PriRa OS ~ Jaan - Page 2

Wow! I loved how we go through Vedika's emotions in this OS. The fact that she realises that Shashi & her couldn't have a much deeper Relationship cos she got stuck between the two in an amateurish way.

Well, I hope in 2 years Akshay & the Sood're able to turn Shivina into the one you wrote here....a sister who understands what Ram did for her even as a StepBrother

There're so many small details & big life-decisions captured here & I love each bit

If you do have an index for your previous works for other shows as well here or on any other forum - could you Please share the links with me - I would love to read all your work😳

Just brilliant👍🏼

Really made my day

The way you have written about Ram & Priya was beautiful.

Looking forward to reading more of your work in future

Thanks for the PM ❤️

Its so beautifully written and emotions portrayed were just perfect.

Loved reading this and I could easily picture this happening or would love to see this happen in the show.

Awesome beautiful one sarcy🤗. I hope this vedika part is shown for real in this serial would love to see her face😆. Beautiful story🤗❤️

Another masterpiece of yours well layed out. Couldn't help but laugh at Vedika's state. One never realizes the true value of people or things unless they see it with someone else. Thanks for the message. 😊

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Wow!

Lovely OS.

I so want something like this to happen in the show.

That selfish vedika should see how perfect much in love ram and priya are as a couple. She should burn in jealousy😆

Thank you! Till we don't get something like this in the show, I'm going to continue writing it to fulfill our wishes. 😆

Vedika seems so confused half the times. Sometimes she's happy with Shashi, sometimes she happy when Ram is pining for her. Then she's happy that Ram is getting married and then she's not. 🤪But her face will be worth-watching when she realises that Ram has actually fallen for Priya. 🤣

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Thank you! Till we don't get something like this in the show, I'm going to continue writing it to fulfill our wishes. 😆

Vedika seems so confused half the times. Sometimes she's happy with Shashi, sometimes she happy when Ram is pining for her. Then she's happy that Ram is getting married and then she's not. 🤪But her face will be worth-watching when she realises that Ram has actually fallen for Priya. 🤣

yes cvs to pata nahi kab hamari wishes puri karenge. thanks for fulfilling it here.

keep writing on jalkukdi vedika and annoying nandini😆

I love everything you write and I especially love how you choose to write PriRa's relationship through other people's eyes. In Towards Her, it was Ram's friends and here, it's Vedika. Her fear, her jealousy, her embarrassment - it could easily overtake the OS, but PriRa was still the central focus (Teach me your ways!).

I also adore your portrayal of Shivina because this is kind of how I wish she could've been written and hope she is later on.

ok i love this so hoping we can see this in serial