Originally posted by: twerping
LOVED IT!!!!!
You know, after reading the first two OS s I actually started watching the show but is it ever as good as the way you write them? A firm and definite NO! I will go back to the show at some point and catch up on episodes and see whether they explore the facets of these two characters the way you have or been able to bring out the joy of getting these two oddballs together and finding happiness in each other...but till then, it is here in your writing.
I loved the fact that Vedika sees them.. because that is exactly the kind of cathartic pleasure we as viewers need to see. After all the rejections, insults and basic humiliation that both have had to live through and with, this joy, this warmth that we find in them here is what my romantic soul craves for.
Needless to say I loved the subtlety of the whole scenario, the understated yet powerful romance and chemistry that you have brought out here. Please write more. And soon! Eagerly waiting!
Twerps! 🤗
Thank you! Ah, yes. Pretty much the entire forum would agree that the CVs are wasting time on a lot of silly things over exploring the dynamics and potential between these two.
Vedika always comes across so confused in the show that I really wanted to write on her and explore her thoughts. I'm glad people have liked the output. 😆 And given that I needed to add that of romance for her to witness, I set it in the future.
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