "Tell me again" she was confused, "you want me to tell that whole thing again?" she asked, he chuckled, "no, tell me, you..." she kept her finger on the lips shushing him, "I... I love you. I love you Ram, and I want you, all of you, your smile, your laugh, your anger, every flaw, every imperfection. I want you and only you" Ram took her into passionate kiss, it's not their first time, but it was different this time, it was more love filled. "I love you too, Priya." He said panting touching their foreheads together.

After which they cut their cake, fed each other, sitting close by, with his arms around her waist and her head rested on his shoulder. "So, did you like my surprise? Are you still angry at me? I lied about work so that I could prepare all this." She said innocently, "Priya... I... Oh god! I am speechless, I loved all of it, and how long can I stay mad at you? Eventually I have to come back to you right. But what made you do all this?" he asked, she smiled. "Mr. Kapoor, it's just that you do everything for everybody. This time, I wanted to do something, make you feel special, make you feel loved. And you love filmy stuff, so I thought why not?" she said. He laughed, "No one has ever done something like this for me... the way you went on your knees and giving me that watch, I truly do feel like a hero of some movie" he smiled. "Good you felt that way, you know what, I had to watch thirteen, I repeat thirteen rom-coms." He looked at her shock, "The Priya Kapoor, who hates romantic movies watched 13 just for me? I am honored..." he said, "Yes, 7 Hindi and 6 English. Although, theyw ere not that bad you know" she said. "Thank you Priya. You really-" she cut him, "I really didn't have to do this? That is what you were gonna say right?" he nodded, "but how did you know?" she smiled, "I am your wife, I know everything. I know I didn't have to do any of this, but I wanted to. I wanted to show you that, I feel the same way you feel, and just because I cannot express it sometimes, doesn't mean I don't feel it." He kissed her hand, "I know and I love you for that. This was really beautiful. The fact that you did something you don't like for me, just for me, it melts my heart." She blushed. "And I would do these hundred times for you, because I know you would do what I like for me. As I said you bring the best in me" she said. "Are you admitting you like this?" he asked, "I am saying I don't not like this" he looked at her confuse but before he could say something, he heard the rain.

"It's raining Priya!!!" he exclaimed, "No no, Mr. Kapoor" she whined making him frown. "Come on, Priya. You know it's fun" she shook her head, "I think I did enough flimy stuff today"she said. "Uh huh, remember when we watched jab we met, you said it was a nice movie?" he asked, "yeah so?" he smiled, "Do one last thing for me." He said,she knew what he was gonna ask her, she couldn't say no now. "Dance with me to that song?" he gleamed, she gave in and he pulled her out. He put on the song 'Tum Se Hi', dancing and drenching in the rain. "Things I do for you" she said putting her arms around her neck, he gave her a toothy grin, "For me... Happy Anniversary,to today and much more" he said pulling her closer. "Always and forever" she said chuckling, "how many of those lines did you learn?" he asked, "Don't ask me that, I am saving up some for the next time" she replied, "So there is a next time?" he asked smirking, kissing the corner of her lips, "you'll never know" she said smugly, this time taking the lead in kissing him.



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I hoped you liked it... Do tell me how it was, I love it when female leads propose, it's cool. So Ram already did one for Vedika, I felt this time, if Priya did it for him, he would be over the moon.

Wow just wow, You really have a great talent for writing. Keep it up and do tag in your next one. ❤️

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Thank you so much❤️ I sure will😆

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I loved ram saying that with vedika he was I love with the idea of being in love but with priya his love was deep.priya's confession dialogues..ram kissing her...dance n priya kissing ram were very romantic.

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Loved the whole confession scene...from the Setup where Pri is taking help from Ram's actual closest Bri, Sara & Adi

Ram realising that he didn't love Vedika - Kaash, yeh show ke writers bhi itni maturity dikha paate❤️


Priya pulled off the Filmy dialogues effortlessly & in style so Kudos to my girl🤗


Loved the Ram asking her to dance with him on 'Tum Se Hi' ...made the moment a complete PriRa one


You're Awesome 🔥

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